ana stared out into the street waiting for the crossing guard to let her over. horns honked as a car full of crackers drove by, leaving rude remarks and whistles tword her and licking their lips. she listened to the faded laughter as they turned the corner.
"fags." she mumbled under her breath.
her first instinct would have been to flip them off, or shout some come-back, but a teacher followed behind them in his broken down blue old car. …there would probably have been some sort of misunderstanding, that kind of stuff always happened to ana, so she restrained herself. the last thing she needed was more trouble.
'boys have no respect for women' that pissed her off more than almost anything. she thought to herself, 'boys.' her mind went to that one boy. that special boy.

james.
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*bang* bang*bang*bang* james pounded his head on this desk in detention. this was the 3rd one this week, and he was starting to make friends. Mr. Binkley was in charge of detention after school, he could usually talk to him about something, even if it was mostley smart remarks and sarcasim.
"now mr. ford, we wouldn't want you to get a concution and die do we now?" the teacher said in an effort to make the boy stop. james rested his hand on his arm and mumbled,
"..well…."
blonde strands of hair fell into his face as he sat up to look at the old man. he looked at his balding head, his dirty shoes, his nasty tuna fish sandwish and his book on...butterflies, and came to his conclution: anything was better than this. through the next hours he let his eyes wonder around the room, but his mind was sutck on the ebony curled latina, who seemed to posess his thoughts more and more latley...
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ana crossed the street, just a few more blocks and he'd be home. the sun beat down on her back and her breath was heavy. her mom would probably be at work still. Fridays were always late nights, ever since she was little. she'd stumble home drunk, or with some guy, but she'd never been able to stay with just one, not after her dad had left. Things had never changed, and besides school...besides James, she sorta wish they would.
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"Da*n teachers" James mumbled under his breath as the bell rang and he picked up his backpack, and walked out the door. Everyone else was gone, besides a select few who were in detention with him. Besides them, the hallways were deserted, school had already ended, and everyone had stampeded out the door.
He grabbed his books without thinking and before he actually realized what he was doing he was outside. He walked across the street listening to his brown baggy pants dragging on the ground. as he looked up to the sound of a horn the thin, tan, latina up ahead caught his eye. he thought about how beautiful she looked as she walked her walk, swaying her hips. she was a trance from top to bottom. her ebony curls lifting in the wind, the way she walked, even her dragging feet. his eyes were fixed on her as she slowed down... he had no idea what was about to happen.
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ana dragged her feet on the sidewalk as the warm breeze lifted her long curls off her shoulders. she gathered her hair in her hand and pulled the ponytail holder around it. out of the corner of her eye pulled up a familiar red car.
"hey ana!"
she turned to see jack leaning out of the car window, squinting from the sun in his eyes. she exhaled a breath and shifted her messenger bag.
"..heey jaack." she said, flipping her dark bangs out of her eyes. he looked at her a moment longer.
"where you goin?" she paused.
'what is he doing?'
"ummmm....home."
he nodded. "aaahhhh....need a ride?"
she had to think. 'hmmm less walking, more walking, less walking...I’ll take the car.'
"if it's alright with you...sure."
he smiled and nodded again.
"ok, get in." he leaned back into the car and unlocked the door.
ana slowly and causiously put her bag down into the floor board, placed her hand firmly on the car door handle, and pulled herself into the car gentley. before she shut the door she stared at jack for a minute, then, uncertain if it was the right thing to do, she shut the door.
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james eyes, that were fixed on the latina, suddenly fixed on a bright red camaro, with a license plate that said 'fresh' on it.
"jack." he said to himself, dissapointed. what was he doing now? his heart sank as he watched ana get into jack's car, and flinched as jack made a screeching U turn. james shook his head and flipped open his phone.
"boy's screwi'n himself over..." he said. he dialed kate's number to call her.
"hello?"
"hey it's james."
"oh hey james!"
"hey.." he choked out, "i gotta tell you something..."


END.

sorry for double post, but i hit send too soon.

this is a story by my friend and me. i know it's not the best on here, but, were not the best writers.

i don't own anything lostish...ect.

i'm gonna keep this pg..hopefully...

and um....enjoy? this is my first attempt at a fanfic, so go easy on me. hah.

ideas for new chapters would be appreciated!

xoxo
noel

:)

I likey hunny :D more please :)

im lovin it so far!!!
cant wait for more!

yyaaaaaaayy you wrote one, im glad i loved it, well done :lol:

I finally read it! Great job! Don't worry, you're a much better writer than I will ever be! Can't wait for more!

NOEL YOU POSTED IT!!!!!!! :hug: omg I love it! wtf do you mean 'I can't write' :lol: it's awesome and I want more! write me some more kay? :P

um...

ok?

:ph43r:
i'm not really liking it so much but...for you guys. lol.
i hope it will get better.

but please remember, it's my first fanfic...

i'm not as good as you guys. lol.

tips and ideas for new chappies would be appriciated. [p.m. me.]

xoxo
noel the wonderful.
lol. riiiiiite.

NOEL!!!!
trust me the story's fine! I dunno what you're so worried about! it's awesome! :D

hey guys i'm on at school. i'm with the person i wrote it with. her name is paige.

here she is:

hey guys. thanks for likin it!

are you kidding me noel its brilliant, i love it and im soo glad you wrote one

mk guys, paige finally had some time to write...but i'm gonna wait a little bit longer until i post the update...she wants to make a couple changes.

C:

Ahhhh!! I finaly read it!!! I love it chick!!! So good for a first timer!!! :D More please!!

^^ nods. hey noel (O and Paige) ....................... howsabout an update??? :D

MKAY, so i'm getting mad because paige is NOT writing her part of the update. we have a lil of it..but it's no where close to being done. :cuss: but, i'm posting it neways. i't like a paragraph. AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! i appoligize for it being like, 2 sentances. ima kill her! :bang:

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Rain began to drip from the sky as the two teens turned the corner onto Ana’s street. It made loud pats on the windshield, which Jack tried to drown out by turning on the radio. Ana turned her eyes to her window and watched the drops of water run down the glass.
‘What are you doing in this car, Ana Lucia Cortez?’ she scolded herself like her mother. ‘Jack’s nice but…but what?’ she asked herself. She turned to look at him. ‘…but Kate already had him?
No, not really. It was kind of a…a ‘dibs’ sort of thing. …but he wasn’t interested in her? Well, Ana wasn’t so sure about that either. every once and a while she would see jack’s eyes sneak over to her…

she studied his dark hair and dark eyes, his sharp profile…NO ANA STOP IT! Okay, reasons, reasons..um…um…’ her lips parted and jaw relaxed. ‘…but James? Her thoughts began to travel to the southerner… His soft blonde hair, deep eyes, his rough hands …did she…’
“Ana!” jack said as if he had been trying for hours. Ana blinked several times, being torn from her thoughts. “Ana, we’re here.”
“oh...umm…”
She sat there trying to comprehend what he was saying. A couple of seconds later it clicked. “oh… oh yeah…okay…” she nodded as she picked up her book bag and popped open the door. Her feet where hurting, so she slipped off her shoes and walked barefoot to her doorstep, letting the rain soak her. She dug her feet into the mud as she slowly made her way to the door…
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and that's where paige is supposed to continue. i personally hate that part, but it'll get better. i have plenty in mind to come... it just isn't time yet..and i'm actually happy with those. :D

i'll poke paige for you all.
:poke:

heehee.

^^lol yep.

good as update! short as it was......twas still awesome! hope ya get more done soon :D

okay so durning spring break i wrote a LOT more. but i need to type it. so within the next couple of days it'll be on here.

and i think i just mite start writing without paige. she doesn't seem to care much anymore.

more fun for me. :D lol

very good update but. NOEL!! too short *cries*

Yay! More!

lol. mkay. tis being typed as we speak...or as i type...
:brow:
still gonna get kenz to help improve one scene before i post...it's kinda major.

sorry its all so boring. lalalalaaa