Title: A Night to Remember (R)
Description: Sana hotness :D
devilish_angel - April 5, 2007 08:06 AM (GMT)
okay this is just a random as ONE SHOT I came up with a little while ago, I posted it on the Sana forum and thought I might as well post it here too. it's kinda ever so slightly very R Rated. I duno if it's good or anything coz I've never written anything like this before so be honnest with me but uhhhh yea, here goes:
(btw it's not set on the island, sort of 'alternate universe' :D )
He starred at her from across the room, watching the way she swung her hips to the beat of the music. Her ebony hair tumbled over her tanned shoulders, complimenting the red dress she wore which fitted perfectly around her gorgeous body.
He almost hadn’t come to the party that night, but Jack had convinced him to come at the last minute and he hadn’t regretted it since he walked through the door, since he laid his eyes on her. Ana Lucia. He knew she’d noticed him too, several times that night he’d caught her eye and held her gaze until it was awkwardly broken.
She felt his eyes burning into her and she knew he was watching. Part of her was confused, but more then confused she was curious. She was flattered at the attention, James had been staring at her since she walked in the door with her friends earlier that night. As she danced she stole a glance at him and sure enough he was still watching. She grinned to herself, wondering if he would make a move.
The night progressed and Ana found herself sitting at the bar alone, Kate and Libby were dancing and she’d lost sight of Shannon. Her eyes darted to where James was talking with Sayid, and hardly paying him any attention. Then his eyes met with hers yet again and she found herself captured by his piercing blue gaze.
“Hey there.”
Breaking the stare, Ana turned to see clean-cut guy grinning at her
“Hey” She grinned back
“Dan” The guy held out his hand
“Ana Lucia” She shook it
“You’re not dancing?” He questioned as he handed her a drink
“Neither are you” She pointed out
“Touche.” He nodded
Ana laughed
James watched in envy as the man flirted shamelessly with her. She’d sat with him for the past hour, just drinking and talking. The music pounded in his ears, feeding his frustration.
“Hey stranger”
He looked down to see Kate in front of him smiling
He nodded
“Come dance with me” She demanded, and pulled him to the dance floor.
As he danced he glanced over at her every now and then. He noticed her composure was gone, the drinks were beginning to affect her, but she kept drinking non the less. It made him sick to see her with the stranger. His stomach churned as he watched the guy brush his hand down her arm, the way he was looking at her drove him crazy.
By the time James looked again, they were gone. His eyes searched the crowed wildly. Across the room he could see a tipsy figure in a red dress being guided out the door. He left Kate alone and pushed through the crowd to the door. By the time he reached them she was getting in his car. Blind with rage He charged at the sleeze, sending him flying to the ground.
“Hey!” She shouted as she watched them tumble around on the ground, throwing fists and shouting. In her dizzy state she could hardly tell who was who. She marched up to them, attempting to pry them apart. She had almost succeeded when a flying elbow struck her in the chest.
She stumbled backwards
“Ana!” One of them rushed to her, it was James. Feeling frustrated she shoved against his hard chest, pushing him away.
“Leave me alone.”
“But I….”
“Don’t you get it?” She hissed, as tears of pain and frustration fell down her cheeks. “I can’t breathe with you starring at me like that! Damn it James!” She cursed, turning away.
He looked at her for a moment, taking in the sight before him, finally giving in to temptation he pulled her towards him. She didn’t protest. Everything that surrounded them disappeared as his face was inches from hers.
“What?” She whispered huskily
Saying nothing, he ran his thumb gently across her lip before closing the distance between them as his lips crashed against hers.
Both were too entranced to notice the third person stalk away, swearing under his breath.
She moaned as his tongue forced her lips apart and danced flirtatiously in her mouth. Ana could feel James’s lips curl into a smile as she pressed her body into his. Right now nothing else existed, nothing mattered, only them.
Running his hands up her thighs, James lifted Ana onto a car. At the same time she wrapped her legs around his hips, drawing him closer. The chemistry between them was undeniable. She gasped as he trailed hot kisses down her neck, breathing in her scent, god it was incredible, she was perfect.
“Lets go to my place” He whispered in her ear
“My place is closer” She grinned before pulling him in to a passionate kiss. She ran her hands under his shirt, lifting it over his head.
“Closer is good” James muttered
Taking her weight he carried her to his car as she clung her body to his, nibbling at his neck.
“Damn chica” He grunted
James fumbled with the key as he unlocked the door. He took Ana to the back and sat her on the seat, he pulled away to go to the front but she stopped him and pulled him back into a kiss,
“What’s wrong with here?” She pulled the lever to the side, making the back seat fall backwards, taking them with it. He nodded, slipping the straps off her shoulders, he undid the dress and pulled it off her. Ana moaned as he kissed her body, running his tongue in circles over her stomach.
Forcefully she unbuckled his belt and ripped off his jeans, she let her hands roam over his torso, appreciating his muscular frame. Ana pulled him up and kissed him forcefully, he reached around and unclasped her bra, she let him slip it off carelessly. She gasped as he cupped her breast tenderly. Moving his body fully over hers he trailed kisses down her neck and over her chest.
Breathing heavily Ana slid her hands down his body and slipped off his underwear, exposing his arousal. He grunted as her hands rubbed and touched him forcefully. She grinned as she listened to his moans, she liked the control she had over him.
James slid his hands under her sexy black panties, and took pleasure in listening to her gasp as he roamed his fingers over her roughly. She put her hands down and pushed her panties down her legs and shrugged them off. Taking her mouth with his he kissed her hard.
“James” she whimpered, breathing heavily
He looked at her, her eyes were pleading with him, she was ready.
He took out a condom and clumsily put it on.
“F-ck” She moaned
He took her mouth with his once again then pushed himself into her. She cried out as he entered again and again. She dug her nails into his shoulders as his body moved against hers.
Moments later he collapsed onto her, both were breathless and were exhausted.
Once she caught her breathe Ana guided his mouth to hers, kissing him softly. He pulled away and looked at her, she was sweaty and tired but god she was beautiful. He ran his fingers through her hair, stroking it affectionately.
“What?” She asked as he looked down on her
He shook his head “You’re perfect”
She smiled, surprised at the compliment “You’re not so bad yourself”
“you aint gona regret this tomorrow?” He asked as he rolled over and pulled the naked woman onto him.
“Only it I wake up and you’re not there” She whispered huskily.
They grinned at eachother, tonight was only the beginning.
~Michelle_Rox~ - April 5, 2007 05:36 PM (GMT)
Whooo! Damn chick! :blink: lol Hotness!
amandine - April 5, 2007 06:38 PM (GMT)
devilish_angel - April 5, 2007 11:00 PM (GMT)
^^haha so good then? or not?
amandine - April 5, 2007 11:03 PM (GMT)
ummm....YES!!!!
R U KIDDING ME!!!
that was frickin awesome!!!
hotness indeed!!!!!!
if u wanna add more, be my guest, even though it was a one shot
devilish_angel - April 6, 2007 01:24 AM (GMT)
lol okay that's good then :P
analulu815 - May 15, 2007 02:02 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE |
“My place is closer” She grinned before pulling him in to a passionate kiss. She ran her hands under his shirt, lifting it over his head.
“Closer is good” James muttered
|
heehee. i love that line.
GOOD!
fox_ryder - May 20, 2007 04:55 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (~Michelle_Rox~ @ Apr 5 2007, 11:36 AM) |
| Whooo! Damn chick! :blink: lol Hotness! |
oh dam yooh can work it gurl [SIZE=7][COLOR=purple][FONT=Optima] B)
fox_ryder - May 27, 2007 06:08 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (analulu815 @ May 14 2007, 08:02 PM) |
| QUOTE | “My place is closer” She grinned before pulling him in to a passionate kiss. She ran her hands under his shirt, lifting it over his head.
“Closer is good” James muttered
|
heehee. i love that line.
GOOD!
|
ohh man i best stop reading lol :lol:
Minx - May 27, 2007 09:53 PM (GMT)
For a minute there I found myself not breathing.. :o
but ?, In the Line: "She gasped as he trailed hot kisses down his neck, breathing in her scent, god it was incredible, she was perfect"
Don't you mean her Neck and not his? :brow:
devilish_angel - May 28, 2007 04:04 AM (GMT)
haha woops :ph43r: all fixed, thanx :P
bethuk - June 8, 2007 04:05 PM (GMT)
:P omg mental orgasm wow that was hot
Carlos garcia - October 28, 2007 06:02 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (devilish_angel @ Apr 5 2007, 02:06 AM) |
okay this is just a random as ONE SHOT I came up with a little while ago, I posted it on the Sana forum and thought I might as well post it here too. it's kinda ever so slightly very R Rated. I duno if it's good or anything coz I've never written anything like this before so be honnest with me but uhhhh yea, here goes: (btw it's not set on the island, sort of 'alternate universe' :D )
He starred at her from across the room, watching the way she swung her hips to the beat of the music. Her ebony hair tumbled over her tanned shoulders, complimenting the red dress she wore which fitted perfectly around her gorgeous body.
He almost hadn’t come to the party that night, but Jack had convinced him to come at the last minute and he hadn’t regretted it since he walked through the door, since he laid his eyes on her. Ana Lucia. He knew she’d noticed him too, several times that night he’d caught her eye and held her gaze until it was awkwardly broken.
She felt his eyes burning into her and she knew he was watching. Part of her was confused, but more then confused she was curious. She was flattered at the attention, James had been staring at her since she walked in the door with her friends earlier that night. As she danced she stole a glance at him and sure enough he was still watching. She grinned to herself, wondering if he would make a move.
The night progressed and Ana found herself sitting at the bar alone, Kate and Libby were dancing and she’d lost sight of Shannon. Her eyes darted to where James was talking with Sayid, and hardly paying him any attention. Then his eyes met with hers yet again and she found herself captured by his piercing blue gaze.
“Hey there.”
Breaking the stare, Ana turned to see clean-cut guy grinning at her
“Hey” She grinned back
“Dan” The guy held out his hand
“Ana Lucia” She shook it
“You’re not dancing?” He questioned as he handed her a drink
“Neither are you” She pointed out
“Touche.” He nodded
Ana laughed
James watched in envy as the man flirted shamelessly with her. She’d sat with him for the past hour, just drinking and talking. The music pounded in his ears, feeding his frustration.
“Hey stranger”
He looked down to see Kate in front of him smiling
He nodded
“Come dance with me” She demanded, and pulled him to the dance floor.
As he danced he glanced over at her every now and then. He noticed her composure was gone, the drinks were beginning to affect her, but she kept drinking non the less. It made him sick to see her with the stranger. His stomach churned as he watched the guy brush his hand down her arm, the way he was looking at her drove him crazy.
By the time James looked again, they were gone. His eyes searched the crowed wildly. Across the room he could see a tipsy figure in a red dress being guided out the door. He left Kate alone and pushed through the crowd to the door. By the time he reached them she was getting in his car. Blind with rage He charged at the sleeze, sending him flying to the ground.
“Hey!” She shouted as she watched them tumble around on the ground, throwing fists and shouting. In her dizzy state she could hardly tell who was who. She marched up to them, attempting to pry them apart. She had almost succeeded when a flying elbow struck her in the chest.
She stumbled backwards
“Ana!” One of them rushed to her, it was James. Feeling frustrated she shoved against his hard chest, pushing him away.
“Leave me alone.”
“But I….”
“Don’t you get it?” She hissed, as tears of pain and frustration fell down her cheeks. “I can’t breathe with you starring at me like that! Damn it James!” She cursed, turning away.
He looked at her for a moment, taking in the sight before him, finally giving in to temptation he pulled her towards him. She didn’t protest. Everything that surrounded them disappeared as his face was inches from hers.
“What?” She whispered huskily
Saying nothing, he ran his thumb gently across her lip before closing the distance between them as his lips crashed against hers.
Both were too entranced to notice the third person stalk away, swearing under his breath.
She moaned as his tongue forced her lips apart and danced flirtatiously in her mouth. Ana could feel James’s lips curl into a smile as she pressed her body into his. Right now nothing else existed, nothing mattered, only them.
Running his hands up her thighs, James lifted Ana onto a car. At the same time she wrapped her legs around his hips, drawing him closer. The chemistry between them was undeniable. She gasped as he trailed hot kisses down her neck, breathing in her scent, god it was incredible, she was perfect.
“Lets go to my place” He whispered in her ear
“My place is closer” She grinned before pulling him in to a passionate kiss. She ran her hands under his shirt, lifting it over his head.
“Closer is good” James muttered
Taking her weight he carried her to his car as she clung her body to his, nibbling at his neck.
“Damn chica” He grunted
James fumbled with the key as he unlocked the door. He took Ana to the back and sat her on the seat, he pulled away to go to the front but she stopped him and pulled him back into a kiss,
“What’s wrong with here?” She pulled the lever to the side, making the back seat fall backwards, taking them with it. He nodded, slipping the straps off her shoulders, he undid the dress and pulled it off her. Ana moaned as he kissed her body, running his tongue in circles over her stomach.
Forcefully she unbuckled his belt and ripped off his jeans, she let her hands roam over his torso, appreciating his muscular frame. Ana pulled him up and kissed him forcefully, he reached around and unclasped her bra, she let him slip it off carelessly. She gasped as he cupped her breast tenderly. Moving his body fully over hers he trailed kisses down her neck and over her chest.
Breathing heavily Ana slid her hands down his body and slipped off his underwear, exposing his arousal. He grunted as her hands rubbed and touched him forcefully. She grinned as she listened to his moans, she liked the control she had over him.
James slid his hands under her sexy black panties, and took pleasure in listening to her gasp as he roamed his fingers over her roughly. She put her hands down and pushed her panties down her legs and shrugged them off. Taking her mouth with his he kissed her hard.
“James” she whimpered, breathing heavily
He looked at her, her eyes were pleading with him, she was ready.
He took out a condom and clumsily put it on.
“F-ck” She moaned
He took her mouth with his once again then pushed himself into her. She cried out as he entered again and again. She dug her nails into his shoulders as his body moved against hers.
Moments later he collapsed onto her, both were breathless and were exhausted.
Once she caught her breathe Ana guided his mouth to hers, kissing him softly. He pulled away and looked at her, she was sweaty and tired but god she was beautiful. He ran his fingers through her hair, stroking it affectionately.
“What?” She asked as he looked down on her
He shook his head “You’re perfect”
She smiled, surprised at the compliment “You’re not so bad yourself”
“you aint gona regret this tomorrow?” He asked as he rolled over and pulled the naked woman onto him.
“Only it I wake up and you’re not there” She whispered huskily.
They grinned at eachother, tonight was only the beginning. |
There it goes... ;)