Ana flew through the hatch door, slamming it as hard as her tired arms would allow, and quickly threw her back onto it, panting deep, heavy, uneven breaths. A drop of sweat slid down her face, curving its way down her soft features, while her sweaty palms pressed hard against the door. In the darkness of their windowless hatch, Ana’s imagination got the best of her as her ears picked up a faint noise. Was it coming from the other side of the door? It was thick, but it wasn’t enough to hold against the strong monster on the other side. The noise came to a sharp stop, silence filled the air. The silence was killing her, it was almost deafening. The rustling continued and every second it lasted she pressed harder against the door, hoping, praying it wouldn’t break through. Well, she hadn’t ever really prayed, but if there was ever a time for it, now would be it. Her stomach was burning. It could be partly from lack of food, but she was pretty sure it was about to jump up out of her face to escape whatever was coming after her. Maybe it wouldn’t kill her…everyone so far who had survived it hadn’t seen the “monster” or animal or whatever it may be…and neither had she…
She tried to satisfy herself with unreasonable ideas, like a child in a thunderstorm. Her eyes had not yet adjusted to the thick darkness she was consumed by. Fear crept into her mind, taking over and letting her suffer. Ana let out a small whimper as a loud noise crept up on her…from the inside of the hatch.
Oh sh*t! Her heart picked up it’s pace, beating faster until she thought it would tare through her chest, its echoes beat loudly in her ears. Ana pressed her back up harder against the door. How the hell did it get in here?! Da*n she wished it wasn’t dark. There was something else in here…someone… another noise startled her as she moved an inch or two from the door, afraid it was about to crash through. Da*nit! She could hear a slight breathing, a soft, restrained one coming closer. Ana turned her head; trying to hear which direction it was coming from. Then a suppressed chuckle escaped into the air as hands tightly grabbed her wrists and forced her backwards, pinning her to the door. Ana screamed frightened. She pushed up against the other using all her strength, almost succeeding in breaking free, but the other was stronger, and held on. Her opponent laughed an amused laugh…a very familiar laugh. Ugh sh*t. Ana sighed, then brought up her knee into the other person’s stomach as hard as she could. “argh!” a painful groan escaped from the other’s mouth. She walked her hand placed heavily on her hip, to turn on the light. “What the...” Ana flipped on the switch, revealing the blonde southerner holding his stomach on the floor, his angry glare set upon her. He began to talk again: “what…” Ana interrupted. “What the hell do you think you’re doing?! You…” she stopped to just glare at him, sitting there laughing at her. “You were so scared! You should’ a seen…” Ana stopped him talking with a blow to the face, sending him stumbling. Sawyer held his jaw with his rough hand but still had a grin on his face as he picked himself up and inched his way toward her. Ana raised her eyebrow and crossed her arms, “it’s not funny.” She said firmly. He slowly got closer to her, so they were almost touching, and cocked his head. “I thought it was.” He laughed. Ana flared her nostrils. He brought his face closer to hers and smiled a big cheesy grin. She shook her head and as sawyer let out a chuckle she brought her hand back for a punch intended for his face. His first instinct was to grab it and twist it, throwing her to the ground, making her scream. She picked herself up, frustrated, and walked towards him pissed. Sh*t, what did he just do?! Ana reached him and gave him an uppercut, sending him to the floor. She ran and sat on top of him, pulling her arm back for another hit. Sawyer’s eyes widened, his hand flew up, grabbing her wrist again and flipping them so he was on top of her. A huge grin on his face suddenly made Ana aware of the intimate position. No. she wasn’t doing this again, she wasn’t a toy. Ana threw him a dirty look. “Get off me sawyer.” Blonde strands of hair fell in front of his questioning glare. “Get. Off.” Ana said, raising her brows. :”I’m not doing this.” She shook her head, looking at him with all seriousness, and studied his face. “Not now.” Ana didn’t know what was going through his mind, although she knew something was going on behind those deep ocean blue eyes. He exhaled a sigh of defeat and confusion as he let go of her left wrist and puller his self off of her. A wave of relief glided over Ana’s body, but was quickly turned to a blanket of fire, stinging her stomach. Sawyer jerked her towards his face, using her wrist, so their lips were slightly touching and whispered, “not now, huh, chica?” she stared at him angrily as she tore her wrist from his grip and stood up angrily. Ana took one last look at him before she walked out the door. She had no doubt she could handle the animal out here better than the one inside the hatch. \



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so?? i know it's not as good as the rest on here, but tips and advise would be great to help me!

thanks!

noel

^^lmao classic Ana :P I love it!

^^ :huh: you liar! it's good as! dunno what you've been smoking.....

so uh...... sequal? :D

Woah :o It's freakin' great! :bow: *does a Sana Day dance, didn't expect a fic even if it's unrelated* :D :wub: I love the descriptions and that not much is happening and still it's a fic, and a very GOOD fic - it's a talent I don't have :P

thanks!!! lol. hoelli..psshh. lol. yeah, i tried to make it beleiveable, ukno? tried to picture exactly what would happen...there's some stuff in there i forgot to add and subtract, but i'm actually semi happy with it. :D

but still...

:bow: i worship at your feet, kate and kenz.[by the way, i told you! i only deal the smoke! gosh! lol]
i'm like, ____________ this big compared to ppl at school, but on here i'm like, __this big. lol.

neways, advise?

no, don't think there will be a sequel. just getting used to starting and finishing. ya know, just experimenting for now. :D

thanks!!

And that's a talent I really admire :wub: 'Cause I mostly go with dialogue for some reason, sometimes silliness, sometimes action, sometimes even a still scene, but I SUCK at descriptions like this ;)

:bow:

The only suggestion I'd have is better text formatting, though personally I don't care and don't really notice even, but I know one of my first fics got suggestion not to be cluttered :D
Oh, and I think rating is required :)
No writing suggestions from me :P :D

how do i rate it? and how should it be rated?
thanks for the suggestion, hoelli. i'll remember that for the next one. :D
lol. i think diolouge is the worst thing from me, but i like my discriptions. lol. thanks

Like movies, G, PG, PG-13 or R, depends on content and words they use, I think it would be PG :D You just add rating to the title :)

Hee, it's like reversed for me :D (:bow:) My only fic that wasn't heavily dialogue based was my ConMama one (I like this fic a lot :blush: :D), well, except for Ethan's Diary which is totally different than anything ;)
Your writing is great! :wub:

lol. thanks. :hug:

i know what i'm supposed to do...but how do i add it to the title?

I believe if you edit the first post you can change the title too :)

Pish posh, Noel. Don't you dare say you're not good at dialouge. You are, you're superely are supreme over me!! Lovely fic :D I'm in love :wub:

P.S.: Anyone ever said pish posh? It's fun to say :D

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!

You finally posted it :D :D :D :D

And didn't I tell you it would be good? No wait ill answer taht for you, YES!! And was it? No wait ill answer that one too, YES!!

now we need to force you into making more :poke:

ooohh I like it

Wow, that's rad. :clap:

lol. i just realised i was yelling at the computer. lol.
...thanks. :)
maybe not more to this one...okay...maybe.......
i'm not good at commiting to one story. :( lol

ouch ouch ouch ouch ouch ouch ouch ouchooooo!!! *breaks carol's stick* muahhhaaahahaaahahahaha.

thanks, guys. hmm ima see if i can change the rating. if not, kenz said that leigh will?
bdw, kenz, pish posh, with all this, "youre better than me" crap. lol.
once you finish typing the FOB fic, [and get corpal tunnel] and post it, lol. we can decide. *evil laugh*

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! How did I not see this before!!!??? OMG I love it! Aws0me aws0me aws0me!!!! :D :D :D

You should post it on the sana forum! :P

LOL. thanks. the whole other forum? or the thread on here? and i still can't remember what the url is for the other forum. i'm just retarded like that. lol

The other forum. Heres the link. You have an acount on there! Go see!

Sana Forum

lol. okay i'm on..bt which place would i put it on? lol. which catagory?

I think in the Post Sesson 2 section. Its set after their little meating in the jungle right?

correctamundo!!!! lol

i'm thinking just putting a bunch of different sana oneshots on here. it'd be better instead of starting a new thread for each, i mean...

i dunno.

*wails* :sniff: :cry:

*grabs another 1*
:poke:

hee hee oh and look!! This time he brought along a friend

:poke:

yeah thats the one :) if you ever want to find it just look in my sig :) you will find it there :)

*holds hands up*thanks!! hey. hey i would try to hug you..but those... stupid sticks...are in the way!!!!

Hey, the more creativity the better ;) :D And it's really great writing, so it deserves to be noticed ^_^

:brow:

okay...

lol.

*drops stick*

*screams*

I WANNA HUG :cry:

BTW hun, I LOVE your 3rd icon in your sig :wub: it's soooo cute lol. :)

aww, carol!! *grabs carol and hugs tightly*
there you go! lol heehee

oh, and hoelli made it! lol. how cute?!

Pish posh, there will be no typing of the FOB story, considering this is a MICHELLE website. Plus, I'd hate to put these people to sleep. *ahem* Besides, it's be a year until I was caught up with typing it. I'm pretty sure NO ONE wants to read about my stupid Fall Out Boy story, anyway.

YAY I GOT A HUG :)

That explains it then, her work is amazing :) :wub:

Noel's work is amazing :wub:

*slaps kenz in the face*

GET AHOLD OF YOUR SELF!!!!!!!!!

damn dude!

*pats carol on the head*

so i'm thinking of writing a little followup to this...but that's as far as it will go, because i wanna start a new story. :D

Huh? I was just complimenting you. Why do i have to get a hold of myself?

w00tness!! I'm excited :D

wh00tness...why are you exited.

i've got AFI stuck in my head. lol.

kenzie, do you have any ideas for what a new one shot should be about?

i'd liek ur imput. :D

*knocks on head* I got nothing.

AFI rocks.

I'm excited about your continuation :D

lol. i'm typing it rite now...but i'm writing as it comes...
still don't know what's gonna happen
it will surprise me as much as you. lol

what'd I miss????

noel you're writing another one????? *runs and hugs you* :hug:

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :P

Ooooo I can't wait :D

this isn't as good as i would have liked...but i feel like i'm getting better everytime i write. :D so..enjoy?

please give tips!

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Ana walked, stepping heavily through the jungle. The hot sun danced on her skin through the spaces on the trees she passed under. Her anger burned like the hot air she was stranded in.

Da*n she hated him. No… she didn’t hate him, just what he did to her. How he made her feel. He could play with her mind like a puppeteer, sort of…but I guess that’s what you can expect from a con man.

Sharp rocks and sticks crushed underneath her feet, the noises blending with the sound of the soft brook flowing next to her.

She was extremely attracted to him, but half of her just told her to let him be, all she was feeling was lust.

The other half, she liked better; that half let her realize, not only did he have a great body, and perfect face, but, his personality was…cute. Sure, sure I know what you’re thinking: He’s a total redneck b-tch, who everyone hates…how in the world can you be attracted to his personality? Well, everyone hated her too, after…

Thinking of that brought stinging pain to the back of Ana’s eyes, she didn’t want to be hated, and it just always seemed to happen.

No matter how hard she tried, no matter what she did, or how much of an effort she’d put into making people like her, she always got the same result; she was hated.

Maybe that’s how sawyer was. That’s one thing they had in common, they both shared the honor of being the most hated people on the island. Only sawyer seemed to like being hated. That’s something else she sort of…liked. It made no sense to Ana at all, but he was so different, she liked having to guess at him.

Ana welcomed the breeze, which wrapped itself around her, lifting her heavy curls off her shoulders. She dropped to her knees by the edge of the stream, and bent over looking into the water at the pebbles on the bottom. She pulled off her shoes and rolled up her pant legs, sticking her feet into the cold, shallow water.

It shouldn’t be this hard. He was an annoying little country boy, just a pest and that was it, that’s all it had to be. The other side of her mind got her attention again. He’s rude, and perverse, all he cares about is your body.

Ana shook it off, and moved her attention to the water running over her feet. her eyes followed it from her tan toes down a couple of feet more until it stopped in a little pool.
In the pool, laid the reflection of the possessor of her thoughts:

Without looking at him Ana sighed, “Whadda you want, cowboy?”

He smirked and tilted his head as Ana watched his reflection disappear from the pool.

“’figured you’d be to the beach by now chica.” He plopped himself down next to her and stared at the water, that was slowly soaking into his jeans. “What you still out here for?”

After a few moments, she picked up a pebble between her toes as she spoke. “I needed to think.” She said simply.

Her response brought a chuckle to sawyer’s lips. “Didn’t take you for the thinking type.” He said sarcastically. When he saw she wasn’t in a laughing mood, he decided to try responding in a serious way.

“What about?” he narrowed his eyes as he shifted his whole body to face her.

Ana kept her gaze on the water. After a couple minutes of silence, sawyer knew what she wasn’t telling him. He let out a sigh as his eyes traced her shape, and followed the hair that fell over her shoulders.

Ana could feel his gaze on her. She looked up to him and their eyes locked. Why the hell was it so difficult to breathe?

“What?” she managed to whisper. His eyes stayed locked on hers as he tucked her bangs behind her ear. His touch made Ana’s heart skip a beat. She didn’t protest as Sawyer moved closer, his hand caressing the back of her neck.

Damn him. damn him for making her want him. God, he was so talented. One minute she would hate him, the next she’d be in a situation like this. But right now…now she couldn’t help but want him.

A warm breeze lifted he whispy strands of blonde out of his face, which fell back down into his eyes sloppily.
As sawyer’s lips caught her attention Ana struggled to keep herself under control. But, God, he made it so hard.

Her eyes were glued to his, as he pulled her up closer to him, his hand sitting on her thigh.

Without really thinking of what might happen, Ana leaned in, his breath tickling her cheek, and softly kissed his lower lip. She rested her hands on his chest as he continued the kiss, with more passion, their lips crashing together. By the time he slipped his tongue into her mouth, she knew something wasn’t right.

Ana pulled away, breathing heavy breaths, and leaned her head on his chest. “I’m sorry.” She whispered.

After a few seconds, sawyer placed his hand on her back, and leaned closer to her ear, whispering: “don’t be.”


“No…”Ana shook her head, disappointed in herself. She stood up, and turned around to begin walking towards the beach again.

Sawyer waited until he could see her no more, then threw himself into the brook joyfully. The water flowed over his chest. It felt so good in the humid air. His thoughts were taken to the girl who had just walked away. Now he knew how she felt: confused.

He softly ran his finger over his lip, remembering the Latina he had just shared the last few moments with. The wind came back, kissing his cheek, sawyer sighed a soft sigh. “Damn.”
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little cheezy..ikno. but, i tried. :D

OMFGGGGGGGGGGG NOEL!!!!! :o

I thought u said u couldn't write u liar! that was so good I loved it. :P :hug:

:D

thankyou.

that was really great noel!! loved it! please continue... :)

:clap:

:bow:

Woah. I LOVE how you see them, so true, they finally can be themselves and still it's try for them to accept it.
I love these bits, and the kiss, and the confused Sawyer 'cause it's so true too, it's wonderful, Chica! :wub: