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Title: After 6 Years (PG)


myppe - June 25, 2007 10:01 PM (GMT)
so I've been think about this for about a week now ...and I finlly decided that I should post it...I want to warn you guys that I'm not a very good writter and english isn't my main language so I'm sorry if my grammar and spelling sucks..
anyway this is my first tfatf story that isn't a oneshot..
so here we go:

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Title: after 6 years

Author: myppe

Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Fast and the furious characters.

Summary: it's takes place 6 years after the moive ends. Now both Brian and Dominic are back. The only problem is that someone wants reveng, for what happened.


chapter one: Photos

He knocked carefully on the door.
He was just about to leave when a tall blond woman opened.

" Hey, can I help you with something?"

"Yeah I was looking for Mia Toretto"

"She's not here, she is out" She crossed her arms on her chest, and leaned on the doorway.

"Okey, Do you know when she'll be back"

"Soon,I hope" She looked at the sun as if she could tell what time it was. "Do you what leave a message"

"No thanks " He turned around and started to walk to his car.

"Hey, do I know you from somewhere",she asked him, still standing in the doorway.

He turned around slowly " I don't think so, Why?"

"You are just reminding me of someone, That's all"

"Really?" He smiled and started to walk towards her

"Yeah" she said and smiled back, but the smiled disappeard

"You are the guy from the photos" She looked chock "Come on" She did a gesture, to follow her.

They walk up stairs and entered a room on their left side. He recognized it, it was Mia's room, it made him a bit uncomfterble, even if he had been thier many times.

The woman got down on her knees to search under the bed "What are you looking for?"

"This" she said and pulled out a box with the words "old photos" written on the side.

She opened it and took a photo and gave it to him "It's you,right?" she looked at him and then at the picture "You are Brian, right?" he just nodded.

"Hey Nicky, I couldn't find that barbacuesauce you wanted so I bought another one instead" it was Mia, Brian recognized her voice.

"Okey" Nicky answered, She took the photo from Brian and put the box back quickly under the bed.

"Can you give me a hand down here, It's kind of heavy"

"yeah sure" she looked at Brian "Are you coming" he took a deep breath, he know that he had to talk to her, there was no way out now."yeah"



Nicky entered the kitchen first."Hi, there you are, what were you doing upstairs?" Mia said without looking at her and started to unpacking the groseries,with her back facing the door,

"I..." she stopped when Brian entered the room.

"hey Mia" she know how it was.

She turned around and leand towards the kitchen sink "What do you want Brian?" she crossed her arms over her chest and looked him in the eyes.

" Nothing,I just wanted to see how you were doing" he put his hands in his pockets and looked at her.

Mia rolled her eyes and turned around and started to unpack again.

She knew that he was watching her unpacking the groseries, but she just ignored him.

"I'm going to take in the rest of the stuff, Nicky suddenly said and disappear through the door. Mia know that someone had to say something, but she was not going to be the one to speak.

" Mia I'm sorry"

she turned around "you're sorry "she laught and looked at him."are that also one of your lies or should I wait for Santa and The Eastarbunny to come to" she walkt out trought the door. Good, she hated him. if he thought he just could waltz right back
here, like something never happend, he was wrong.


Brian followd her out. "come on Mia, it's not fair I just..."

she turned around "fair, you want to talk about fair, Brian, fine. Let's talk about fair" she walk towards him, yelling "fair would be if you never came here in the first place, fair would be if you never told me that you loved me....and that Dom never leaft or that Jesse never.." she couldn't even say it,

She lookt at him, her tears runing down her cheeks.

He didn't know what to say, What ever he would say would only make things wors. He want to hold her and saing that evrything was going to be okay. And that he was sorry for all the pian that he had cost her, but he couldn't, and that all this years he still loved her

They stood quiet and just lookt at each other,wrept in ther own thoughts and emotions. When a dark blue almost black car driv into the driveway, and a man stept out of the car. Both Mia and Brian recognize him. It was Dominic.

***
so please tell me if I should continue or not

Nakita1031 - June 25, 2007 10:57 PM (GMT)
I like it. Good start. If your worried about spelling/ grammer maybe think about getting a beta (a proof reader, sorta) to check that stuff for you. But def. keep writing! :)

~Michelle_Rox~ - June 25, 2007 11:21 PM (GMT)
Yeah! More! :D

tezzi22 - June 26, 2007 05:13 PM (GMT)
nice start update soon=)

BekI - June 26, 2007 05:23 PM (GMT)
Good start. Looking forward to more.

myppe - July 9, 2007 03:28 PM (GMT)
I'm glad that you guys likes it..I really am ..I'm sorry about this chapter it's really short and it sucks

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Chapter two: surprise

Mia was the first to move. She ran towards Dom and gave him a big hug.

"Hey baby girl, I've mist you” he whisper and
"I've mist you too, are you staying"

"Yeah”

Mia didn't notice the woman with long, brown hair down to her waist that stepped out of the car

”hey save a hug for you sister-in-law, would ya?" Mia looked at the other side of the car, to see Letty smiling.

"Letty!” She let go of Dom, and walked over to the other side and gave her a hug.

She didn't notice the sister-in-law part until after the hug.

”wow, you guys got married" she looked at Letty then at Dom, he nodded

"Wow I didn't see that one coming" she said, she never thought that Dom and Letty was going to get married, she thought that they were going to be one of those couples that stayed together forever but never got married.
”well I 'm sure that I can surprise you once more" Letty said and opened the passenger car door, and left out a little sleepy boy, and placed him on her hip.

Mia didn't believe her eyes "ooh my god, he's so cute"

"Of course he's cute, he's a Toretto!" Dom said from the other side of the car.
He started to unload the stuff from the trunk.

"Ooohh! Here take Jason" Letty handed the boy to Mia, her cell was ringing in her pocket "yea...”She answered "yeah, she's here" she looked at Mia. Before Letty hanged up, a dark green car parked by the house.

Both Leon and Vince stepped out of the car with a black dog, the two men hadn't chance at all " yo Let, next time we are going away, we are not taking Tachie in the car with us" Leon said pointing at the dog. Letty laughed
"sorry Le, she likes you" she said with a grin

"Mia I can’t find...wow” Nicky stopped when saw all the people looking at her,
She had walked back in when Brian and Mia had continued their fight outside
”we’re going to need a bigger table" she sighed and went back into the kitchen.

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The woman almost fell out of the couch when the phone rang, she picked it up quickly.
"Yeah" she answered and she was completely stun when the voice said" They are here"

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Carlos garcia - October 28, 2007 07:26 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (myppe @ Jun 25 2007, 04:01 PM)
so I've been think about this for about a week now ...and I finlly decided that I should post it...I want to warn you guys that I'm not a very good writter and english isn't my main language so I'm sorry if my grammar and spelling sucks..
anyway this is my first tfatf story that isn't a oneshot..
so here we go:

****
Title: after 6 years

Author: myppe

Disclaimer: I don't own any of the Fast and the furious characters.

Summary: it's takes place 6 years after the moive ends. Now both Brian and Dominic are back. The only problem is that someone wants reveng, for what happened.


chapter one: Photos

He knocked carefully on the door.
He was just about to leave when a tall blond woman opened.

" Hey, can I help you with something?"

"Yeah I was looking for Mia Toretto"

"She's not here, she is out" She crossed her arms on her chest, and leaned on the doorway.

"Okey, Do you know when she'll be back"

"Soon,I hope" She looked at the sun as if she could tell what time it was. "Do you what leave a message"

"No thanks " He turned around and started to walk to his car.

"Hey, do I know you from somewhere",she asked him, still standing in the doorway.

He turned around slowly " I don't think so, Why?"

"You are just reminding me of someone, That's all"

"Really?" He smiled and started to walk towards her

"Yeah" she said and smiled back, but the smiled disappeard

"You are the guy from the photos" She looked chock "Come on" She did a gesture, to follow her.

They walk up stairs and entered a room on their left side. He recognized it, it was Mia's room, it made him a  bit uncomfterble, even if he had been thier many times.

The woman got down on her knees to search under the bed "What are you looking for?"

"This" she said and pulled out a box with the words "old photos" written on the side.

She opened it and took a photo and gave it to him "It's you,right?" she looked at him and then at the picture "You are Brian, right?" he just nodded.

"Hey Nicky, I couldn't find that barbacuesauce you wanted so I bought another one instead" it was Mia, Brian recognized her voice.

"Okey" Nicky answered, She took the photo from Brian and put the box back quickly under the bed.

"Can you give me a hand down here, It's kind of heavy"

"yeah sure" she looked at Brian "Are you coming" he took a deep breath, he know that he had to talk to her, there was no way out now."yeah"



Nicky entered the kitchen first."Hi, there you are, what were you doing upstairs?" Mia said without looking at her and started to unpacking the groseries,with her back facing the door,

"I..." she stopped when Brian entered the room.

"hey Mia" she know how it was.

She turned around and leand towards the kitchen sink "What do you want Brian?" she crossed her arms over her chest and looked him in the eyes.

" Nothing,I just wanted to see how you were doing" he put his hands in his pockets and looked at her.

Mia rolled her eyes and turned around and started to unpack again.

She knew that he was watching her unpacking the groseries, but she just ignored him.

"I'm going to take in the rest of the stuff, Nicky suddenly said and disappear through the door. Mia know that someone had to say something, but she was not going to be the one to speak.

" Mia I'm sorry"

she turned around "you're sorry "she laught and looked at him."are that also one of your lies or should I wait for Santa and The Eastarbunny to come to" she walkt out trought the door. Good, she hated him. if he thought he just could waltz right back
here, like something never happend, he was wrong.


Brian followd her out. "come on Mia, it's not fair I just..."

she turned around "fair, you want to talk about fair, Brian, fine. Let's talk about fair" she walk towards him, yelling "fair would be if you never came here in the first place, fair would be if you never told me that you loved me....and that Dom never leaft or that Jesse never.." she couldn't even say it,

She lookt at him, her tears runing down her cheeks.

He didn't know what to say, What ever he would say would only make things wors. He want to hold her and saing that evrything was going to be okay. And that he was sorry for all the pian that he had cost her, but he couldn't, and that all this years he still loved her

They stood quiet and just lookt at each other,wrept in ther own thoughts and emotions. When a dark blue almost black car driv into the driveway, and a man stept out of the car. Both Mia and Brian recognize him. It was Dominic.

***
so please tell me if I should continue or not

I like your stories :D

Maritza Roman - October 31, 2007 05:38 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Nakita1031 @ Jun 25 2007, 04:57 PM)
I like it. Good start. If your worried about spelling/ grammer maybe think about getting a beta (a proof reader, sorta) to check that stuff for you. But def. keep writing! :)

Yeah keep on writing... B)

myppe - October 31, 2007 02:56 PM (GMT)
hahaha..I completey forgot about this story. I even stop writing it,but I got more chapters of it ..
if you guys want to read them?

Nakita1031 - October 31, 2007 04:32 PM (GMT)
Yes! Post more! We can never have enough Dotty stories! :D

Maritza Roman - October 31, 2007 06:29 PM (GMT)
Yesuriiii!!!I want to read more of your stories... :lol:

Thier really interesting... :P

So I could know who dotty is... B)

myppe - October 31, 2007 06:56 PM (GMT)
okey..but don't blame me if it sucks..remember I wrote this a really long time ago..so be nice to me :P



Chapter three: Go through it alone


Nicky finished the salad and cleaned the kitchen. She walked to the living
room, where the rest of the people were. She leaned in the doorway and
looked around.

Her eyes fell on the big bald guy, who was sitting on the couch and talking
to Brian. Mia and the woman with long dark hair were sitting on the floor
with the boy, laughing.
The other two men were playing some old race game on the play station.

"Mia I'm heading home, I've just got to do something"

"Sure", Mia nodded and got up" but I want you to meet my family. Nicky, this
is Dominic," Nicky shaked hand with the bald guy.

"This is Letty" She looked at the woman on the blanket. "Hey” Nicky said.
Letty nodded

And I guess you've already meet Brian" Mia said without looking at him. "And
those two are Leon and Vince" Mia pointed at the two guys that was playing
the race game.

"Hey" Leon and Vince said at the same time without looking at her.

Nicky laugh "well, it was nice to meet you guys" she took a last look on
everybody and walked to the door. Mia followed her.

"Yo Mia could you let Tachie in" Letty asked

"Yeah sure" Mia replied from the hallway.

Letty's dog was already waiting to get in, when Nicky opened the door. Mia
walked up to Nicky.

"So that's your family huh" Nicky said and nodded to the living room.

"Yeah" Mia said and smiled.

"You can't stop smiling can you" she looked at Mia.

"No" they both women started to laugh.

"See you later girl"

"Sure" Mia watch as her friend drove away and walked back to the others.

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The woman had just stepped out of the shower, when her cousin walked into
the apartment.

"Hey Sarah we have to talk"

"Just wait a sec; I'm just going to get dressed"

"Sure"

Sarah took the first clothes she could find; she wreathed the towel around
her wet hair, and jointed her cousin in the so called living room.
The red curtains made the room even smaller, then it already was.

"So what's up, Charlotte" she said when she sit down next to her on the
couch.

”okay, she let her hands go through her hair "they are back" Charlotte said
and pointed at the white board with the pictures on.

"They are"

"Hmm" she nodded "and Brian too" she got up and walked to the white board and
looked at the pictures.

"are we still going to do it?" Sarah followed her cousin to the white board.

"Yeah, we are" she took a last glare at the photos over the Toretto family.
"Cause they are going to fell the same pain, that they cost me".

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Letty opened the door to their bedroom the smell of stalely hit her. She
putted the bags on the floor and opened the windows. She started to unpack
the bags with clothes. She heard a quiet hey from
The doorway, it was Mia.

"Hey girl, what's up?"

"Nothing "she simply said and sat on the bed.

"So” Mia looked at Letty.

"So what" Letty knew what Mia wanted to know.

"Oh come on Let, tell me” she looked at Letty with big puppy eyes.

"Okay, fine” Letty laugh

Mia made her self comfortable in the big king size bed, ready to hear the
story.

"It' was just on the beach in Mexico in the sunset" Letty simply said and
shrugged her shoulders. She started to unpack the next bag.

"Ooh" Mia sounded a bit disappointed. "How did he propose" she lay down on
her stomach, Mia loved romantic stuff.

"We had been racing on night and on your way home, he proposed" Letty laugh
when Mia sighed

"Here" Letty handed two bottles of Shampoo. Mia opened one of them and
smelled it.

"It’s vanilla" she said surprised, and looked at Letty.

”yeah, Dom brought them for you, when we were on our honeymoon in Hawaii"

"Ooohh Hawaii, how fancy"

"Shut up" Letty throws a shirt on her.

"So tell me Letty how you ended up with a dog" Mia said and placed the shirt
in on of the draws.

"Well, you know the plan right?"

"Yeah" Mia turned and sat on the bed again

"so I was lonely, so I brought her or actually I got her, there was this guy
in the garage that I was working in , that got a dog that just got puppies
and there was one left, so he asked me if I wanted it and I did." Letty
putted the rest of the clothes in the draw and closet it and took a seat
next

”Mia" she looked at her hand then at Mia. "What happened after that I and
Leon left" Letty hated to talk about that day.

"How much do you know?"

"Just that Tran killed Jesse and that Brian gave Dom the Supra"

"What Brian gave Dom the Supra?"

"Yeah didn't you know" Letty said surprised.

"No"

The two women didn't say anything, they were stuck with here own thoughts.
They only they could hear were the sound of cars driving outside the window.

"So what happened" Letty said after a while and looked at Mia.

Mia started to tell her. Brian and Dom had driven after Tran and Lance.
Brian in the supra and Dominic in their dad’s car. Mia had called an
ambulance but it had been too late. Jesse was already
dead. Mia started to cry.

"Mia I'm so sorry" Letty hugged her."I'm sorry that you had to go through it alone"
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tell me what you think

Maritza Roman - October 31, 2007 07:20 PM (GMT)
OYE!!!myppe your fantastic!!!!and how can I make my own because I like to write alot so...do I have to make up my own stories??? :brow: :lol: :lol: :huh:

Lexi1981 - March 17, 2008 03:19 PM (GMT)
I love the stroy so far. Can't wait to know what happen next.

myppe - July 8, 2008 07:11 PM (GMT)
I found more chapters of this story if anyone wants more...anyone?

karikocha - July 8, 2008 07:14 PM (GMT)
Sure.....give us what ya got.

myppe - July 9, 2008 08:41 PM (GMT)
Chapter 4: the true, please!

It started to get dark and cold outside so they decided to continue their barbecue inside with a movie.
Letty putted Jason in to bed in Letty's old room, she hadn't used it in years, Nicky and Mia washed up, with Tachie watching them under the table, the guys was flipping through the channels while they were waiting for everybody to get ready.

"Hey Mia, have you seen Jason's blanket" Letty asked as she walked in to the kitchen.

"Which one?”

"The big white one" Letty said and took the sip last out of her beer.

"Nopp, sorry girl" Mia shaked her head.

"Maybe, you left it in the car" Nicky said and placed the clean plate with the others.

"Yeah, maybe" she sighed and walked out to the car.

"Are you girls, ready” Vince yelled from the couch.

"2 seconds, V" Mia replied

"Bring some popcorn too" Leon said.

"Yeah, yeah"

They made some popcorn and joined the guys in the living room.

”okay V, we are done, so start the movie" Mia said and made her self comfortable in the couch.

"Shouldn’t we wait for Dominic and Letty" Nicky said and sat down next to Mia.

"Ooohh, they'll get over it" Mia took some popcorn.

Vince started the movie.


"There you are" Letty said when she found the blanket. She took it and locked the car. She was on her way back into the house, when she notices the light in the garage was on. She pulled the blanket around her and walked to the garage instead. She opened the door, and saw her husband, who was looking at the Jetta. Letty heart skipped a beat when she looked at the white car

Dom heard some one came in, but he didn't care to turn around to see how it was. It has been his fault, he could have stopped him from racing Tran, He sighed and shaked his head.
"it wasn't your fault, you know" Letty walked up to him and took his hand. He wrapped his arms around her and kissed the top of her head.
"Dom "Letty whispered after a while, she didn't want to break the silence, but she had to know "why didn't you tell me, that you took the dodge" she turned around in his embrace.

"Because it didn't matter" he let go of his wife and slowly started to walk around the Jetta

"Then tell me, what happened after you and Brian left" Letty said

"Letty I don't..."

"No Dominic, tell me, how did you really end up with the supra" she crossed her arms over her chest, she follow him with her eyes. He knew that this was a fight that he couldn't win.

"Okay, we went after Tran and Lance, and we knocked them out... ”he looked down at the car

"And" Letty looked at him.

"You know that place that we use to drag race in high school"

"Yeah" she raised a eyebrow "and let me guess you raced him, right” he just nodded, she knew Dom better then anyone”But I still don't know you got the supra" she continued

"well." he walked over to her "after we crossed the rail a truck pulled up right in front of me and flipped the Dodger around, so Brian gave me the keys, and saved my ass from the cops" He putted a strand of her hair behind her ear." and there you got it, so we're okay" he looked at her, to see if he would be forgiven for not telling her

"Did you win?" Letty said calmly

"Win what"

"The race, duh!"

"Of cause I won" Dom said, relieved that she wasn't pissed off. he pulled her Letty closer, she putted her arms around his neck.

"Then we're okay" she smirked and kissed him. ”come on, we better get in before movie ends"

They turned off the light and walked back inside.


"Hey what are we watching" Dom said, when he and Letty walked into the room were the rest of the people were. He sat down on the couch next to Mia, and Letty next to Leon on the floor, leaning against Dom legs.

"It’s Nicolas Cage" Nicky said and snapped her fingers

"It’s Angelina Jolie" Mia said and did the same.

"IT'S GONE IN 60 SECONDS!” They both said, and snapped their fingers, which made everybody laugh.


After the movie Mia went to bed and Nicky drove home to the apartment. She could hear voices and the TV, it made her happier then she been in years. Her eyes slowly closet and she fell asleep. The Toretto house fell into silence, when the rest of the people went to bed. Leon and Vince were sleeping in the basement, Letty and Dom in their old room and Brian on the couch.

The only thing that was moving in the big house was Tachie.

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please tell me what you think, because right now I'm not sure if I should keep writing it or not, so let me know what you think about this story

rosedragon - July 9, 2008 09:21 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
"Did you win?" Letty said calmly

"Win what"

"The race, duh!"


that was cute :D

karikocha - July 9, 2008 09:29 PM (GMT)
I like it, great so far.
More, please.

myppe - August 7, 2008 06:22 PM (GMT)
this turned out to be a very long chapter..and I'm sorry if the grammer and spelling sucks..I hope you forgive me and enjoys the chapter

Chapter 5: Meet Kyle

The house was still quiet when Mia woke up. It was Saturday so she didn't have to open the store until 10. She putted on a pair of pants and started to walk towards the stairs. Then suddenly she heard a laugh from Letty's old room, Mia had almost forgotten that the guy was back and that is was Jason's room now. She slowly opened the door and saw Tachie rolling on the floor, and Jason laughing at it.
"Hey what are you two doing” she said with a laugh.
Tachie jumped up and started to waggle her tail so much it looked as if she would fall backwards. Mia laughs at the dog, she liked Tachie, she wasn't like other dogs, she was more human in some weird way. Mia tilled her head and looked down on the black dog. Letty told Mia that she didn’t need a nanny, she had Tachie. Ever since they arrived yesterday Tachie always had an eye on Jason, even when he was with Letty or Dom. Mia shaked her head and patted Tachie on her head.
"You're weird you know that " She said to the dog, and turned to the boy "and shouldn't you be sleeping?" she lifted Jason out of the bed. Mia couldn't believe that she was an aunt, she had a nephew, and he was perfect .He had Letty's eyes and her brownish hair, Dom's nose and his mouth.
"well if you're not going to sleep you then might as well keep you aunt company" she placed a light kiss on the top of his head and walked down to the kitchen with Jason on her hip, and Tachie right after.
She placed Jason on one of the six chairs that was surrounding the table, and made some coffee, she took a seat next to the boy. Jason quickly found a spoon to play with.

"You're up early" Mia almost fell of the chair
"Damn Brian! You scared the shit out of me" she putted her hand over her chest
"Sorry" He rubbing his eyes, his blond hair was standing in every possible direction. He looked like he hadn't slept in days. He sat down and Mia got up and gave him a cup of the dark liquid.
"Thanks" he yawned, and the room feel into an awkward silence.
"So "Mia cleared her throat "what have you been up to this past year"
"Well I was in Miami for 4 years, and then I went home to Arizona when my dad died, and then my mom died a couple of moths after that"
"Oh I'm sorry" Mia knew how it was to lose your parents. Mia never meet her mother, she died a couple of days after she was born Dom was only 4 at that time.
"So what have you done then?" Mia snapped out of her thoughts, she looked down into her coffee, before she answered him.
" I finish my studies and took a job at the Carolina Hospital, but then I and about 50 other people got, fired so" she shrugged her shoulders.
"That sucks"
”It’s not as bad as it sounds, I got a job interview at the St. George Hospital, we'll see what happens"
Brian couldn't stop looking at her she was so beautiful, even more beautiful then he could remember.
"Why didn't the guys rip your head of yesterday?" She said
"I bumped into them when I went down Mexico to get some parts that we ordered"

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"Morning sweetie” Charlotte, who was reading the newspaper, greeted her cousin as she came in to the kitchen "how was the nightshift?"
"You know the same old"
"Not much, huh?"
"Not a shit" Sarah poured her self some juice "I'm gone hit the shower, then the bed" she said and started to walk out of the kitchen
"Alright see you tonight?"
"Yeah sure" Sarah stopped "by the way, Oliver called yesterday; he said he’ll get your stuff by the end of the week"
."Good" Charlotte said coldly. Her whole world had been turned up side down when he died, she had loved him more then anything in the whole world and she was going to take away what they loved the most.

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Letty woke up to the smell of pancakes, she rolled over to see that she had taken all the cover and left Dominic in nothing but his boxers. She always managed to take it all, but she never knew how. She carefully placed a kiss on his bare back and coved it up before she slipped through the door and down to the kitchen.
"Hey good morning" Mia said as she came into the room, she looked so happy.
The only time Letty had seen Mia this happy was when Anthony gave her a cat for her sixth birthday, but it died after being run over by a bus. She had stayed in her room almost a week after that and she didn't come out until Anthony promised that they would go to Disneyland.
"Morning" she replayed; she smiled at Brian, and gave him a nod.
"You want some pancakes?"
"Yeah sure" she took a bowl from the cabinet "you want some cereals, my little prince" She said to Jason and kissed the top of his head as she passed him. She opened the pantry, when something brushed against her leg the thing dispread into the living room, which Tachie, who has been laying under the table noticed, and quickly pursue the chase
"WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT!?" Letty more yelled then asked
"Ooohh he's alive" Mia said and briskly walked into the room where sound high squeaking and dark barking came from. Letty looked at Brian for an explanation but he just looked as confused as she was
"No Tachie leave him alone!" Mia exclaimed as Brian, Letty with Jason on her hip came in. Mia tried to pull the dog away, but Tachie was too strong. The dog started to bark, every time she bark Jason laugh even more, some how he thought it was funny, he always laugh when she barked.
”Tachie! That’s enough” Letty said and immediately dog stopped, but she was still on her guard, she wasn't going give up that easy.
"Mia what is that?" Brian asked
"It’s Kyle" Mia replied and got down on her knees to check if it still was under the couch
"How's Kyle?"
"Oh it's my rat"
"You’re what?!” Letty exclaimed, she slowly started to back away from the couch
"My rat" Mia said as she got up for the floor
"Mia you've bought a rat!" Brian said, he was just as chocked as Letty was
"Well I didn't bought him, he kind of moved in, you see..." the rat aka Kyle, took a chance to make a run for it. He headed for the basement door that the guys, luckily, had left opened. He found his refuge under the dryer.
"Letty tell Tachie to back off" Mia said as they stormed after Kyle and Tachie down stairs.
”Mia it's a rat....R A T" trying to shout down the black dogs barking.
"What a hell is going on out here?" Vince voice was groggy.
"Mia has a rat!” Letty started to freak out.
"How has a what?" Leon asked with a yawn he walked out of his room.
"Mia has a rat!" Letty repeated.
"Wow that's so cool, Mia" Leon exclaimed.
"It’s a rat, they are not cool, they are icky" and with that said Letty walked back up to the kitchen with Jason.
”what’s up with her?" Mia asked and looked at the guys.
"oh..yeah...right she has a thing for rats" Vince answered her.
"Since when?"
"I don't know ..since her pregnancy" He sniffed in the air. ”Do I smell pancakes?"
"Yeah you do "she rolled her eyes as Vince and Leon stormed upstairs. Tachie who had lost interest in her new friend, rushed after the two men in hope of that some one would play with her.
"Some people never grow up" Brian said and shaked his head. Mia laughed at his comment.


"Damn dog" he mumbled into the pillow, Tachie’s bark echoed through out the house. He tried to go back to sleep, but it was pointless, so he decided to take a shower instead. It felt good to be home, it didn't matter how much he loved Mexico this would always be home. He had misted the house and, of course, Mia and the L A streets. Sure he raced in Mexico, but there was something special about the LA streets.
The kitchen was empty when he entered. He poured himself some coffee, and 2 seconds later Letty came storming into the room, with Jason. The guys shortly entered the kitchen.
"Hey what's going on? ” Dom asked, as Brian and Mia walked into the kitchen.
"Mia has a rat!" Letty repeated, and poured some milk into the bowel for Jason.
"What!" Dom looked at Mia for an explanation
"Ooh for crying out loud, his isn't my rat, his just kind of lives here, it's not like I brought him or anything, and by the way Letty didn't you have a rat?"
"No! I had a guinea pig! ”Letty was still not over the whole Kyle thing.
"Ooh yeah, Dippsy" Mia took a seat next to Brian.
"No, Lumpsy" Letty corrected
"So what happened to Lumpsy?" Brian asked
Letty set down beside Jason, how was splashing with the cereals and the milk in the bowel.
”well, someone let her out" she looked at Mia "and then somebody drover over her " she said and looked over to Vince.
Vince put his hands up in defence "ey! If she was stupid enough to believe that you can sleep under a car and not get killed, then it's her own fault" He said and shoved a piece of pancake in his mouth.
Letty was about to say something when Nicky walked through the door
"morning” she happily greeted everybody, she got "morning" and "hey”‘s in return, Tachie started to growl, but stopped when Dominic told her to. Nicky noted that Letty was looking at her a little bit longer then the rest of the group, maybe it was just in her imagination.
"Hey Mia did I leave the colour charts here yesterday?"
"Yeah I think they are in my room" she said and put her cup in the sink.
"Okay" Nicky said before she left the room. The silence was interrupted by Mia’s cell phone.
"Did anyone more have the feeling that they have seen Nicky before..I mean before yesterday?" Leon asked when Mia was out of reach.
"Yeah I have seen here before too" Brian said
"Yeah me too, but I don't know where” Letty admitted
"No never” Dom said
"Me neither" Vince replied


Nicky found the colour charts on top of Mia's desk, she grabbed the charts and closed the door, she head for the stairs but she stopped outside Dominic’s and Letty's bedroom, she carefully pushed the door opened and slowly walked in, she had never been in this room before. Mia had always had the door closed, the room was painted in different colours of white, big bed was unmade and there was clothes on the floor. Almost beside the door was a bureau with a lot of pictures and a big mirror, she noticed the dog tag that was hung on the side. She took a closer look it said Anthony Toretto, she looked down on the picture they where all pictures of them, the family. She carefully lifted a picture, it was a wedding picture it was old, the woman was wearing a long white dress and was smiling with the brightest smile she had where seen she reminded her about Mia,
this must been their parents she thought to herself. She put it down and took up another one this one it was also a weeding picture, but this was a picture from Dom and Letty's wedding. Letty was wearing a much simpler dress then the other woman had, but the smile was just as bright, you could see that the man in the other picture was Dom's father because they had the same smile. She put it down and let her eyes wander over the photos; she noted that Letty was in a lot of pictures, she realised that she probably should sneak out before anyone catch her. She took one last glance over the pictures
"So Leticia, you seem to be the heart of the team” she whispered to herself and then left the room.


"You found them” Mia asked as Nicky came downstairs
"Yepp I found them" She answered and held them up.
"You want breakfast"
"No thank, I got to go, see you guys" she said and quickly disappear through the door.
"Yeah I should chance and get going "Mia rose from the table started to walked to the stairs
"Hey wait up" Letty joined her friend, leaving the boys to themselves. The two women didn't saying anything as they climbed the stairs.
"Mia" Letty stopped outside the room, she looked at Mia how had reached her own door. Letty hesitated for a second
"How long have you known Nicky?"
"For about 4 years"
"And how much do you know about her?"
"She moved here for about 5 years as after her husband was in a car accident, she now lives with a friend. “Why did you ask?"
Letty shrugged ”I just wondered" she said and walked into to her room.
"I'm not replacing if that's what you thought" Mia shouted
”I know” Letty shouted back, and Mia got into her room.


About 5 minutes late Mia was ready go, she was about to leave when she remembered, she opened the bottom draw, and pick up the thick white envelop.
I knew I didn't have to get ride of them.
She closed the door and walked down to the kitchen, the guys was almost finished eating, she grabbed her keys. "Dom, Hector called before and said that there was a race tonight, are you up for it" she didn't have to ask twice
"Yeah sure why not, we could take a look, right guys?"
"Hell yeah” Leon shouted
"What about you buster, are you coming?" Vince asked and looked over to Brian.
He looked over at Mia for a second "sure why not"
"Alright it's set then"
"What’s set?" Letty asked when she entered the room.
"We’re going to check out the race tonight, are you on?" Dom said
"Sure" she grapped Tachie's leash that was hung beside the door on the hall stand. "Come on girl" the dog stretched and walked over to her owner. "See you guys later" Letty said and walked out into the sun.
"I should go, bye" Mia said, started to walk but stopped, and turned to Dom "ooh... before I forget" she tossed the envelope to Dom " I think this belongs to you guys, have fun" and with that said she walked through the door.

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please! tell me what you think..
I got one more chapter but there are some lines that I want in Spanish so if anyone would be kind and maybe translate them for me..then I would be very grateful

tezzi22 - August 7, 2008 10:35 PM (GMT)
loved it :D update soon ;)

furiousfan88 - August 28, 2008 05:37 AM (GMT)
Pls update.... this is a good story

Michelle2686 - August 28, 2008 06:56 PM (GMT)
This is good, i cant wait to find out what's up with Nicky.

Oh and if you havent found anyone to help you translate what you want in Spanish, I can help you. You can pm me.

myppe - September 2, 2008 11:55 AM (GMT)
first of all thanks for all the reviews and a very big thank you to Michelle2686 how helped me with the spanish...and second I just want to say that I really, really, really don't like this chapter..anyway

Chapter 6: Old "friend"

Even if it was early the sun was already high in the sky Letty walked down the road that she walked many times before, she walked pass the house she once lived in, it was a painted in a new white color. The mother of the family was trying to put the kids in the car, while the father tried to load the car with their luggage. The kids, two girls and a boy, was struggling, they didn't want to go not yet anyhow,
"you promised us ice cream” one of the girls complained, the mother took a deep breath before she answered " yes I did but you guys have to wait until we gets to Aunt Silvia" Letty smiled at the situation. She was in a good mood,. She had loved Mexico but it hadn't been the same without Mia. It had been empty, especial after Fransesca and Andreo left. She hadn't had anyone to talk to, sure the guys had been there for her but it wasn't the same. She was almost home. When she felt the presence of some one, but who ever is was she didn't like it.

"well ,well what do we got here " Letty turned towards the familiar voice.
Oh god please don't let it be him
her fears was right it was him, right in front her stood Johnny Tran, alive.

"I thought you and your friends was in Mexico " he said studying her body.

"and we thought you were dead, bummer huh?" she crossed her arms, Tachie growl . He took a step closer and looked down at the black dog and then at Letty.

"feisty, just like it's owner" Letty really wanted to kick his ass.

" tell me Leticia where is Jesse" he said with a grin on this face, he knew that Jesse had died for the wounds, he only did it to get her going but she didn't move, she didn't even blink she just kept looking at him.

"where's Lance" she replied coldly. He started circled around her.

"tell me, Letty, why are you still with Dom?" He almost whispered in her ear.

"how do you know that I'm still with him?" she replied.

"the ring is giving it away" he smirking, pointing at her finger, she knew that Johnny always had a thing for her.
He pulled a arm around her waist and pulled her closer to him. She could fell his breath on her neck and she didn't like it.

"I still don't know why an exotic flower like you see in an ass like Dominic, when you can be with me" he whispered in her ear God she want to punch him

"you know what, I'm rather a dandelion then one of your daisies" she said and elbowed him in the stomach. The punch almost made him fall to the ground.

" Dom might be a ass sometimes but his not a killer, Johnny, that's you!" She said and turned around, before she even had the chance to react he got up, gripped her wrist and swung her back.

"you tell your dear Dominic that he better watch where his going" he said threatening and let her go. She watched as he walked over to his black Audi TT

"see you around Letty" he said before he got in and drove away. She sighed and looked down at Tachie: how just ignored her.
" let's go"

Dom walked back down the stairs with his son. Leon was no were to be seeing. Vince and Jesse was watching cartoons, and Brian was washing the last plates. When the door swung open and a very piss off Letty entered along with a happy dog.

"hey what's wrong?" Dom asked as he followed Letty into the kitchen with Jason. He watched her take a bottle of water out of the refrigerator.

" Me dijiste que estaba muerto! "she almost screamed at him. Dom handed Jason to Brian and gave him a look saying that he probably should leave, and so he quickly disappeared from the room.

" what are you talking about, Let?" He asked calmly, she only spoke in Spanish when she was really upset.

" El primo con los pantalones de culebra!" Dom froze, Johnny was still alive.

" Como sabes eso? "He asked.

" Por que lo conoci, por eso" she stated She took a deep breath.

"oh shit!" he sat down on the closest chair and ran his hand over his head "what did he say?" he looked up at Letty; how seemed to be calmed down.

she sighed " the usual shit.....about you.".she paused, took a sip of the water "...about Jesse...Prometeme que no vas a hacer nada estupido, okay? " he walked over and pulled his arms around her.

" Yo te prometo" he said and kissed the top over her head. She rested her head against his chest when the white envelope on the table caught her attention.

"what's that?" she nodded towards it. He let go of her and grabbed the unopened envelope that he got from Mia. He opened it and let the items inside spill out on the table

"no way"
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Like I said before I don't like this chapter at all...and for you all non-speaking-spanish people like myself :P :

Me dijiste que estaba muerto! - you told me that he was dead!
El primo con los pantalones de culebra! - snake pants cousin!
Como sabes eso? - how do you know that?
Por que lo conoci, por eso - because I meet him, that's how
Prometeme que no vas a hacer nada estupido, okay? - promise me that you won't do anything stupid, okay?
Yo te prometo - I promise






furiousfan88 - September 2, 2008 06:39 PM (GMT)
OMG... whats in the envelope!!!!.... more pls :)

rosedragon - September 2, 2008 11:25 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
and we thought you were dead, bummer huh?" she crossed her arms,


HAHAHA.. I love how tran and letty kept answering each other question with a question lol

loveangel19 - September 4, 2008 07:13 PM (GMT)
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