Title: No Hay Igual
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Misundaztood17 - June 3, 2008 03:57 PM (GMT)
Title: No Hay Igual
Author: ME!
Disclaimer: Not mine...just the idea.
Summary: Drama-rama for Teenage Dom & Letty...'nuff said.
Feedback: HELL YEAH!
Rating: R for language, drama and violence!
Chapter One: Stare Much...?
It’s a Friday night…one of the hottest of the summer. The A.C. in my house has been busted for years but my folks are usually too wasted to notice.
Normally I’d have been at Johnny’s race, on the other side of town, but they’d declared the last race the end of the season. Sitting at home is driving me crazy. Johnny and I werent exactly on the greatest of terms.
I didn’t have at the races to know that Dom’s probably with another random skank…but I can’t help wondering which one it is this time.
I hope he's not still with the same girl, the one from before summer. But that's ridiculous...it was be unheard of for him to be with the same girl for that long. Still, the last time I’d tried calling his cell phone, the girl who picked up had sounded just like her. The very thought of it pissed me off beyond belief—at him, for being such a player; at myself, for giving a damn about who he might be with...but mostly at Johnny, 'cause it was his stupid ass who refused to let her go to the races.
“Fuck this.” I muttered to myself, grabbing my cell. I called Vince, praying he was still close by. “Hey, you still at home?”
“Naw, girl. On my way to the races. Why?”
“Come get me.”
“Don’ know about that, now, Letty girl.” He said.
“V…you are gonna come pick me up, or I'm gonna beat your ass Monday.”
“Fine. Goddamn, why you gotta be so fuckin’ pushy?!”
“Whatever, Vince.” This argument bored me already.
At the races, I found Mia and was soon on the phone with Vince again…trying to get an answer on what the hell was wrong with Dom.
“V, what the fuck is your boy's problem tonight?”
“What’re you talkin’ about, Letty?”
“He keeps fuckin’ starin’ at me…”
“Like you ain’ interested…” Vince snorted. “Probly starin’ at some skank close to ya, girl.”’
“Fuck you, V.”
“Not in this lifetime, chica.”
“I’m tellin’ you…he's actin' weird. Better get his shit together if he's racing.” I snapped at him.
“Whatever, girl.” Vince snorted again. “’s not like he’s lookin’ to fuck ya.”
“An’ I didn’t say he was, did I?” I shot back.
“Chill, Lett.”
“Whatever, V.” I was fuming and wanting to hang up on his ass.
“Pop a midol, why don’t you?” vince muttered, thinking I wouldn’t hear it.
“What the fuck did you just say to me, Vince?”
“Go. Pop. A. Fuckin'. Midol!”
I stood up on my toes, searching the crowd, trying to figure out exactly where Vince was at.
“You're gonna regret that, V...”
“Uh-huh. Keep tellin yourself that, Lett…”
“You don’t think I can kick your ass?” I asked, rolling my eyes. “I fight dirty, remember?”
“I think Dom ain' gonna let it happen…”
“And how the fuck is he gonna stop me?” I snarled into the phone.
“Cool your pistons, you crazy Latina!”
“Yeah, well stop bein’ such an ass!”
“Look, you crazy chica...he's not interested in you, so lay off!”
“Look, V. I'm gonna say this real slow, so you get it. I never said he was interested in me. I said he keeps starin' and it's fuckin' creepy!” I swear that boy was so fuckin’ stupid sometimes!
“'s probly starin' at Camille, Letty.”
“Camille ain’t anywhere over here, Vince.” I snorted.
“Okay….Monica, then.”
“You know that bitch don't come near me either…”
“Then for all i know, the man's got a new fuck interest.” Vince settled.
“Well you should do 'im a favor, tell 'im he ain't gonna get in her pants lookin' like a fuckin' stalker!” I was almost shouting into the phone.
“I was talkin' about you, Vargas!”
“What?”
“Did I stutter, girl?”
“Well you ain't makin' much sense…” I said.
“All I'm sayin' is if he's starin in your direction, but there ain' a skank, you done somethin' to get his attention…”
“Like WHAT?!”
“Hell if I know and hell if I care!. I ain’t lookin to fuck the man.”
“Like I am?” I snort. “I’m over that, V.”
“Whatever, crazy lady. You know you want him.”
“I’m with JOHNNY, now, ‘member, V?”
“Probably what got Dom’s attention.”
“What, he decides he wants me 'cause he can't have me now?” I said, muttering to myself, “Guys are suck pricks.”
“We all know you went with Johnny cause Dom’s got shit for brains.”
“Yeah, well, I’m done waitin’ around for him, V.”
“Yeah, well, tell Dom that when…” he muttered somethin about mornin' wood that I didn’t quite catch.
“What, V?”
“Didn’t say nothin', girl.” He dodged the question.
“Whatever. They racing or what?” I asked.
“Go ask…” Vince dared me, “might wind up gettin' that Frencher you've been droolin over since before you got with the prick…”
“I’m not talkin’ to ‘im, V, remember?”
“Then you won't mind me tellin you he stares at your ass when you ain'
lookin, and down your shirt, among other things.” Vince said. I could almost hear the laughter in his voice.
“I fuckin’ told you he was starin’ at me!” I shrieked.
“Right, right...what i said earlier was he gets off on you, girlfight.” I don’t know why, but my heart stopped for a second when he said that.
“Yeah, sure, V,” I snorted. “He tell you that or somethin'?”
“I hear a LOT of things I don' wanna hear, girl.” Vince said, sounding nauseated at the thought. “Trust me. he wants you.”
“He’s got a damn weird way of showin' it, if you're right…” I said. I couldn’t believe I was even considering giving any credibility.
“Whaddya want him ta do, girl? Write it on a fuckin' billboard?!”
“Maybe…” I laughed. “He might start by tryin' to talk to me…”
“Lemme put it this way: 'member when he broke that intake last month?”
“Yeah…”
“He did that when he found out you were still with Johnny.” Vince said, “was thinkin' about askin you out or somethin. nearly decked me for tellin' him…”
“Well...tell 'im he hasn't shown me a single fuckin' reason i shouldn't still be with Johnny… wouldn't even answer the phone all the times I tried callin' 'im over the summer.” I wasn’t sure where this conversation was going, and wasn’t sure I wanted to find out.
“Look, I didn’t wanna tell you this, but…”
“What?”
“Dom an' I saw Johnny with some chick...one of your old friends or somethin'...Marisol Nunez I think. They were all over each other; damn near goin' at it in public, man.” I’d known about Marisol and Johnny, but hearing it from Vince just made me sick to my stomach.
“That ain't Dom showin' me why I shouldn't still be with Johnny. an' trust me...Johnny's already given me plenty of reasons…"
“What do you want him to do?!” Vince roared at me over the phone.
“Like I said...actually talkin' to me might be a start.”
“Boy’d probably wind up kissin you before he said anything.” Vince snorted at me.
“An' that would be a problem...how?” I was being ridiculous and we both knew it.
“What, you wouldn't knock 'im one if he tongued you?!”
“He’ll have to try it to find out.”
Vince hung up on me…he fuckin’ hung up on me!!
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Vince’s POV
“Dom…yeah, man. You’re good to go.” I said before hanging up again. He knew what I meant.
“What the fuck was that?!” Letty demanded
“Watch and see, girl.” I growled. “Here he comes.”
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Letty’s POV
“I’m gonna kill you, Vince…”
Dom was less than 3 feet away from me and getting closer…I watched him, arms folded over my chest and looked up at him.
“Dom…what the hell?”
He took my face in his hands.
I heard a growl from low in his chest as he pulled me to him.
He pulled my face to his, kissing me before I could finish my sentence.
His tongue grazed my lips, seeking permission.
Before I knew what I was doing, I’d opened my mouth slightly against his, making him moan.
One of his hands went to the small of my back as he eased his tongue into the kiss.
I wrapped my arms around his neck, pulling him closer to me.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Dom’s POV
“Letty…” I groaned against her mouth. I felt my dick stir.
“You like that…?” she pulled away from me.
“Love it…” I pulled her back into the kiss, hands knotted gently in her hair.
She kissed me again…harder, her tongue fighting mine.
“Love you…” I growled in her ear. “Leave him…”
I should have seen it coming, but I didn’t.
She pulled away from me, reached back and let loose with a right hook, slamming into my jaw.
“What the hell, Letty?!”
karikocha - June 3, 2008 04:46 PM (GMT)
Interesting start.
Wonder how Johnny'll fit into everything.
Catalinay - June 3, 2008 04:48 PM (GMT)
I :wub: this fic so much, Mimi!
My favorite part?
| QUOTE |
I should have seen it coming, but I didn’t.
She pulled away from me, reached back and let loose with a right hook, slamming into my jaw.
“What the hell, Letty?!”
|
Misundaztood17 - June 3, 2008 04:51 PM (GMT)
Catalinay - June 3, 2008 05:05 PM (GMT)
Second favorite part...
| QUOTE |
“V…you are gonna come pick me up, or I'm gonna beat your ass Monday.”
“Fine. Goddamn, why you gotta be so fuckin’ pushy?!”
“Whatever, Vince.” This argument bored me already. |
Kaylas_Tearz - June 3, 2008 05:40 PM (GMT)
Love it! Letty and Vince's whole conversation was my favorite, it was too funny.
Nakita1031 - June 3, 2008 05:42 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
| “Cool your pistons, you crazy Latina!” |
You know I like that part, lol.
Great job!
Misundaztood17 - June 3, 2008 05:44 PM (GMT)
y'all might just get the next part some time this afternoon!
Catalinay - June 3, 2008 07:18 PM (GMT)
Oh please...I have a *long* afternoon of supervising miscreants in Tuesday school stretching before me....
Misundaztood17 - June 3, 2008 08:04 PM (GMT)
Chapter Two: Three Words
Letty’s POV
I’d just decked him. I decked him for kissing me—for doing the thing I WANTED him to do!
“What the hell, Letty?!”
“Yeah...that's what I was wonderin' too, dom.” I said, flexing my hand. “Question is, d'you want me 'cause of me, or just 'cause I'm with him?”
“Wanted you 'fore summer break, Letty...”
“Strange...'s not how I remember it… I 'member you fuckin' around with every girl you could get your hands on.” I bit out.
“Because I couldn’t have YOU!”
“An’ that was your own damn fault, wasn't it?”
"I couldn’t' have you. not the way I really wanted you.”
“You coulda had me any way you wanted me, Dominic.” I sighed. “Back then, at least.”
“’s why Johnny’s fuckin' Marisol Nunez ?” he asked me.
“I said you coulda had me.” I repeated, slowly.
“If he had you, really fuckin’ had you, he wouldn’t be fuckin' your best friend, would he?!” he snapped at me.
“I never said he had me, Dominic.”
“You’re with him, aren’t you?” Dom shot back.
“We’re together,” I shrugged.
“You could have better.” He told me.
“Yeah, well,” I said, looking at all the skanks at the races that night. “You coulda, too, Dom…”
“I still want you, Leticia…” his mouth was close enough to my ear that I could feel his breath on my skin.
“’s that why you haven't talked to me since I left?” I ask, not looking in his eyes. I was almost scared to ask the question.
“I couldn’t look at you without wanting to kill Johnny, Lett.” He explained.
“Wanna kill ‘im now?” I ask, already knowing the answer.
Dom’s POV
“Wanna kill ‘im now?” She asked, already knowing the answer.
“More than ever…” I growled in her ear.
“But you're talkin' to me...” she said.
“And dying to shove my tongue down your throat,” I laughed.
“Even if it gets you hit again?” she was laughing again, and it was music to my ears.
“You kissed me back, Letty…” I smirked at her.
“And…?”
“Means you wanted it...least a little bit.” I said, grabbing her face and kissing her again. I kissed her harder this time, but it was slower, gentler. I whispered, “I love you, Letty…”
“Maybe I was just settin’ you up for the punch,” Letty said, trying not to show a reaction. But she couldn’t help shivering at my touch. “Think of that?”
“You don’ hit a man for no fuckin' reason, Lett.”
“So why'd I hit you, then?”
“Cause I hurt you…over and over and over again, Letty.”
Letty’s POV
“Cause I hurt you...over and over and over again, Letty.”
“An’ you think you can make up for that…?” I asked, more than a little surprised he was admitting this.
“Maybe, maybe not. but I'm damn sure gonna try...”
“An’ how you planning on doing it?” I asked, shivering.
“I'm already under your skin, girl.”
“You think so?” I asked, cocking my head to one side, looking at him.
“One way to find out.” He said.
“What’s that?”
“If you don't love me...even a little bit, you won't kiss me back...” he pulled me back to him, kissing me slowly, softly.
“Dammit, Dominic…” I moan against his lips. I leaned into the kiss, kissing him back. He eased his tongue into my mouth, nudging mine.
“Oh, Letty…” he moaned into my mouth. His hands settled on my waist. “Wrap your legs around me, Letty…need to hold you…”
I couldn’t believe I was giving into him, but I went with it as he bent down, hands moving around my thighs. My legs wrapped around his waist, resting my arms on his shoulders.
“Y’love me, Lett?” he whispered, almost growling.
“Yeah, Dom…” I sighed. “I do…”
Dom’s POV
“Y’love me, Lett?” I whispered, almost growling.
“Yeah, Dom…” Letty sighed. “I do…”
“Wanna be with me…?” I whispered as she kissed me softly.
“Yeah, you know I do…” she said softly.
“Leave him…?” I asked quietly.
“Hard to do, Dom…” she murmured.
“You been with him…?” I ask, my throat tightening as I spoke.
“Nah…been puttin 'im off…”
“You want him…?” I growl in her ear.
“’s not like that…” she sighed.
“Letty..” I sighed.
“Yeah…?”
“Do you want him…?” I asked, slowly, clearly.
“I just said no, didn’t I?”
“I love you, Letty..."
“Yeah…?”
“Don’ do it with him, girl...” I whispered against her neck.
“An’ why shouldn’t I?”
Letty’s POV
“Don’ do it with him, girl...” he whispered against my neck.
“An’ why shouldn’t I?” I asked, teasing.
“That ain' funny, girl.”
“No?” I shrugged. “I ain' gonna sleep with him, Dom. Not in that way, 'least…” he kissed me.
“You savin’ it for someone, Lett?” he asked against my lips.
“Wouldn’t you like to know…” I whispered back.
“Love you…” he moaned. “Hurts how much I love you, Letty...”
“Yeah, well,” I said, “I been hurtin', lovin' you for a while now, y'know. Maybe it's your turn…”
“Letty…don’t do that…”
“What, Dom? Don’t do what…?”
“Don’ play stupid, Letty.” He murmured. “You know what I’m sayin’.”
“Well, it’s true.”
“Letty, listen to me. I love you…I want you…”
“I’m listening…” I told him. “Maybe I just want you to do a little more persuading'.”
“I wanna be with you…really be with you.”
“An’ what exactly d'you mean by that?” I asked.
Dom’s POV
“I wanna be with you…really be with you.”
“An’ what exactly d'you mean by that?” she asked.
I swallowed hard and realised that she was gonna make me say it.
“I wanna be with you…be your first…” I whispered in her ear, kissing her neck right below her neck.
“An’ then…?” she shivered at my touch.
“Be with you…as long as you’ll have me…”
“No runnin' back to the skanks after I let you pop my cherry?” she asked, softly.
“Ain’ had a skank in 6 months, Letty...” I moan.
“Oh, really? So how you been handlin' yourself then, papi?” she asked, kissing my neck.
“Cold showers been my best friend lately, mami...”
“So how long you been thinkin' bout me like this?” she asked, nipping my neck this time.
Michelle2686 - June 3, 2008 08:19 PM (GMT)
the whole conversation with letty and V was funny in the first chapter.
cant wait to read more.
Catalinay - June 3, 2008 08:23 PM (GMT)
:squee: Seriously, I don't think I can pick out a favorite part of this chapter...I love the whole thing so much!
rosedragon - June 3, 2008 09:00 PM (GMT)
Girl why didnt you tell me there is a new story... :P
Ok Letty with Johhny tran or a different guy name johhny
| QUOTE |
| “Did I stutter, girl?” |
I love that Line...i love Vince LOL :D
I love it ..update SOON!
karikocha - June 3, 2008 11:51 PM (GMT)
Misundaztood17 - June 7, 2008 05:46 PM (GMT)
A/N: To the Mods: if anything in this chapter's deemed inappropriate, please feel free to let me know!
Chapter Three: Reflections
“Cold showers been my best friend lately, mami...”
“So how long you been thinkin' bout me like this?” I ask, nipping his neck this time.
“Long enough to know I love you, Letty...only you, mami…” he moaned against my skin.
“If you hurt me again, Dom…” I said, about to warn him when he cut me off.
“Never mami…never again…”
“Good…” I said, still kissing at his neck, “'Cause I'll cut your dick off an' feed it to you. Jus' to let you know in advance…” I rocked against him, teasing.
“Only you, mami…”
“I was bein' serious, though, Dom.” I said after a moment. “Ain' gonna be easy for me to break it off with him…” I watch his face, gauging his reaction.
“I'll wait for you, mami…see you whenever you can…be with you as much as I can…” he’s whispering in my ear. The heat of his breath has me in shivers.
“Yeah?” I ask, kissing him softly. “Okay…”
“So beautiful, mija…even before I knew it…”
“Not too bad lookin' yourself, y'know…” I tease back. “Damn fine, actually.”
“Make me wanna do things wit you that'll get me in trouble, mija…”
“Oh, yeah?” I laugh, “like what…?”
“Wanna make love to you, mami…” Dom said, feeling his groin tighten. “Be with you all the damn time…”
“Sounds nice…” I said, moving my hips against him, watching his face.
“Mami…” he moaned. “Got me wantin’ you…” his grip on my hips tightened as he tried to still my hips.
“Sucks to be on the other side of that, don't it?” I mumbled in his ear. “Had my first orgasm thinkin' 'bout you, Dom…”
His hips jerked against mine as I said this, catching my lips in a bruising kiss.
“Mami…wanna love you.” He whispered, kissing my chin. “Real thing’s better, baby…”
“Can’t wait…”
“What..?” he asked, breathing hitched.
Dom’s POV
“Can’t wait…”
“What..?” I asked, breathing hitched.
“Lookin’ forward to it…” she said again, lips right on top of mine.
“Whaddyou want, mami...'ll make it happen.” I tell her, still holding her to me.
“Think you could gimme a sneak preview?”
“Mami...I do that I'ma lose control.” I moan against her skin. “Wanna love you the right way…”
“You’re such a tease, Dom!” she pouted. “Tellin’ me you'll make it happen an' then makin' me wait…”
“’m not gonna fuck you in the car, Leticia…” I told her. “…Deserve better…”
Letty’s POV
“’m not gonna fuck you in the car, Leticia…” he told me. “…Deserve better…”
“Can’t do anything for me here?” I pled, hoping I’d at least get a little attention from him.
“Whatchu want, ruca…” he asks, even though I’m making it hard for him to control himself.
“How’m I supposed to know what I want? You're the slutty one, here…” I said, leaning in and kissing him, my hands supporting my weight against his chest.
“What’d you think of me doin'...?” he groaned.
“When?” I asked, pretending I’d already forgotten what I said earlier.
“You know when, ruca…” I could have sworn he got harder as he said that.
“That was like two years ago, Dom…” I said, laughing. “You 'spect me to remember what I thought about you doin' to me? Mostly just…touchin' me, an' shit like that…”
“Killed me when you went to Japan…” he groaned. I could tell he meant it; I’d seen proof of it, too…he’d been in a shitty mood since before I’d gone over there.
“You didn't exactly make me think there was anythin' worth stickin' around here for…” I answered softly as he leaned against the hood of his car, arms still holding me to him.
“Didn’t wanna talk to you cause I missed you…” he said slowly.
Dom’s POV
“You didn't exactly make me think there was anythin' worth stickin' around here for…” she answered softly as I leaned against the hood of my car, arms still holding her to me.
“Didn’t wanna talk to you cause I missed you…” I said slowly.
“Well, that makes a lot of sense…” she replied, almost sounding sarcastic.
“’M serious, Lett…” I growled. “Was the longest summer of my life…”
“An’ you don't think talkin' to me would've made it better?” she pouted, looking like she was about to hate me.
“Not when it left me so hard I couldn’t fuckin' move.” She smiled again.
“I do that to you?” she had a smirk on her face I knew all to well. “Well…maybe I coulda talked you outta that or somethin'…helped you out a bit…”
Catalinay - June 7, 2008 08:57 PM (GMT)
So happy to see an update! :lol:
Favorite part:
| QUOTE |
“Mami…” he moaned. “Got me wantin’ you…” his grip on my hips tightened as he tried to still my hips.
“Sucks to be on the other side of that, don't it?” I mumbled in his ear. “Had my first orgasm thinkin' 'bout you, Dom…”
His hips jerked against mine as I said this, catching my lips in a bruising kiss.
|
Misundaztood17 - June 14, 2008 07:16 PM (GMT)
Chapter Four:
“My right hand was like my best friend that summer, baby…” Dom growled in my ear.
“An’ what’d you think about?” I asked, completely innocently.
“You...only you...how fuckin beautiful you were in those ratty coveralls...” Now he was smiling at something. “How beautiful you were in those shirts you stole from me...”
“Didn’t think 'bout doing anything to me?” I asked, trying not to sound disappointed. “Only 'bout how beautiful I am?”
“Thought about the things I'd do to you...make you feel...once I could get you alone...ran outta soap once at the shop...smelled like you for a solid month…”
“An’ what kinda things you gonna do to me?” I asked, rocking slowly against his hips.
“Baby…you gotta stop that...” he groaned. “Just stay still, huh?”
“Sorry…” I tell him, smirking softly.
“Thought about how you taste, mami…” he groaned at the effect his words were having on him. “Tastin’ that candy you're always suckin on…on your lips…”
“An’ do I taste as good as you thought I would?” I asked, now interested. “You didn't eat all the candy I had stashed at the garage, did you?”
“Taste better, mija…” he moaned into my neck. “What stash, baby?”
“Good.” I laughed, “'d hate to have to kick your ass over that...”
“Your pops know you're here...?” he asked, killing the moment.
“Yeah right...what d'*you* think?” I retorted. “Snuck out the window...Vince picked me up on the corner.”
“Stay wit me tonight?” he asked, smiling at me.
“Yeah, ‘d love to…” I said, sighing into him.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
“Why does Edwin keep racing if he never wins?” I asked as we walked into the house and up the stairs to Dom’s room.
“No idea...don't mind takin' his money, though.” He laughed.
I snorted, leaning against the doorway of Dom's room.
“What?” Dom asked.
“Some things never change.” I said, shaking my head as I surveyed the destruction that was his bedroom.
“C’mon, Letty…’s not that bad.”
“True…” I admitted. “'s still cleaner than my whole house…”
He sighed as he cleared things from the bed.
“How’s it been over there, lately?”
“Same shit as always...Mom's always high as a fuckin' kite or passed out and the less I see of my father, the better. 'm lucky he's usually too drunk to beat up on me any more.” I say.
Dom rubbed a hand over his head, walked over and wrapped his arms around me.
“'m sorry if i've made it harder on you...bein' stupid an' shit…”
“'s not your fault...not like you made the bastard hit me.” I told him.
“Yeah...but if you ever felt like you couldn't come over here to get away from it...'cause I was bein' a dick or somethin'...”
“Trust me, I can handle you... its my DAD I can't handle.” I said, irritated.
“Wish I could get you away from 'im…” Dom murmured into my hair.
“Knock me up or marry my ass are your best bets.” I laugh, joking.
“Yeah…” Dom said slowly, not letting on what he was already thinking of.
“Believe me, I’ve thought about it.” I tell him. “Not a lot of options that would work very well.” He didn’t say anything, he just pulled me tighter to him.
Nakita1031 - June 14, 2008 11:28 PM (GMT)
Haha teen Dotty angst. Gotta love it. :)
I always wanted to do a strictly pre-Dotty fic, but I already have like 3 unfinished fics to work on. lol Bravo to you to be able to juggle all your fics and keep updating them all. Good work chic! ;)
Misundaztood17 - June 14, 2008 11:32 PM (GMT)
hehe...ive still got a couple that have been basically abandoned, lmao...both sanas, the Vince/Mia fic, and the Vince/OFC fic, lmao...
as for you, Mistress of Cliffhangers, ANIMAL uppage?? please???!
Catalinay - June 15, 2008 12:33 AM (GMT)
Yay! I have been *waiting* for more of this! 'Course, now I want more again already....
I want to know what Dom's "already thinking of"!
Misundaztood17 - June 19, 2008 04:05 PM (GMT)
Chapter Five:
Dominic couldn’t believe he was at school so early. He'd have liked to pretend it was all Mia's doing, but...he was looking forward to seeing Letty again. They hadn't seen each other at all since that night at the races. They’d talked on the phone, some, but it wasn't the same.
He’d been slouching against the wall, waiting to catch a glimpse of her, for what seemed like forever. He figured her first stop would be her locker. Finally, about 10 minutes before the bell, he saw her.
'Course, she was with him.
Quickly, he ducked around the corner, keeping an eye on them as best he could.
Dominic had to get her alone.
He groaned, seeing them walk away from her locker. Almost ready to give up and head to his first class, something made him wait.
Sure enough, she turned back before they got to the end of the hall, coming back to her locker alone as Johnny kept going. Dom waited until he saw Johnny turn the corner before stepping back into the hall.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
As usual, Letty arrived with Johnny. He was droning on about something she couldn’t have given less of a damn about. They arrived with about 10 minutes to spare. Letty sent a silent prayer up that she'd see Dom.
As usual, Johnny monopolized her time so that she had none left to catch Mia before the bell rang…and get a chance to see Dom. When she and Johnny got to the end of the hall, Letty turned back, heading towards her locker...thank God Johnny kept moving.
Dom watched her fiddling with her locker, struggling with it a bit. He started walking towards her...a little surprised she didn't notice him behind her. Finally, he stood right behind her, wrapping his arms around her waist and pulling Letty back against him.
“Miss me?” he murmured in her ear, smirking when he heard her groan.
“God yes…” she groaned.
He couldn't keep himself from nuzzling Letty’s neck a little, even though he knew it’d get them busted if someone saw…everybody knew she was with Johnny. Suddenly an idea came to his head.
It was crazy.
But it would get them some time together.
“’d you mind missing today?” he asked, his voice rough.
Letty’s heart skipped a beat at Dom’s suggestion. She turned to face him, pulling Dom into a kiss.
“Where...?” Dom wracked his brain for a minute, barely able to think with Letty’s mouth against his.
“The pier?” he finally suggested.
The only response Letty could render was a moan and a slight nod of her head. Her hands were fisted in Dom’s shirt, deepening the kiss.
“Now…?”
“Yeah...better to miss the whole day…” he answered, pulling away from her a little before they got totally carried away. “C’mon?” he asked, nodding towards the parking lot.
Letty nodded eagerly, almost desperate to have Dom to herself without having to worry about Johnny.
“Hey…” she pulled him back to her, close enough that their lips were almost touching. “I love you.”
“Love you, too, Letty…” Dom mumbled against her mouth. He grabbed hold of Letty’s hand, practically pulling her down the hall.
With any luck, they’d be out of there before the final bell rang.
Once they were off campus and on the main road, Letty managed to find her voice.
“God, I’ve missed you…”
“Can’t stop thinking 'bout you, Letty.” Dom said, turning a bit to look at her, placing his hand on her thigh.
His hand on her thigh sent shivers down Letty’s back. It was all she could do not to move into his lap and kiss him senseless. But she really didn't feel like getting busted for skipping on the *first* day of school.
“They won't call home today...figure half the school's still in mexico.” Dom explained, trying to reassure Letty that they weren't doing something totally crazy. “You can tell whoever that your paperwork got screwed up, you had to wait around in the office all day. 've seen it happen every year, so far.” Dom told her, thinking, ‘Shit, who am I kidding, this is totally crazy…’.
Letty twisted so she was leaning against the car door to look at him.
God he’s beautiful…
“Missed you…” she said.
“Said that already,” Dom teased, smirking at her.
“Don’ care…” Letty said, shrugging her shoulders. “He drove me crazy…”
“Drove me crazy,” Dom answered, “not getting to see you…what’d he do…?”
“Just made *damn* sure to have plans with me every day.” Letty groaned.
“All day?” Dom questioned. Okay, so maybe he wanted a little reassurance.
“Dawn to dusk…”
“Yeah…figured, when i didn't see you around at all.” Dom said.
“Guy’s like a fuckin’ leech…paranoid, too…” Letty moaned.
“How so…?” Dom questioned, genuinely curious.
He and Johnny’d never liked each other. They mostly just stayed away. Dom couldn't even remember how it'd started…some shit at the races, probably.
“Stalker-ish…” Letty explained. “Always some reason to be around me…”
Dom grabbed her hand and lifted it to his mouth, kissing it.
“Ever try…” he started, not quite sure how to put this. He’d said he would wait for Letty, as long as it took, and he would, but… “try breakin' things off with him yet?”
“’s like he can smell it comin'....changes the subject before i can get the words "its over" outta my mouth…” Letty whined.
“Gotta find a way to see you more often, Letty…” Dom sighed in frustration, “’s driving me crazy…”
Letty went quiet for a moment, wracking her brain for some time they could see each other.
“He’s runnin' cross country...” she said, “'s usually too tired to do anything after a meet...'d free up my weekends...” Letty shrugged her shoulders. “Means I could go to football games an' shit...maybe break that jacket of yours in...?”
“’d be nice…” Dom murmured, kissing Letty’s hand again. “Nice to see you wearin' my jacket...give you some time to spend with Mia an' Dad. They've missed you too, y'know…”
Letty sighed and smiled at him when he kissed her hand again.
“I miss them, too...you're gonna have to be back for practice, though, aren't you...?” she asked.
Catalinay - June 19, 2008 04:11 PM (GMT)
Love it! Want more already! :lol: Fluffy but still with a hint of angst...
karikocha - June 19, 2008 04:54 PM (GMT)
Misundaztood17 - June 22, 2008 03:55 PM (GMT)
Chapter Six:
“Yeah…not till four, though,” Dom muttered, “Short day today, just the weight circuit; got plenty of time to spend with you.”
Letty smiled at the thought of how Dom smelled after weight training. It made her shiver a little, exciting her.
“Yeah?”
“Yeah…” Dom said, glancing over at her. “Be done early, if you wanted to hang out after...come over for dinner or somethin’.”
“We’ll see…” Right then Letty was more focused on getting to the beach and having Dominic to herself and not care who saw them together.
Dom’d kept his hand on Letty’s, or on her thigh, as much as possible during the drive. He didn't want to stop touching her. When they got out of the car, he wrapped his arm around her shoulder, hugging her close to him as they looked out to the water.
“Wanna break in that jacket now?” he asked, feeling her shiver.
“Sure…” Letty said, smiling at him. She ached to kiss him.
Dominic turned away from her, rummaging in the backseat for a minute before pulling out his letter jacket.
“Here…” He murmured, placing it gently around her shoulders, “Better?”
Letty nodded, her hands moving to his neck as she kissed him
“I love you…” she whispered, simply for the hell of saying it.
“I love you, too, Letty…” Dom groaned, deepening the kiss, his tongue gently pushing into her mouth, arms wrapping around her waist, under his jacket.
She groaned into the kiss, eagerly kissing him back, arms wrapping around his shoulders as he sank back against his car. He leaned against the trunk as he pulled her to stand between his legs.
“You been stonin’ without me, Dommy…?” His kiss tasted different than Letty remembered.
“Maybe…” he smirked at her. “Right pocket…’f ya wan’ some…”
“’s not what i want right now...” Letty said, pulling him back into a kiss.
“Whaddya wan’, then, Letty…?” Dominic asked between kisses, still teasing.
“Mmmm…” Letty moaned into their kiss. “More kisses…?”
My voice probably tells him how badly I want him…
“C’n do that…” Dom said, attacking her mouth with his, his tongue exploring her mouth, suckling softly at her lower lip.
“Baby…” Letty was practically mauling Dominic’s mouth, trying not to jump him right then and there, no matter how badly she wanted to.
“Yeah?” he pulled back from her a little.
“Wanna…” Letty moaned against his mouth, letting the implication be known.
“Wanna what?” Dom asked, unsure if he caught her meaning, though other parts of him definitely caught what he’d thought she said.
Letty’s reply was the same as it was the first time she said it.
“Here…?” Dom asked, somewhat surprised. Sure, the parking lot was practically empty, but still, they were out in the open.
“Wanna…” she moaned again, feeling him stir. “Get…off…” she groaned.
“Letty…” Dom groaned and backed away from her as much as possible. “’m not gonna have your first time be here.” He told her, gesturing to the ground around them.
“Hmmm…” Letty’s hips bucked at his hips. “Finger…?”
“Letty…” Dominic groaned again, not quite believing that Letty was asking this of him. “Maybe, okay? Let’s go down by the water, an' we'll see...”
“Papi…” Letty moaned, though it sounded more like a whine. “Fuckin’ horny…”
“I know, Letty…” Dom said, taking her hands in his. “But I want…wanna make it special for you, when we...”
“An’ your finger's gotta be special, too?” Letty asked, kissing him slowly, teasing him.
“No…but that's not gonna happen here either.” Dom said, gesturing around the parking lot again.
“Papi…” Letty said, pausing to nuzzle his neck. “Water…?” she asked, nipping softly at his neck.
“Yeah…” Dom murmured, trying not to let on just how hard he was having to fight giving in and just fucking her against the trunk of his car.
“’s go…” Letty said, grinding softly into his hips.
“Lead the way, Letty…” Dom said, pushing off of the car and start walking her backwards towards the pier.
Letty moved herself so that she could hoist her legs around Dominic’s waist, nearly knocking Dom the ground as she leaned in to kiss him.
He staggered a little, not expecting Letty to jump on him like that. He couldn’t help laughing though, hands reaching down to grab her ass, supporting her weight.
Letty groaned, almost laughing as his hands cupped her ass.
“I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you…” she murmured into his ear, sucking softly on his earlobe.
“Love you, too, Letty…” Dominic replied, breathing against her face, shifting her in his arms a little before moving towards the water.
Letty nipped at his neck and shoulder, sucking gently at his skin.
“Gonna get me off…?” she asked, rolling her hips against his.
Dominic staggered again, reeling at the feel of her hips against his, feeling her core against his body.
“'f you're sure that's what you want...”
“Gonna love me, papi...?”
“You’re killin’ me, Letty…” Dominic groaned.
“Papi…wanna be with you…”
“Wanna be with you too, Letty…just…wanna do that right for you…” he muttered.
She drove him so fucking crazy he was actually having trouble walking through the sand.
“Papi…” Letty moaned again.
“Yeah…?” his voice sounded strained.
I wonder if she can tell how much she’s getting to me… Dominic thought to himself.
“Love me…” Letty rasped into his ear.
It wasn’t so much a suggestion as it was a request.
“I…” Dominic’s voice actually broke. He was having to work so hard to hold his shit together here. “I love you so much, Letty…believe me, I've spent months thinking about this…thinking 'bout what you're wanting me to do…you make me crazy, I want you so much…but…”
Letty leant down and cut his words off, kissing him heavily, slowly, teasing, almost pleading… trying to tell him there'd be plenty of time for him to have her in his bed.
She had him and he knew it.
As she kissed him, he knew…he’d be doing whatever this girl wanted him to do for the rest of their lives...He couldn’t resist her, not when she came at him like that.
“I could do something for you...” Dominic gasped against her mouth. “I ain't gonna fuck you here, Lett…I'm just not gonna do you like that…but…I could do something…”
“Wha…?” Letty’s voice came out as a rasp.
“You’re killin’ me here, Letty…” Dominic groaned, the sound of her voice making him crazy.
“Whatever you could do…” she said, pausing, “do it.”
“I will…I promise…” Dominic answered. Reaching the pier, he sank to his knees in the sand, a way back from the water, Letty in his lap.
Catalinay - June 22, 2008 04:18 PM (GMT)
Squee! Love it, so much.... Fluffy and hot, all in one. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Favorite part:
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“I…” Dominic’s voice actually broke. He was having to work so hard to hold his shit together here. “I love you so much, Letty…believe me, I've spent months thinking about this…thinking 'bout what you're wanting me to do…you make me crazy, I want you so much…but…”
Letty leant down and cut his words off, kissing him heavily, slowly, teasing, almost pleading… trying to tell him there'd be plenty of time for him to have her in his bed.
She had him and he knew it.
As she kissed him, he knew…he’d be doing whatever this girl wanted him to do for the rest of their lives...He couldn’t resist her, not when she came at him like that.
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irish fee x - June 22, 2008 06:41 PM (GMT)
talk about chemistry :lol: ... hotttttt!
Sumreyez - June 23, 2008 05:25 AM (GMT)
Misundaztood17 - June 26, 2008 11:21 PM (GMT)
HEY!
the next chapter of this fic is NC17, so if you want to read it, you MUST PM me.
Catalinay - June 27, 2008 05:14 PM (GMT)
Love the new chapter...want more now!
myppe - June 27, 2008 07:05 PM (GMT)
myppe - June 27, 2008 07:06 PM (GMT)
loved chapter 7 ;)
sorry about the doubbel posting
Sumreyez - June 27, 2008 10:09 PM (GMT)
Chapter 7 was great
CONTINUE..
tezzi22 - June 27, 2008 10:43 PM (GMT)
LOOOVED chapter 7 :D
want more like now ;) hehe
update soon :D
Nakita1031 - June 27, 2008 11:16 PM (GMT)
karikocha - June 28, 2008 02:01 AM (GMT)
Ya got the concept....'horny as a couple of teenagers' down. Lol. HOT.
rosedragon - June 28, 2008 04:17 AM (GMT)
Misundaztood17 - June 28, 2008 04:19 AM (GMT)
just y'all wait till you get chapter 8.
same rules apply!
babyk - June 28, 2008 11:06 AM (GMT)
Loving this story! Chap 7 brilliant (can't wait for chap 8!)
Catalinay - July 4, 2008 04:08 PM (GMT)
:poke: Any idea when we can expect chapter 8?
Misundaztood17 - July 4, 2008 04:10 PM (GMT)
i'm comin' i'm comin!
breathe, Caty!