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fox_ryder - May 28, 2007 06:24 AM (GMT)
TITLE:broken
AUTHOR:fox_ryder/sky_angel
ILLISTRATOR:sky_angel
SUMMARY:when ana-lucia is taken by the others sawyer jack kate locke and sayid will try thier best to get her back.....hopefully
RATING:PG:13 and some R
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its a early saturday moring the day after the others came and took ana since then sawyer has lost his hope his love and is always in a bad mood or never want to talk to anyone.....we see sawyer outside his tent...hey says kate he looks at her.So uhh you felling alright??says kate gee freckels MY GIRL JUST GOT TAKEN BY THE OTHERS HOW DO YOU THINK I FEEL!!!!!!! yells sawyer gee sorry since ana-lucia got taken you been acting like its the end of the world says kate gee freckels if jack got taken what would you do says sawyer. id go after him even wen he tells me to stay back says kate......well sorry for you sawyer, just to let you know were going to them (gets in sawyers face) and were going to get ana back whatever it take ainokea if we have to kill someone shes coing back says kate.alright call me when yall are going says sawyer okay says kate then she walks away.....then a couple hours pass and its night fall.....

we see sawyer sound asleep like a baby thinking im broken i have nothing left that woman was the only thing my ass had as a friend on this island....kate walks in.....ana-lucia i love her says sawyer in his sleep gee i neva know you love her that much says kate jesus kate what the hell says sawyer pack your thing were leaving now says kate alright alright sasys sawyer then he quickly packs his things oh yeah and well need guns says kate he sighs he give kate the ammount of 5 guns including one 4 him...weres everyone says sawyer they wanted us to meet by the caves says kate.. good place to hide says sawyer shut it sawyer says kate the 2 walk to the caves so uhh sheedah why are going with us says sawyer because i want to says kate you also get what you want says sawyer i do not!! says kate um hm lets see ohh im kate and i want everything to go out my way or ill trow a hissy fit says sawyer no wonder ana never liked you says sawyer what is that suppose to mean says kate it means that ana (shoves kate into the bushes)
*wispers* is pregnant says sawyer WHAT!!! says kate shhhh!!! says sawyer but? how? why?? says kate i dont know it was after the night i caught the pig in the jungle says sawyer when jack/ana had an argument??? says kate yeah says sawyer okay i wont tell says kate okay says sawyer......they walk to the caves...

LITTLE GIRL:but i will..

(kate/sawyer reach the caves)
KATE:heyy
JACK:hey we ready
KATE:yeah mr grump jus got out of bed
SAWYER:who you callin mr grump
KATE:you
JACK:hey lets jus go okay
SAYID:jacks right we must go
LOCKE:if we wanna get there by morning we better go
(kate sees the little girl)

KATE:jesus!!!
SAWYER:what the
JACK:theres nothing
LOCKE:what did you see kate??
KATE:a little girl
SAYID:what did she look lyke
KATE:uhh i dont remember
LOCKE:seriously
KATE:yes jhon
SAYID:enogh,we must go

then then group walks into the jungle kate still afraid is close to sawyer why they are walking kate looks alover the place still in shock on what she saw.

JACK:kate3 you okay
kate:yeah
sawyer:i think she still scared
jack:okay kate what did she look lyke??
kate:umm she looked like she was 12 short with long curled black hair
sayid:skin color
kate:same as ana's skin color
jack:i think were seeing a ghost
kate:jack she wasnt a ghost!!
locke: *hers crying in the jungle* yall here that
kate:yeah it sounds like a little girl
sayid:think ana knows her??
locke:possible chance
jack:lets go
kate:alright

the 5 of them walk into the jungle myseriously wondering who this 12 year old girl is and why is she here???? does ana know her did she do something to her??? we dont know..

kate:jack you think ana has something to do with this???
jack:why would ana have something to do with this???
kate:she lost a kid jack you think thats her
jack:did she have any cloths on??
kate:yeah a dress
jack:anything else??
kate:she was holding a teddy bear
jack:go on
kate:uhh,umm she was wearing black stokings and shoes and had her hair in a half style
jack:ohkay
locke:were here
kate:what do you mean
locke:HEY TOM WERE HERE GIVE US WHAT WE WANT
jack:no ones here
tom:you sure about that jack
kate:tom,its kate give us our girl and well never bother you again *looks all scared*
tom:whats wrong kate????
kate:nothing
tom:seriously kate whats wrong
kate:umm i saw a little girl
tom:uh huh
kate:we wanna know if she knows ana in anyway
tom:gee for her long lost daughter she really dosnt know her
THE GROUP:WHAT!!!!!!!!!
kate:tom jus give us ana plz
tom:alright,bring her out alex
jack:(her's struggling in he jungle)
sawyer:plz god let this be her
alex:here (shoves ana in tom's hands)
tom:now wait a minute
jack:wait what,tom wehad an agreement
kate:let her go
tom:tell her who you saw.....kate
kate:why me
tom:(points a gun to ana's head) TELL HER WHO YOU SAW KATE!!!
kate:umm ana remember when you told us u lost ur kid
ana:noding her head
kate:shes out in the jungle
ana:eyes widen
kate:yeah
tom:good girl kate.....now to prove it to ana your gunna call the little girl
kate:i dont know how
tom:do you seriously want her to die kate
kate:nope
tom:then take us to were you saw her

LITTLE GIRL:(appears in the back of jack)
ALL OF THEM:holey sh-t!!! (everyone jumps)
LITTLE GIRL:(runs away crying)
kate:hey wait (chases after her)
tom:follow her
everyone follows kate to see who this little girl really is....
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PART 2

kate is chasing after the little girl who is sprinting through the jungle witch leads them to the water fall

kate:were she go
tom:the hell wee is she
kate:i dont know
sayid:shhh
*here's crying*
locke"is it her??
kate:yeah
kate:you guys gotta hide
tom:why
kate:because you all scare her
tom:fine everyone but kate behind the bushes
*they hide behind the bushes*
kate:umm hey you can come out im not gunna hurt you
kate:seriously im not
*then she comes out of the bushes*
kate:hi
little girl:were's my momma??
kate:looks at tom
tom:say anything
kate:shes waiting for you
little girl:were
kate:i dont know
little girl:your lying to me *drops her doll*
kate:no no imnot
little girl:*getting mad* you dont know my momma
kate:yes yes i do
little girl: no you dont!!! '
kate:tom a little help!!!
tom:pushes ana out of the jungle
ana:you could have let me walk out f***en ass hole!!
kate:ana
ana:kate
kate:reunite *runs in the jungle*

as you know what people do when they reunite hugg kiss cry blah blah blah sawyer says

kate:aint you happy you got your girl back
sawyer:no freckels i love it
kate:what now you sudenly dont want her
sawyer:no...fathering tips
kate:dont look at me
jack:im not a da sorry
sayid:im not either
locke:jus be nice teach right from wrong and watch
saweyer;thank you (jumps on/kisses locke)
kate:discusting
jack:same here
sayid:yuck
tom:okay others out *they walk away*
jack:guys wanna leave
kate:wait 4 ana
sawyer:she knows the way back
kate:guys come on we came here for her now you dont want her
jack:fine tell her lets go
kate:sawyer you tell her
ana:how bout all yall shut it and lets go
sawyer:yess mom *he jokes*
ana: *looks at sawyer*
little girl:HE HE she laughs
sawyer:what you laughing at
kate:sawyer leave her alone
jack:so what now
locke:sorry
jack:what are we gunna do with her
ana:uhh keep her
jack:you serious
ana:she might be a spy you think
jack/kate/sawyer/sayid/locke: YEAH!!!
ana:yall wanna go back brused???
the group:no
ana:shut the f-ck up then!!
jack:okay ill check her when we get back
ana:alrighties then
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LATER THAT NIGHT
they reached the camp by midnight and everyone is questioning about the new girl the campers are making her scared

sun:trust her shes a spy!
jack:sun shes 12
sun:that doesnt mean anything
jack:why would the others send a kid
sun:that i dont know
naomi:were you find her
jack:out in the jungle
sun:how long
jack:all thi stime
naomi:so only now she wants to come back
jack:she didnt know the way
sun:12 years old explains it
jack:explains what
juliet:shes not one of us,jacks right she didnt know the way
sun:how do you know
juliet:ive been here my whole life i know everyone here ive never seen her
sun:alright i agree any one else???
jack: *everyone rises thier hands* okay im gunna gi check her now

then he walks to the hatch were kate sawyer locke sayid sawyer and ana are at

jack:heyy were is she
ana:sleeping
jack:wake her up
ana:okay
sayid:what did the camp say
jack:hey belive us
sawyer:okay so who still thinks shes an other
jack:no one
ana:okay what do you need to do
jack:examine her
ana:do it

then dr giggles examies her and everyone is still in mystery who she is.... :)

Carlos garcia - October 28, 2007 02:32 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (fox_ryder @ May 28 2007, 12:24 AM)
TITLE:broken
AUTHOR:fox_ryder/sky_angel
ILLISTRATOR:sky_angel
SUMMARY:when ana-lucia is taken by the others sawyer jack kate locke and sayid will try thier best to get her back.....hopefully
RATING:PG:13 and some R
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
its a early saturday moring the day after the others came and took ana since then sawyer has lost his hope his love and is always in a bad mood or never want to talk to anyone.....we see sawyer outside his tent...hey says kate he looks at her.So uhh you felling alright??says kate gee freckels MY GIRL JUST GOT TAKEN BY THE OTHERS HOW DO YOU THINK I FEEL!!!!!!! yells sawyer gee sorry since ana-lucia got taken you been acting like its the end of the world says kate gee freckels if jack got taken what would you do says sawyer. id go after him even wen he tells me to stay back says kate......well sorry for you sawyer, just to let you know were going to them (gets in sawyers face) and were going to get ana back whatever it take ainokea if we have to kill someone shes coing back says kate.alright call me when yall are going says sawyer okay says kate then she walks away.....then a couple hours pass and its night fall.....

we see sawyer sound asleep like a baby thinking im broken i have nothing left that woman was the only thing my ass had as a friend on this island....kate walks in.....ana-lucia i love her says sawyer in his sleep gee i neva know you love her that much says kate jesus kate what the hell says sawyer pack your thing were leaving now says kate alright alright sasys sawyer then he quickly packs his things oh yeah and well need guns says kate he sighs he give kate the ammount of 5 guns including one 4 him...weres everyone says sawyer they wanted us to meet by the caves says kate.. good place to hide says sawyer shut it sawyer says kate the 2 walk to the caves so uhh sheedah why are going with us says sawyer because i want to says kate you also get what you want says sawyer i do not!! says kate um hm lets see ohh im kate and i want everything to go out my way or ill trow a hissy fit says sawyer no wonder ana never liked you says sawyer what is that suppose to mean says kate it means that ana (shoves kate into the bushes)
*wispers* is pregnant says sawyer WHAT!!! says kate shhhh!!! says sawyer but? how? why?? says kate i dont know it was after the night i caught the pig in the jungle says sawyer when jack/ana had an argument??? says kate yeah says sawyer okay i wont tell says kate okay says sawyer......they walk to the caves...

LITTLE GIRL:but i will..

(kate/sawyer reach the caves)
KATE:heyy
JACK:hey we ready
KATE:yeah mr grump jus got out of bed
SAWYER:who you callin mr grump
KATE:you
JACK:hey lets jus go okay
SAYID:jacks right we must go
LOCKE:if we wanna get there by morning we better go
(kate sees the little girl)

KATE:jesus!!!
SAWYER:what the
JACK:theres nothing
LOCKE:what did you see kate??
KATE:a little girl
SAYID:what did she look lyke
KATE:uhh i dont remember
LOCKE:seriously
KATE:yes jhon
SAYID:enogh,we must go

then then group walks into the jungle kate still afraid is close to sawyer why they are walking kate looks alover the place still in shock on what she saw.

JACK:kate3 you okay
kate:yeah
sawyer:i think she still scared
jack:okay kate what did she look lyke??
kate:umm she looked like she was 12 short with long curled black hair
sayid:skin color
kate:same as ana's skin color
jack:i think were seeing a ghost
kate:jack she wasnt a ghost!!
locke: *hers crying in the jungle* yall here that
kate:yeah it sounds like a little girl
sayid:think ana knows her??
locke:possible chance
jack:lets go
kate:alright

the 5 of them walk into the jungle myseriously wondering who this 12 year old girl is and why is she here???? does ana know her did she do something to her??? we dont know..

kate:jack you think ana has something to do with this???
jack:why would ana have something to do with this???
kate:she lost a kid jack you think thats her
jack:did she have any cloths on??
kate:yeah a dress
jack:anything else??
kate:she was holding a teddy bear
jack:go on
kate:uhh,umm she was wearing black stokings and shoes and had her hair in a half style
jack:ohkay
locke:were here
kate:what do you mean
locke:HEY TOM WERE HERE GIVE US WHAT WE WANT
jack:no ones here
tom:you sure about that jack
kate:tom,its kate give us our girl and well never bother you again *looks all scared*
tom:whats wrong kate????
kate:nothing
tom:seriously kate whats wrong
kate:umm i saw a little girl
tom:uh huh
kate:we wanna know if she knows ana in anyway
tom:gee for her long lost daughter she really dosnt know her
THE GROUP:WHAT!!!!!!!!!
kate:tom jus give us ana plz
tom:alright,bring her out alex
jack:(her's struggling in he jungle)
sawyer:plz god let this be her
alex:here (shoves ana in tom's hands)
tom:now wait a minute
jack:wait what,tom wehad an agreement
kate:let her go
tom:tell her who you saw.....kate
kate:why me
tom:(points a gun to ana's head) TELL HER WHO YOU SAW KATE!!!
kate:umm ana remember when you told us u lost ur kid
ana:noding her head
kate:shes out in the jungle
ana:eyes widen
kate:yeah
tom:good girl kate.....now to prove it to ana your gunna call the little girl
kate:i dont know how
tom:do you seriously want her to die kate
kate:nope
tom:then take us to were you saw her

LITTLE GIRL:(appears in the back of jack)
ALL OF THEM:holey sh-t!!! (everyone jumps)
LITTLE GIRL:(runs away crying)
kate:hey wait (chases after her)
tom:follow her
everyone follows kate to see who this little girl really is....
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

PART 2

kate is chasing after the little girl who is sprinting through the jungle witch leads them to the water fall

kate:were she go
tom:the hell wee is she
kate:i dont know
sayid:shhh
*here's crying*
locke"is it her??
kate:yeah
kate:you guys gotta hide
tom:why
kate:because you all scare her
tom:fine everyone but kate behind the bushes
*they hide behind the bushes*
kate:umm hey you can come out im not gunna hurt you
kate:seriously im not
*then she comes out of the bushes*
kate:hi
little girl:were's my momma??
kate:looks at tom
tom:say anything
kate:shes waiting for you
little girl:were
kate:i dont know
little girl:your lying to me *drops her doll*
kate:no no imnot
little girl:*getting mad* you dont know my momma
kate:yes yes i do
little girl: no you dont!!! '
kate:tom a little help!!!
tom:pushes ana out of the jungle
ana:you could have let me walk out f***en ass hole!!
kate:ana
ana:kate
kate:reunite *runs in the jungle*

as you know what people do when they reunite hugg kiss cry blah blah blah sawyer says

kate:aint you happy you got your girl back
sawyer:no freckels i love it
kate:what now you sudenly dont want her
sawyer:no...fathering tips
kate:dont look at me
jack:im not a da sorry
sayid:im not either
locke:jus be nice teach right from wrong and watch
saweyer;thank you (jumps on/kisses locke)
kate:discusting
jack:same here
sayid:yuck
tom:okay others out *they walk away*
jack:guys wanna leave
kate:wait 4 ana
sawyer:she knows the way back
kate:guys come on we came here for her now you dont want her
jack:fine tell her lets go
kate:sawyer you tell her
ana:how bout all yall shut it and lets go
sawyer:yess mom *he jokes*
ana: *looks at sawyer*
little girl:HE HE she laughs
sawyer:what you laughing at
kate:sawyer leave her alone
jack:so what now
locke:sorry
jack:what are we gunna do with her
ana:uhh keep her
jack:you serious
ana:she might be a spy you think
jack/kate/sawyer/sayid/locke: YEAH!!!
ana:yall wanna go back brused???
the group:no
ana:shut the f-ck up then!!
jack:okay ill check her when we get back
ana:alrighties then
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
LATER THAT NIGHT
they reached the camp by midnight and everyone is questioning about the new girl the campers are making her scared

sun:trust her shes a spy!
jack:sun shes 12
sun:that doesnt mean anything
jack:why would the others send a kid
sun:that i dont know
naomi:were you find her
jack:out in the jungle
sun:how long
jack:all thi stime
naomi:so only now she wants to come back
jack:she didnt know the way
sun:12 years old explains it
jack:explains what
juliet:shes not one of us,jacks right she didnt know the way
sun:how do you know
juliet:ive been here my whole life i know everyone here ive never seen her
sun:alright i agree any one else???
jack: *everyone rises thier hands* okay im gunna gi check her now

then he walks to the hatch were kate sawyer locke sayid sawyer and ana are at

jack:heyy were is she
ana:sleeping
jack:wake her up
ana:okay
sayid:what did the camp say
jack:hey belive us
sawyer:okay so who still thinks shes an other
jack:no one
ana:okay what do you need to do
jack:examine her
ana:do it

then dr giggles examies her and everyone is still in mystery who she is.... :)

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