OK so this fic is all Vixxens fault. lol Thanks to her I decided to try a Dotty fic. ITS MY FIRST so please go easy on me lol. I'm trying. And yeah Vix I know I was supposed to wait tell you prof read it but I couldn't wait any longer! lol Please dont kill me.

K here ya go!

Title: Broken Dream
Author: ME!
Rating: PG 13 - R {idk it depends}
Disclaimer: I own nothing! Dont sue cause you wont get squat.
Feedback: PLEASE! :D
Summary: They had always had so many plans, but now the seem nothing more than broken dreams...
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Chapert One: Getting Away



Swish. Swish. Swish.

Letty watches the lines in the middle of the road as they past by. Even sitting there she could feel the permanent scars of the days events forming all over her body. Not to mention the mental scars that would fallow her forever. Letting out a sigh, she looked to her right to see a familiar face. His dark hair messy and wild, just like how he was driving. His face was sprinkled with sweat that dripped down his frowning brow. Leon looked so worried. He had all the reason to be. After what had just happened, she wasn’t any calmer than he was. When he saw her looking at him, he spoke the first words he had in the last three hours.

“Hey Let? You ok?”

She just nodded. He wasn’t so convinced.

“Come on girl. Talk to me. You’re sure? I mean, we can go to the hosp-“

“No!” She snapped then winced as even that sent pain shooting through her body. “We can’t go to the doctors. If they find out it was a car wreak they'll report it to the cops. And right now,” She swallowed. “That’s the last thing we need. Besides, I’m fine.” But even shifting in the car seat caused her to wince. Leon looked at her skeptically, but he knew there was no arguing with Letty once she had her mind set. There would be no doctors’ visit anytime soon.

After another hour or so of driving, the twosome pulled into a small town on the edge of California and Nevada. Quickly, they found a busy hotel. Perfect, the clerk wouldn’t be able to remember Leon’s face from all the others and they could blend in.

Leon parked the car just outside the hotel check in. He told Letty to stay in the car while he checked in, so she did. She sat watching the cars pass by, though she didn’t see them. She saw nothing, but his face. The last time she saw Dom was right after the accident. She could still feel his fingers grab her chin in reassurance. She heard him say that everything would be ok. His eyes still looking at hers. Haunting her.

She was snapped out of her trance at the sound of the car door close. Leon sat next to her dangling a pair of keys in front of her. She mustered a smile at the thought of finally having a chance to rest.

The pulled around to the back rooms of the hotel. Leon stepped out and walked quickly her side of the car. Reluctantly Letty allowed herself to be helped to the door. A big blow to her ego since she never liked relying on someone else for anything. Slowly the two of them walked to the door. Leon opened the door and lead Letty to the nearest bed. A relieved sigh escaped her mouth as her tired body hit the bed. It felt like a cloud to her sore muscles. Leon closed the door and lay down on the second bed with an equally heavy sigh and before either of them had a chance to notice, they both drifted off into sleep.


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Everything had silenced on the Toretto’s street. An eerie calm had fallen over the street like a blanket. That silence was quickly broken as a bright orange Toyota Supra screeched around the corner. Like a mad man Dominic spun to a halting stop just outside his small house. He flung the door of his barrowed car and ran to the lifeless body lying out front.

“Jessie!” Dom shouted. He slid to a stop on the ground next to his friend. “Jessie! Jess come on man, say something!” He shook Jessie’s shoulders in panic. He couldn’t be dead! There was no way! He could let this happen!

In panic Dom ripped open Jesses shirt to inspect his wound. Right in the middle of his chest, no bigger than a penny, a perfect hole surrounded by a red blood stain circle. Ignoring the blood, Dom lay his head down on Jessie’s chest. He held his breath as he listened intently for any sign of a heartbeat. Nothing.

Slowly Dom raised his head and closed his eyes.

“Dom!”

He snapped back as he heard a familiar voice.

“Mia!” His sister ran to him for inside the house. She sat down next to her big brother looking down at the pale figure on the ground.

“Is he-“ Dom just looked away, avoiding her eyes. Mia’s heart raced. Adrenalin flowed through her and she panicked. “Oh my god! Oh my god Dom! Oh god!” She flung her hands around him and began rambling to herself. Dom grabbed her arms and turned her face to his.

“Mia! We have to get out of here. Now.” He looked sternly in her eyes. She was scared. He didn’t blame her. Now hearing this, her eye got bigger.

“What!?” She gasped. “We can’t just go! What about Jessie?”

“Jessie’s dead!” Dom screamed louder then he intended. His voice softened. “Jessie’s dead, Mia. He’s gone and he’s not coming back.”

For a moment, Mia sat staring at her brother, soaking in what he just said. He was right. Jessie was gone. Forever. Then she remembered! The rest of the team! They were still alive.

“But what about Vince? And Leon? And Letty? We can’t just disappear and leave them all!”

Dom stood up and pulled Mia with him towards the car. Along the way he spoke. “Vince is in the hospital and who knows what’s gona happen to him when the cops find him.” They sat in the car. “Leon’s gonna be fine. He has friends around here that will hide him. I’m not worried about him. And Letty-“ He paused. Letty. Oh god, he missed her already. Was she ok? Where was she? Mia was right. He couldn’t leave them. Especially not the love of his life. But he couldn’t stay here. Not for now. He’d figure something out. Soon enough, but right now, he had to leave this place.

He revved the engine and turned down the street. As he did he heard sirens heading down the other way towards the house.

Crap.

Give it a few days, he thought. Let everything pass and then you’ll figure this all out. Soon enough you’ll have her back. And everything else he had. His family. His home. His life. But now, he had one thing to do. Get away, and think. That’s all he could do.

Turning down the street, he and Mia headed down the high way. He didn’t know where he was going but he knew he had to get there soon. The sooner he did the sooner he’d have his love back in his arms and his family back in his world. They drove in silence the whole way. And the whole time, all he could do was think of her.

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OK how horrible was it?

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you need to give yourself more credit.......this is awsome......really love your style of writing so far......keep it up, please don't stop can't wait for more. nice work chica :D

Yay! lol Thanks!! :D

Okay wonderful fic and keep on going!!!! :)

OMG! that was good and sad, but I like it...more

Hey,what a good story well,keep it up... :lol:

That was really good! And that was your first fic?? VERY nicely written. Can't wait for more! :D

Your first fic was better than many "experienced" fanfic writers' work. Seriously. Very solid start, nice flow, good characterization. There's people out there who write fic after fic after fic after fic and can't get any of those concepts down. Nice. Look forward to more.

L.

love it :D ur good at this :P ;)

I'm impressed girl. This is definately a good start. Keep it up.

And have a little faith in your abilities. :P You're good.

there is no grammatical failure :D

Can't wait for more.... :)

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That brought a tear to my eye. lol Technically, its my second fic but this is my first Dotty fic. :D

Thanks guys! I guess I can write. lol Don't worry I'm looking forward to writing more of this and I promise the updates will be fast! I hope lol


Thanks again! :P

Ok, how bad was it!?!?!

You should give yourself more credit hunny, but if it was my 1st time writing a fic, id probably ask the same question,lol!!! I love it, great job, and im looking forward to more! :) xxx

:D

Thanks for the encouragement guys! I'm ALMOST done with chapter 2. I should have it posted by the end of the day! So keep checking in!

:P

Or maybe not! I'm DONE!

Heres chapter two. Pay close attention to Letty. This is where things start getting dramatic. :P :D

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Chapter 2. Safety

Sun shown through the curtains of the hotel room window. The bright light stung at Lettys eyes as she rolled over. Moaning, she stretched and sat up. She’d only been asleep a few hours and the sun was still out. With a sigh, she rolled off the bed and walked into the bathroom. She looked in the mirror at her pitiful face. She had a busted lip and a black eye. Great, she thought. Carefully, she inspected her entire body. Her back hurt but she only had a few scratches and a small bruise. Her legs were a little worse. Both knees were swollen and blue. Her ankle was swollen and it hurt to steep on it. Other than that nothing else was really wrong, mostly a few scratches and cuts, but nothing life threatening. But she had a strange pain in her lower stomach. It seemed like nothing so she tried to ignore it.

She sighed one more time before turning to the bathtub. She turned it on, found the perfect temperature then striped of her dirty clothes. She slowly and carefully lowered her aching body into the soothing hot water. She sighed as she lay staring at the ceiling. So many things were running through her mind. Where was Dom? What happened to Vince? And Jesse and Mia? Where were they? Her head ached at the horrid thoughts that ran through her mind. She shook her head and forced the thoughts away. She couldn’t dwell on this. Not now.

After ten minutes of relaxing, Letty reluctantly stood to get out of the cooling water. Careful of her wounds, she grabbed a towel and wrapped it around her sore body, drying up the bath water. Suddenly, a sharp pain shot through her stomach. She fell on the floor with a gasp, clutching her sides. A few seconds past and all that was left of the pain were quick pants of strained breath as she stood and rested against the door.

“What the…” Letty had never felt a pain like that. Where had it come from? She racked her brain figuring out what it was but came up with nothing.

Eventually, dressed in her same old dirty clothes, Letty left the bathroom back to the bed room. Leon still lay snoring on the second bed. She smirked and walked over to him.

“Leon.” She whispered. He didn’t move. “Leon” She hissed a little louder. Still nothing.

“Leon!”

Arms flailing like a mad man, Leon shot up and looked around the room. He looked up at Letty and groaned. “Fuck man, you scared me. Don’t do that!”

Letty laughed at his pitiful face. “Come on. Get up. I’m starving.”

Sleepily, he rose from the bed and changed. He grabbed his keys, and the two of them drove off to find the nearest Burger King.


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Dom drove in silence along the highway, Mia at his side. He’d called in a favor to a racing bud that lived about 2 hours away and they were heading there now. Dom frowned in frustration as he drove. He was kicking himself in the ass for going a head with the last heist. He should have listened to his team. They all knew it was a bad idea but his dumb ass had insisted. He shook his head in disappointment.

“I’m sorry Mia.” He said lowly, not looking away from the road. She turned to him, eyes puffy and red. She half smiled.

“It’s ok Dom.” She said watching her brother. Mia felt bad when she looked at her brother’s sad face. He seemed so hurt and disappointed. She’d always looked up to her older brother to be the strong one. The one she could cont on to be there for her and to protect her. Now, he looked like a scared little kid.

He sighed. “No, Mia, I mean it. This is all my fault. You guys where right. The heists were a bad idea.” He sighed again.

“Yeah, Dom, we were right.” She said a bit harshly. But then her expression softened. “But it’s not your fault.” She grabbed his free hand in hers and smiled at him. “We’ll get through this.” She said. He turned slightly to her and squeezed her hand lightly.

“Thanks Mia.” He smirked.

She grinned. “No problem.”


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It took surprisingly long for Letty and Leon to find a Burger King. Once they did, the two spent probably too much of their remaining money on the biggest burgers the place had to offer. Like ravenous animals, the two thoroughly enjoyed their meals.

Letty had never been to much of a burger person, but right now that hunk of meat tasted like a hundred dollar steak. She took the last bite and licked a little ketchup off her finger then looked at Leon. He was giving her a weird look with his burger half way to his mouth.

“What?” She snapped.

He shook his head and laughed. “Nothin. Guess you were hungry, huh?”

She smirked. She was. Neither of them had eaten since before the crash. At the thought of the crash, Lettys whole body winced. She sighed and looked out the window into the busy parking lot. She missed Dom already. And Mia. She missed the team. How long would it be before they could go back to how things used to be? Could they ever? She wished she knew.

Leon just finished his food when he saw Lettys face. He sighed too and reached for her hand. He gave her a reassuring squeeze. “Hey, stop worrying. He’ll see then again soon.”

She got defensive. “I’m not worried.”

He leaned back and put his hands behind his head. “Ok, you win.” He laughed at her stubbornness. “Come on, lets get out of here.”

They we’re just out the door when another pain shot through her stomach. She grasped her sides and almost fell to the ground. Leon caught her and helped her to the car. He sat her down and knelled next to her.

“You ok girl? What was that?”

She shook her head. “I don’t know. That’s the second time that’s happened today.”

He gave her a look. “Are you sure you don’t wana go to the hospital?”

She nodded. “I’m ok. I just need rest.” But even as she said it she didn’t believe herself.

Leon sighed and gave in. He got in the car next to her and turned it on. He gave her one last look and she just turned away. He hoped she was ok. For now he’d just have to take her word for it.
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:D :D

WOW!!!So fast and I love this...thanks waiting for more.... :lol:

great update chica. Dom better get his ass to wherever Letty is..........i'm thinkin she's preggers......i'm I right? R we gonna have a little Dotty baby?!?! :D

great chapter....can't wait for more

Woah, fast update! Loves it! :D

Girrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrl it's about time you had yourself a dotty fic! You know I gotta love it

P.s. I'll call you soon I keep forgetting

Ok i'm gona warn you guys right now, this next chapter is very very sad. Or more like depressing. lol Its kinda like the climax of the story.

So here is part one. I know its very short but I just HAVE to see how you guys react to this before you read the rest! lol sorry to torture you like this! lol *crosses fingers*

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Chapter 3 Part 1 Shock

A few days later.

Dom and Mia had finally gotten calmed down at his old buddy's house. The search for them had slowed a little and he felt a bit more safe, but something in him said something was really wrong. He hadn't heard from Vince since he was sent to the hospital, witch wasn't a surprise to him. But what was surprising was that he still hadn't heard from Leon and Letty.

Letty.

She was all he could think about, all he could see. Everything reminded him of her. He knew she was ok, but he just needed to see her. He needed to be with her again. As he lay there in bed, staring at the wall, all his wonderful memories with her played in his head. The races, cook out in the back yard, movie and game nights and all there wonderful alone times. And as he finally fell asleep, his dreams were filled with her.

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That night was horrible; Letty couldn’t sleep. It had been a few days and the cramps in her side were getting worse. Something was obviously wrong. ‘It has to be from the wreck.’ She tried to convince herself that it was nothing. But she couldn’t. This pain was strange, unlike any she’d had before. After a few more hours of tossing and turning, she finally managed to get an ounce of sleep. But she’d wish she hadn’t.
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She was back on the road, driving along side a semi-truck. It was the day of the heist. Strangle, all was quiet. In front of the truck she saw Dom, driving franticly as Vince hung on for dear life.

‘No’ she mouthed. She was reliving the worst day of her life and there was nothing she could do. Desperately she tried to awake herself, shaking her head, slamming her hands on the wheel. But nothing was working; all she could do was watch. Everything seemed to slow down. She saw the shadow her car sliding under the tuck. A screech as she pulled up along the side. The tires of the truck hit hers and her grip tightened. And in the blink of an eye, the world seemed to fast forward. She felt herself flying through the air. She felt herself screaming but not a sound was heard. The impact felt so real, as if she was actually reliving the impact. Then she felt the rolling of her car and the world around her. Her entire life flashed before her eyes. Her childhood, her school years, the first time she meet Dom and the gang, and all their good memories. Then……..darkness.
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Letty woke with a jump. Her side pounded and she let out a loud wince. Panting she looked down at the sheets. What she saw was so chilling her heart stopped. She was lying in a puddle of blood.
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Ahhhhhhh! :ph43r:

OMG!!!way to go keep it up girl... :lol:

GOD!!!!!! you're evil!!!!...I loved it even if it was short

OH.MY.GOD!!!! you can't leave us like that it's not fair..........really into this, please update soon!!! :unsure:

Uh oh. :( Keep up the good work, love the quick updates!

:o :( Please update!!!!!!! Soon!!!!!!! I need to know........ :(

I hope that you update really soon!!!!!!! :(

Haha wow shocked are you guys? ;) OK well, since you asked nicly, here is the seconf part of chapter 3!

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Chapter 3 Part 2. Disaster

“Oh my god!” She screamed, to shocked to move, she just sat there shaking. What happened? She could barley breath from the pain in her side. She looked over to see Leon jumping out of his bed rushing over to her.

“What the hell happened!?” He yelled.

“I don’t know!” She panicked. “I-I Just woke up an-and I’m in a fucking puddle of blood!”

“What the fuck is it!?” He threw his hands in the air.

“I don’t know!” She screamed again. She looked down at her pants. It was easy to see that’s where it came from, but why? Her period was nowhere around now. Suddenly she got a shot a pain again and she fell back against the pillows. She groaned and closed her eyes tightly holding back a scream threatening to escape. When the pain passed, she sighed and looked back at Leon, panting for breath. He just sat there helplessly staring at her.

He jumped up and started pacing. “We have to go to the hospital. Now.” Letty opened her mouth to protest but he stopped her short. “Letty! We have to go! What if it’s some kind of internal bleeding from the crash? Fuck the cops, right now I don’t really care if they find us! I’d rather we go to jail then you dieing!”

He had a point there.

Too week to protest she just nodded. Leon grabbed a towel and handed it to Letty. Carefully he helped her up and wrapped her in the towel then headed out the door to the first hospital they could find….

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3 hours later

Leon paced the waiting room. Looking up at the clock it read 10:57 am. Damn. He thought. 3 hours and still nothing. What was taking so long?

With a heavy thud he plopped himself down on the couch in the little room. Impatiently he took out his cell phone. Out of pure boredom, he went looking through his contacts. He should probably tell someone about Letty. But not tell he found out more. He continued searching and came across one that made his heart skip.

Dom.

Shit. He totally forgot about Dom. He should probably call him. He would want to know about this. Ahh not yet. When I find out more.

After another agonizing 20 minuets, a shy looking nurse walked up to him. Smiling, she asked, “Are you here for Miss. Rodriguez?”

He jumped up. “Yeah, yeah I am. Is she ok?”

“She’s recovering well.” The nurse nodded.

Leon sighed. “Do you know what was wrong with her?”

The nurses’ smile faded and she looked serious. “Sir, is Miss. Rodriguez your girlfriend?”

“No, she’s just a good friend. My best friends’ girl. Why does that matter?” He was confused. What did his relationship with Letty matter?

The nurse hesitated. Something in her face was beginning to worry Leon. She finally took in a shaky breath. “Sir, did she tell you or anyone you know that she was pregnant?”

Leon’s mouth dropped so far he swore he felt it hit the ground. What!? Letty? Pregnant? That can’t be? It’s Letty! “What?” He more mouthed the word than spoke it. All other words had escaped him.

The nurse nodded again. “By what the doctor said, Miss. Rodriguez was about 4, almost 5 weeks pregnant.”

Leon laughed. He couldn’t believe it. Letty, pregnant? He actually smiled at the thought but then his smile quickly flipped upside down. Was? He faced the nurse again. “Wait, what do you mean she was?”

The nurse looked down at the floor. Taking in a breath, she looked back up at Leon. “When you came in and said you thought it might be internal bleeding due to the accident you two had been in, we immediately looked into it. But as we soon realized, her bleeding was inconsistent to the injuries she suffered from the crash.” Leon’s look told her he still didn’t understand. So she made it simpler. “It wasn’t from the crash.”

Leon still didn’t understand. He just kept looking at her, as confused as a little kid. With one more deep inhale, the nurse came out and said it, blunt and simple. “She miscarried.”

Leon’s heart stopped.

Miscarried?

Leon just stared at the floor for a minuet. After it finally hit him, Leon rubbed his hand across the back of his head. He didn’t know what to say. He was completely in shock. How did this happen? Well he knew exactly how it happened; he just couldn’t believe it happened to Letty. Since he couldn’t bring himself to say much, he asked, “Can I see her?”

Again, the nurse hesitated. “She’s very emotional right now….” She trailed off to watch Leon. It must have been his desperate look because she gave in and lead him to a clean white room. She motioned to a chair by the bed and he sat down next to a sleeping Letty. She lay still in the clean white sheets of the hospital bed. There were IV’s in her arm and her head was bandaged lightly. Leon had never seen her so vulnerable like this. He didn’t like seeing her hurt. It wasn’t the strong, stubborn, lively Letty he knew and loved. She looked so small….

Leon was lost in his own thoughts when Letty’s eyes fluttered opened. Leon grabbed her hand as she looked his way.

“Hey.” Leon managed without tearing up.

“Hi.” She half-heartedly smiled at him, but it soon faded and was replaced by tears welling in her dark eyes. She swallowed hard and opened her mouth to speak. She couldn’t get the words out. But Leon knew what she wanted to ask.

“They already told me.” He mumbled. She forced a nod. “Let, I’m so sorry. I-“She shook her head for him to stop.

“I didn’t even know.” She laughed bitterly. “I guess, in a way I did, you know. I mean, I thought something was a little weird when I didn’t get my period but it wasn’t the first time so I didn’t think anything of it.” She sniffed and blinked against the tears threatening to spill.

Leon was about to speak when Letty started up again. “It’s weird, huh? Can you picture me and Dom as-“She stopped as the tears finally spilled over and now she couldn’t hold them back. She didn’t even try. She just spoke through the sobs. “I didn’t even know Leon.”

“Letty, come on girl. Everything’s gona be ok.” Leon sat next to her as she cried into his chest.

“No, Leon, its not. We always wanted a baby. But it didn’t even get a chance!” She yelled. Then as the sobs grew quieter yet more mournful, she whispered. “It never even got a chance And now, it’s gone.”
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OMG!!!are you serious about this??? :brow:

I love this part you are amazing!!! :D

:sniff:

Poor Letty hope Dom gets their so he can start grieving with her. good story so far hope you update soon.

:( why did u kill dotty baby? that's not right. update soon

Nakita, i know i sorry. lol

Yeah guys I know its sad and yeah but trust me it will get batter! Happy ending I promise! :D

Yeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D Im gonna wee!!! xxx

Okay this story is getting even gooder!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D

OMG! you killed dotty baby!!!...great chapter but sooo sad

OMG :blink:

Wow how long has it been since anyone has looked at this?

I kinda want to start working on it again!

You guys think its worth it?

Freaking Amazing.! You'd Better Start Working
On It Again, Little Sis.!

Little Sis? :brow:

O...k....

lol

Well, i get out of school tomorrow so I will have plenty of free time to write! :D