Tell me what you think about this fic. This will be my first chapter so tell me if I should keep going. pairings Lewis/Lilia and be advised this is an R rated fic. This fic is of my own creation.



I guess I should start at the beginning. I met Lilia seven years ago.
I was shootin hoops with the guys Tyron, Breezy, Derek, Roy, and Jamal.

I took a break and headed to the water fountain. As I approached the fountain I noticed it was in use by a girl. She was bent over taking a drink so I couldn't see her face. I did however notice her square shoulders, black hair, and long toned caremel legs. My eyes drifted up and my eyes fell upon something quite interesting. Mmmmmm.... I thought.

I tried to look away and be more appropriate but damn her ass was nice. My hand seemed to have a mind of its own because before I knew it I had a handful of tight ass. I retrieved my hand just as quickly as I grabbed her. I felt like a pervert, but she felt so good to my touch.

She turned to the right, and I prepared for a backhand.

To my suprise (and wounded ego) the "punch" came from the left. I felt like I was daydreaming and the next thing I saw was her standing over top of me. Aside from my throbbing jaw, I was stunned. Beautiful was all I could think of, she was a devine treasure with long eye lashes, long black silk hair, full lips ( which I could only wonder what they tasted like), and a shit eating grin. Her voice came out in a sarcastic tone hinted with anger and annoyance ", Is your dick bigger than your head?" She asked. I was speachless.

I stood up and we starred into each other's eyes. I swear I could see so far into those soulful eyes, I was getting lost. Coming back to reality I broke the silence. " I'm sorry about that." She looked over at my friends who were looking confused in our direction. " Could I shoot some hoops with ya?" she asked.
I replied ", We play hardball....." I pause at the look on her face that in words would have said, "I just knocked you on your ass, I think I can handle it "...I don't see why not." I finished. She smirked and said," I knew you'd see it my way."

She walked over to my friends and I was hypnotized by the way her hips swayed when she walked. I looked up and saw her glance over her shoulder at me smirking. Oh my god! I'm going to need a cold shower tonight.

like it, really interesting....nice writing. hope there's more to come. were you thinking of michelle when writing it?

I like your story and keep it up... :lol:

I was thinking of Michelle. I swear I can't think of another actress I would rather meet. There will be more to come very soon. I already wrote some of the next chapter down but I want to make it longer. so maybe by tomorrow night or the next morning I will have it on here.

and thanx for the reply's

I had no idea that this bronzed beauty would become the most important part of my life.

I made my way over to the guys and now girl. We broke up into teams and played three on four. Tyron, Roy, and me against Breezy, Derek, Jamal, and Lilia. It started with me checking it up with Lilia. I think the guys made sure I was against Lilia because they wanted see me get dropped again. " Just because your fine doesn't mean I'ma take it easy on you." I said just to taunt her. " I like it ruff," she replied. I paused mid fake and alot of choice thoughts were present in my mind. I went to dribble the ball and found nothing but air. The sound of laughter made it clear where the ball went will I was fantasizing about the little tita. I still looked over to see the smile of victory on her face.

We dicided to call it a night. Personally I just needed that cold shower and fast. To my dismay I looked over my shoulder to see Lilia walking behind me. I stopped and waited for her to catch up with me. " Whatcha following me for?" I asked. " could I hang with you for alittle while?" she replied with a question of her own. " Sure," I replied back. How could I say no.

We entered the house. Well my house. I am 18 years old and I have no parents. I moved to cali after some shit went down back home in New York City.
I used to be in the bloods. That is until our leader died and the crew split up. Well all eccept for Tyron, Roy, Breezy, Derek, and Jamal. We aren't a gang anymore, but we'll ride together till the end. Anyways, the crips thought it would be a good Idea to kill the remaining bloods. Lets just day out of the fifty-two we had. The guys and me are all thats left. I wasn't home the night they paid my house a visit. My parents and little sister were killed.

The guys and me thought it would be a good idea to leave. I may have been the second in comand in the bloods, but even though the gang is done they still look to me for strength. Honor among friends is what some call it. They are my life. Blood may be thicker than water, but the ties that bind me and my friends are stronger than stone.

"this is a nice place man." Lilia says as she sits on my black leather couch. Its a two story five bedroom house with three bathrooms and a two car garage. They guys live here with me but they are at a club and I didn't feel like going." Yeah its not to bad." I replied. " So what do ya wanna do whatch a movie, play some games, and/or eat?" I asked. " Ya got any beer?" she askes.

I nod and she stands and follows me as I open the french doors that lead to the kitchen and bar. I open the fridge and pull out two coronas and pop the the tops. suprisingly she tips it back and chugs half the bottle before setting the bottle down. She gives a loud burp to show her satisfaction. I couldn't keep the smile off my face.

I look at the clock and see it is 11:00pm. I set my beer down and notice she looks nervous for some reason. " I could walk ya home if ya like." I say. She looks at me and looks down. " Whats your name?" she askes. " Lewis." I reply. I can tell she is avoiding my question but why would she do that. Unless she wants to walk home alone.

" I can drive you if your tired." I say breaking the silence. She looks on the verge of tears but doesn't let them fall when she says," I don't have a home." She replys with shame in her voice. Holy shit. That was a bomb I didn't expect to be dropped.

I must have starred at her funny because she turns and walks toward the front door. " Wait!" I yell as I step infront of her blocking her exit. " You can stay here." I say. " But you just met me, you don't know if you can trust me yet." She says. " should I be worried about something." I answer her comment. " No, I...I just....Ok I'll stay." she said. I am jumping for joy in my head for the chain of lucky events today. Oh wait before I have anyhope for some wild sex in the future. " How old are you?" I ask. " 16." she replies. " Shit."

Ok because I'm so new to thing I gotta ask. How do you put another chapter on the same page?

^ I merged it for you. If you want to add a new chapter, simply add it as a reply in this thread. But then update in your Topic Title that you updated. And please follow fic posting rules:

http://michelle-forum.com/index.php?showtopic=12

Thanks, and have fun!

great update ;)!!!!!!! it's nice he offered her a place to stay. in the next chapter could you describe him a bit? anyways keep up the good work!! :D

Wow this one was way to fast too...I love it... :lol:

Thank for the help. I'll be sure to tell you more about him in the next chapter. I edited my first chapter, But I'll tell you here also. It is a Lewis/Lilia pairing I took nothing from a movie, this is a creation of my own. It is rated R for language, violence, and smut. Thanks again.

This is really FANTASTIC and anymore updates??? :lol: :brow:

Chapter 3



Let me tell you a bit about myself before I countinue telling you about my story. You already know about the gang affiliation, but thats only a small portion of what I've done so far. I didn't grow up in New York City.

I actually was born in Detroit, Mich. I grew up hanging out with the gangs around my home. I remember when I was ten though I knew I was meant to do what I've done. I was walking down the street back from playing some ball with the other kids around the erea. I heard a scream and got curious. I walk behind the building I was in front of and peeked around the corner. What I saw was a little girl being punched and screamed at. I was shocked this girl was younger than I was at least two years. I suddenly felt an overwhelming amount of anger rise from within. I wanted to hurt this man for what he was doing.

The girl was bleeding badly and he still kept hitting her. " Daddy I'm sorry," I heard her yell. Why would a father want to hurt his daughter. He pulled a gun out and pointed it at her. He was shaking but didn't pull the trigger. He was angry at the fact and threw the gun.

To my great luck it landed at my feet. I was ten years old and I had never killed anyone before. I was told by the older kids to just point a gun at what I want to shoot and gently squeeze the trigger.

So I picked up the colt Python and pointed it at his head as he raised his fist again. Without hesitation I pulled the trigger.
He dropped to the ground dead, and I walked over to the girl. I put the gun throught a broken window and knelt down to help the little girl up. " It's ok," I say trying to comfort her. She looked into my eyes with such a peircing set of brown I eyes I could do nothing but stare back.

I may have been young but I was already pretty strong for my age. So without breaking eye contact I lifted her into my arms. I craddle her with one arm while whipping her face off with my free hand. I walked her to the house she told me was her mothers and she went inside, but not before turning around and saying " Thank you," " no prob," I reply.


she smiles and opens the door, walked in, and closed it. From that day on I had never forgotten that girl. The bloods around the erea found out about me killing that guy and recruited me. At the age of twelve my parents and I moved to New York.

I countinued in the bloods, but I really just killed rapists, drug dealers, and the usual psychos that beat on women. My name had began to be a feared name by the time I was sixteen. Lewis Passqualii. I had gotten a tattoo that was dedicated to what I was doing. I had a warrior standing in the middle of my stomach with angels above him and demons below him, but below that was three words "pray for me".



I don't know why I trusted this girl so easily. I almost think I've met her before. The way her eyes reach so deep within me. The way that little girl's eyes did.

nice installment........what i meant by you telling us a bit about him was if you describe what he looks like fisically.....anyways, loved it your doing a marvelous job keep it up :D

Chapter 4
Lilias POV.

I could not believe he gave me a place that fast. I wonder if he remembers me at all. I was pissed when I felt a hand suddenly grab my ass, and without thinking laid their ass out. When I saw that is was a rather hot guy and not a perverted old man I was shocked.

He was very good looking. He probably stood about 6'2" maybe about 200 or more pounds, but he was a mountain of muscle. Not in an ugly way, but in a handsome warrior kinda way. He had curly black hair, and dark piercing brown eyes.

When he told me what his name was I was stunned. I owed this man my life. I was unsure about what to say when he asked to walk me home. I was embarrassed to say I didn't have a home. I really didn't have a place to live accept for the park. I had accually just woken up to get a drink of water when he grabbed me.

After he killed my dad my mom commited suicide. I walked into her room a week after my dad was reported dead to wake my mom up. I found an empty pill bottle next to the bed. I cried so hard that morning. I felt like everyone wanted to leave me or hurt me. I then remembered that boy who saved me.

I didn't know where he lived so I couldn't have a way to reach him. So I lived in the house until it got to smelling so bad I couldn't take it. I packed a bag and left. I have been homeless since I was 8 years old. But, now after all these years, here he is taking me in without hesitation. " Whats wrong with my age?" I asked. " Nothin, I was just wondering why you don't have a home," he answered. Oh shit, what should I say....think, think..He's gonna know somethings wrong if you don't answer. " I ran away," I said quickly. Good cover girl. " Oh ok," he said. I grabbed the blanket that was drapped over the back of his couch. " You don't have to sleep down here ya know," he says. " Where would I sleep then?" I say. I hope he says his room. " You could sleep in my bed.....if ya want," he say nervously. Hells to the yes I think, but that would sound like I'm a slut." Sure would." I say. He leads me upstairs and past at least five or six doors until we stop at the end. He opens the door and stretches his arm out for me to walk in first.

It looks like a celebrities bedroom. It had an attached bathroom. It was huge with a king sized bed, and the bed had a 1,200 count Italian speard bed set. I took off my shirt because I had on a sports bra and took my pants off which had boxers underneath.

He was already in his boxers. Damn he was sexy as hell. As I was starring at his eight pack I notice it was covered in a tattoo. He climbed into bed and I followed. Oh this is so comfortable. I about jump out of my skin when I feel an arm wrap around me. When I realize whats going on I relax. He feels so good pressed against me. I feel safe. I just hope I can come up with a good excuse in the morning when he sees that I have a bullet hole above my left breast. or the slash mark down my back.

Wait,wait,wait!!!!you are really good at this...keep it up... ;) :) :lol:

that was great!!!!

If ya want to give me some Ideas for what you would like to see happen. You can message me on myspace. either look for Lewis on Leigh's friend list or go to my my page at elitebynature89

Chapter 5 Lewis' POV


I woke up the next morning and couldn't keep the smile off my face as I looked at the breath taking woman sleeping peacefully on her side facing me. I couldn't keep my eyes off of her.

She was just so beautiful. Wait that word isn't good enough...I don't think any are come to think of it. She turned onto her back, still in a deep slumber. The blanket was at her waist, so I let my eyes sweep over her toned caramel body.

Like me she had an eight pack, with toned hips that had those sexy lines that lead to her womanhood. Mmmmmm, I look at her arms and see that they too have a toned build to them. I let my eys travel to her neck and see muscle just barely there, not manly looking, just sexy. Like everything on her body had muscle to it. Accept the spots I wanted so bad to touch. I glanced to her breasts, but something caught my eye. I look closer and see there is a bullet wound right above her left breast. What the fuck!!


I lay back down and stare at her more. She is a mistory. Its not my business, but I'm worried about where it came from, and who put it there. As if on cue her eyes started to flutter open. She looked even more beautiful waking up than she did sleeping.

She looked over at me and smiled such a smile that made you want to make it so it never left their face. " Morning," she said. " Good morning," I reply. " I'm sorry to ask this as soon as you wake up....but what is this from?" I ask pointing to her scar. " Life," she said dryly. " Who did it?" I ask another question. " Someone I thought was a friend," she said. " Can I ask what happened?" I asked. She nodded and began, " His name was Tylor, I met him two years ago.....one night I was hanging out with him at his house." She paused swallowing hard. " He tried to rape me...but only started to yank my pants down."

She stopped again closing her eyes before continuing. " I guess someone heard my screams because he stopped at the sound of police sirens....I pushed him off, yanked my pants up, ran out of the house to try and make the cops leave....... I saw the car window infront of me shatter............it took a moment to realise that Tylor shot me." She stopped with tears finally falling down the sides of her cheeks.

I shot forward and took her into my arms. I held her against my body letting her cry for the betrayal she experienced. I made a mentle note that her cry is not something I want to ever see again. This Tylor guy was a dead man.

oohhhh, i like where this is going :) , tylor better start runnin'. nice writing, keep it up ;)

Awesome story I want to read more... :lol:

Chapter 6



Lewis' POV




Her tears subsided finally, but she still clung onto me. I continued to hold her to me.

She rolled onto her back and swallowed. I couldn't help but look at her and marvel in her powerful presence.


She then looked at me and our eyes held onto each other's soul for what felt like an eternity.

I felt like I was being pulled by a magnet, and my lips found their soft lucious targets.

We kissed with enough passion to rival Romeo and Juliet. I pressed my tongue to her lips to ask entrance.


She opened her lips slightly and I dove into the wet honey dewed cavern.
Our tongues engaged in battle for what seemed like hours.

We pulled apart for breathe and stared at each other.

" You can take a shower if you would like," I said. " Thanks, I could definitely use a good hot shower." she replied and got up. " What was Tylor's last name?" I ask. She stopped and turned to me with a look of understanding. " Benton," she answered and went into the bathroom, closing the door.


I reached for my cellphone and dialed the familiar number. " Who dis?" came a voice. " Tyron its Lewis, could you do me a favor?" I ask. " Watcha want?" came the reply. " Look up Tylor Benton and call me back," I said and hung up. I listened to Lilia's soft humming drift through the door overwhelming my thoughts with such a sweet sound.

I'm gonna kill this Tylor bitch and anybody else that thinks they can harm my Lilia. Now that she is safe with me, I'll die before I give her away to danger.

Finally.....anyways great chappie elite. loved the make-out session....i like how they seem to be so close and how he would do anything for her. hope you update with more soon :D

had some money stolen from me by someone I thought was a friend. I'll still be able to go visit california after I save up some more money. Sorry for the wait.



Chapter 7


Lewis' POV




I was standing on my front porch smokin a cig when my cellphone rang." Hello?" I asked." Lewis this Tylor guy lives two blocks away from you." tyron said. "Good job Ty, what house?" I ask. " 4237 mill st. when? he asks. " Now." I say." I'm comin." he says and hangs up.




I walk into the house and find Lilia watching the colts smash another team on tv while drinking a beer. My kinda girl.. I can't help but notice she is wearing my boxer briefs. I always left them in my drawer because I hated them, but now I loved them. She is sexy in anything she wears.

" Gotta make a run real quick." I say." Ok baby see ya in a bit." She answers with a smile. I smile back and head to my room and grab my silenced colt 45 super. I walk outside and see Tyron waiting. I get into the car and we head to Tylor's place.



" For lost hope and his son I'll avenge what once was for his name and his
love
These cold hands spill their blood
Grant me the strength to stand up straight
To make them pay
Spill their blood
Grant me the strength to bear this weight
Show me the way
Spill their blood, Enemies eve
Burn to believe
Guns in the ground are all I see
rapists, liars, and thieves
All targets to me
Jaws at my heels mean nothing to me
Knives at your throats
All that I see
Don't doubt me
I am vengeance
I'm built for war." I say. We stop outside Tylor's house and I walk up to the door.

I knock and wait. I hear footsteps and the door opens. He doesn't even have time to ask who I am. I put the barrel of my 45 between his eyes and say," We are falling down
We are falling
Every word that you pray makes another slave
Every idol that you build brings another plague
Every cross that you bear grows another grave
We are all falling down
We are all falling down
Down, down
We are all falling under the weight of our heartache
Under the weight of their mistakes." and I pull the trigger. I walk to the car and Tyron drops me off at the house and heads home. I walk into the house and see Lilia was still watching the game. Its funny how people move with what is going on tv, but damn she looked so cute while doing it. I smile watching her get a sad look from the colts losing the ball and I think," You are safe my love for I am vengeance, I'm built for war........for you." I sit down and watch football with Lilia.

so what did ya think?

beautiful....great chapter.
glad to finally have more to read, keep up the good work :)

Chapter 8
Finally




Lilia's POV


The game ended with my team killing green bay. I used to watch football with my dad before he tried to kill me.

I don't know what made him do that. I lean back against Lewis' strong chest and he encircles me in well defined arms. I feel like a heavily gaurded queen.
I'm so comfortable that I don't even remember falling asleep.


Lewis' POV



I carefully carried Lilia up the stairs to "our" room and open the door. I lay her body down on the bed gently and pull the covers out from under her.


I lay down with my head on her stomache. " Have you ever felt like you loved someone so much that you act as thought they are made of glass?" Thats what I'm feeling right now.


I listen to the sound her body makes as I lay with my ear on her stomache. The gentle sound of her breathing sings me to sleep.



Lilia's POV



I open my eyes and feel something on my stomache. I look down and see Lewis' head on me and he's hugging my right leg like a teddy bear.


I smile at the site. I still can't believe what I've been blessed with. I guess with the life I've lived I was worthy of some peace.


I'm really falling in love with this man. I lay back down and fall back to sleep.



Lewis' POV



I feel a movement and look up to see if she woke up. I change positions so I'm laying on my pillow. I love the way she looks when she sleeps.

I still can't believe what I've been graced with. I guess maybe I can finally have some peace.

I'm really falling in love with this woman. I close my eyes and fall back to sleep.

Well finally, hehe so glad we're getting more.
Can't wait to see where their relationship goes.

Chapter 9



Lewis' POV


I wake up from the sound of Derek and Roy down stairs. I gently slide out of bed careful not to wake Lilia, and make my way down stairs. I have to hold back a laugh when I see whats going on.


Derek and Roy are doing their best to get the remote away from each other. Derek is a good guy, but he's about 100lbs soaking wet.


I guess I should tell you what they look like. Derek is 6'1" and a skinny ass with a full sleaved out tattooed arm. The tattoo has all of our names on it and surrounded by trible. In between it all is a celtic cross. Its pretty sweet. He's been my boy for awhile now. He tries to act black which goes with Tyron telling him to stop copying him. Roy however is about 6'2" and it about 235lbs. He's trying to get as big as me, but he wont follow the workout papper I made for him. I don't care if someone is bigger than me, but he just does his own thing. He has no tattoos and is a health freak. I met him when I first started recruiting people.




Breezy is in the kitchen making some breakfast. He's a good fucking cook. Tyron and Breezy have had my back since day one. He turns and looks at me. " Whats been goin on Lew dog?" he says. " Not much man..." I start to say when the stairs creak.


Everyone looks towards the stairs and Lilia steps into view. She is wearing a pair of my sweatpants and my colts jersey. Oh my god,mmmmm. I smile say, " good morning baby.". " You too," she says back.



Roy and Derek walk over to her and extend their hands. Lilia shakes both with a smile that makes Derek blush for gawking. Lilia makes her way over to me and we share a quick kiss.


Breezy snorts, " So thats why you didn't come with us you asshole," he says with a laugh. He looks at Lilia and nods, " I wouldn't have gone if she followed me home either." This time he said it with a smile.



Lilia kisses me and sits down. Breezy fixes her a plate first and I pour her some orange juice. Everyone else sits down next with their own food. Even though we grew up in the streets, we were taught how to treat women.



So we look to her and see how she likes breezy's cooking and see she is praying silently. I smile and we wait patiently. She finishes and takes a bite of Breezy's seasoned eggs. " Mmmm, this is good." she says.



Breezy smiles and says," Thank you Lilia." Lilia finishes before any of us and slids her chair out and stands to take her plate to the sink.

Roy jumps up and takes her plate to the sink for her. She has a shocked look on her face when she sees that we are all standing. She sits and we sit.

I taught them that when a woman gets up from the table you stand and show respect for her presence. " Can I take a shower?" she asks. " Go ahead baby, wanna go up to the park after you get out?" I ask. " Sure, so I can whoop your ass again," she replies.


I smile and she goes up stairs I look around the table and they all have smiles on their faces. I get up and put my plate and glass in the sink. I head up stairs to get dressed and hear the guys burst out laughing.

I enjoyed the interaction Lilia had with the guys, they seem like good people.

awwwwe
its cute and awesome!
update soon!!

Chapter 10 Finally. Sorry about taking so long for an update. I have a baby on the way. SMUT WARNING!!!


Lilia's POV



"Well they seemed cool," I thought while I was standing under the hot shower. I already feel comfortable around the guys. I let out a shriek when I feel strong hands start to message my scalp. OOOOHHH this is heaven. " I hope you don't mind me seeing you naked." Lewis says into my ear. " I don't mind." I reply with a husky voice. The realization that he is also naked behind me starts to make my mind wander to pushing him against the wall and showing him how fit I am.




I slowly turn around and can't help but steal a glance down.



I look into his eyes and swallow. He leans in and captures my mouth in a searing hot kiss. I turn the water off and he finally opens his eyes to step out and dry off. I yank my thong, basketball shorts, bra, and tank on. Before I exit the bathroom he grabs my arm and brings me into another kiss. After we part I say, " Tonight we finish." He smiles big and we head down stairs.

YAY...your back, s'been a while. Congrats on the baby.
Great update.

I might not be online very much for awhile. I don't have my computer so it will be a week or two before I can update any stories.

No worries, we'll be here.