Title: The end (PG)
Description: sequel to 'dodging the bullet'
devilish_angel - February 5, 2007 08:39 AM (GMT)
So yeah, I wrote the sequel so caramel, you can write your story now!!! haha. it's Sana (duh :P ) it's one shot I think kinda diferent, hope ya like it! :D
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The sun was rising slowly as another day on the island began. It was three weeks since Ana Lucia had given birth to her baby, Sarah. As soon as she was well enough she moved out of the Hatch and in with Sawyer. What were once the survivors two most disliked people were now the islands favorite family.
The Others had not attempted to attack in the tree weeks that had passed, which surprised everyone, especially as Ana Lucia had managed to escape. Ana Lucia’s thoughts were constantly focused on her child but very now and then she allowed herself to wander back and think of Cindy, she wanted to help her, and swore she would as soon as she was able to.
Ana lay in bed, watching the sun rise through the door of the tent. She glanced At Sawyer who was lying next to her fast asleep. Something felt different, not bad or good, just different. She got up and went to the small cot that Sawyer had made where Sarah lay asleep and checked that her daughter was alright. Ana frowned, today was going to be different from all the rest, she didn’t know how or why but she knew it was. She got changed and waited to see what the day had in store for her.
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His name was David and he was 20 years old. Several years ago he had joined the Air Force, his passion was flying planes and he would do it until the day he died. Unfortunately, although his practical skills were of top quality, his theory left a lot to be desired and he failed many of his studies.
Two months ago David had hit a lucky break and had been selected along with several other pilots to do some testing for a new model. He, along with several other pilots were flying from Los Angeles to Sidney.
The flight was going well so far, they’d had a bit of turbulence but other then that it was a clear morning and everything was going well. Suddenly the plane lost all power, it began to loose pressure and went down and down, everyone scrambled about the cockpit trying to fix the problem before they crashed into the ocean.
David’s skills finally came to use as he hit several switches. Moments later the pressure evened out and The plane was ready to climb again. The young man looked out the window to see how close they were to crashing, his eyes widened as he saw an island, he was even more surprised to see a small gathering of smoke emerging near the beach. After conversing with his co-pilots who also knew nothing of the island he radioed for it to be checked out.
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Sarah wouldn’t stop crying, Sawyer became frustrated, being a father was harder then he thought.
“Would ya just be quiet for a damn minute?” he asked the screaming bundle
“Give her here” He turned to see Ana standing behind him, grinning
“Na I’m okay, she’s just a little loud sometimes.” He insisted.
“Well it’s because she’s hungry, she hasn’t been fed today” Ana told him
“Oh, okay” Sawyer handed his daughter over
“I’m going to take her to the Hatch, well be back later.” Ana kissed Sawyer quickly and walked into the jungle.
Sawyer watched her disappear into the green then lay down to rest. He was just drifting off when sounds of shouting and a loud buzzing woke him up, he got out of his tent to see what all the noise was about and stood in awe at what he saw.
In front of him, in the sky was a helicopter. A large group of the survivors had gathered and were waving out to the helicopter, which was heading straight for the island. They were saved.
The helicopter landed on the beach as everyone watched in wonder. Several men got out and approached the group. Locke went to greet them, accompanied by Charlie. Sawyer ran to catch up.
“What are you doing on this island? This is property of the government of the United States of America, you’re not supposed to be here” The man said gruffly
The three men burst out laughing
“Well sir” Locke began, “If you’ll give us a lift we’ll gladly leave your island”
“We were in a plane crash, you bloody moron!” Charlie yelled at the man “We’re the survivors of Oceanic Fight 815”
This cleared several matters up and after talking amongst his colleagues, the man reported that they could fit 20 people in the helicopter, then they could send several back to get the rest.
Everyone was so stunned and happy they hardly knew how to react. Locke loaded 20 people onto the chopper and it took off, after radioing for another two helicopters to be sent out.
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Sawyer raced to the Hatch as fast as he could possibly go, he burst through the door.
“ANA!” He yelled “ANA!”
“what? Sawyer Sarah’s asleep!” She hushed him
“We;; then wake her up! ‘coz we’re going home!” He grinned
Ana stared at Sawyer
“What’d you say?” she frowned
“There was a chopper, twenty people have gone already, and it’s coming back for us, we’re going home!” He kissed her hard.
Ana pushed him away
“home” She repeated. It was a lot for her to take in. She had a child with a person she’d had no life with back ‘home.’ How would they manage when they got back? She’d accepted the life she had now, she was happy. And what would her mother say when she returned? Or even worse, what would she do? Where was home now?
“What’s wrong Rambina?” Sawyer frowned
“Nothing, You get what you want, I’ll get Sarah” She smiled and walked away.
Sawyer shrugged Ana’s behavior off, she was probably just a little shocked. He went to the beach to join the other survivors.
Later Ana appeared at the beach, Sawyer went to greet her
“Hey” He took Sarah from her “How is she?”
“She’s fine, quiet for once” Ana smiled “Sawyer what’s going to happen when we get back?”
“Whatdya mean?” he asked
“About us, and Sarah?” She asked, almost afraid of his answer
“Ana I’m not going anywhere.” He promised “I’m staying. I love you, and Sarah and we’re gonna be together back there too” He bent down and kissed her.
Ana nodded, he loved her, he was going to stay with them. “I love you too” She hugged him. But what if things were different in the city? What if she went to jail for murdering Jason? Would he take Sarah? Could she leave Sarah?
Just then the helicopters appeared in the distance
“Well I guess that’s the end of our jungle fun” Sawyer nudged her playfully
Ana smiled “looks like it”
Ana took Sarah back as the helicopters landed. Soon everyone was ready to go, except Ana.
“C’mon Ana” Sawyer ran over to her
“I can’t! Sawyer I can’t go back!” She told him, tears welling up in her eyes
“What?! C’mon Ana, we have to go!”
“No! Sawyer I killed someone! They’ll arrest me and take me away, I can’t do that”
Sawyer pulled her close and kissed her gently “I’m not going to let that happen” He told her
“Yeah well you can’t stop them” a tear rolled down her cheek
“Yes I can, c’mon we have to go.”
Ana shook her head “I can’t, go” she told him.
All of a sudden a gun shot rung though the air, Sawyer and Ana whirled around to see the Others running towards them
“Ana! We have to go now! C’mon!” He held out his hand
Ana glanced at the others then to Sawyer, then at Sarah, asleep in her arms and nodded, she took his hand and they ran to the helicopter, seconds later it took off, with all the survivors safely inside, leaving the island and the Others forever.
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It was a long and silent ride back, It was awkward as everyone had formed a bond, they shared something but when they got back they would all go their separate ways. What would you say to someone you would possibly never see again after that day? Sawyer and Ana sat in silence, wondering what they could do when they got back.
Eventually the Helicopters landed in the city and the survivors were escorted off the plane, A large crowd had gathered, and cameras were everywhere. It seamed that news of their return was of interest to everyone.
They sat together in a small room, talking quietly. Some received medical attention, some were making phone calls. A man in a military uniform went around getting the names of the survivors.
“Give him another name” Sawyer whispered, nodding towards the man
“Why?”
“You wana get out of here?” He asked
Ana nodded “okay”
“An yours miss?” The man approached her
“Shannon Rutherford” Ana said without hesitating
“Thank you, sir?” He turned to Sawyer
“Michael Dawson”
Thanks you Mr Dawson”
He moved on to the others
“Mom” Ana Whispered
Sawyer followed her gaze to the woman in a police uniform, accompanied by several more officers, talking stressfully to a air force officer.
“Time to go” Sawyer grabbed her hand and they walked out of the group and around a crowd. They were almost out the door. Ana took one last look for her mother and saw the woman starring directly at her.
They held eachothers gaze for several moments.
“bye” Ana mouthed “lo siento mama”
Ana’s mother nodded understanding and looked at the small bundle in Ana’s arms, she smiled at her daughter and watched as they disappeared from the building.
Tears streamed down Ana’s cheeks as she left with Sawyer.
“What do we do now?” she asked, “We didn’t even say goodbye to everyone.”
Sawyer pulled Ana into his arms, comforting her. “it’s okay, she understands. Muchahcha we gotta think about ourselves now, first we better get away from here”
Ana nodded, burying herself in Sawyer’s chest “Where do we go?”
“Where do you want to go?”
“Australlia” Ana said
Sawyer looked at her “You’re joking right?”
“Yes” She smirked
“good”
“Well wherever we go, how are we going to get there?”
“Sweetheart, I’m a con artist, where there’s a will, there’s a way.”
Ana laughed. “Alright then conman, let’s go.”
They walked down the streets of Los Angeles, disappearing into the crowd.
NIKKI2513 - February 5, 2007 08:51 AM (GMT)
ahhhhhh i loved it Devilish
now time for some more camp lovin *grins evilly*
devilish_angel - February 5, 2007 08:54 AM (GMT)
*faints* do I get paid overtime for this? :huh:
:P thanks
NIKKI2513 - February 5, 2007 08:55 AM (GMT)
damn if i wasnt broke i would def give you overtime
;)
your writing is awesome
devilish_angel - February 5, 2007 08:59 AM (GMT)
^^ haha not it's not but thanks huni!!!! so you wana write that SWAT fic??? :D
NIKKI2513 - February 5, 2007 09:19 AM (GMT)
one day my friend i shall write swat but i have Saving Seats in Hell to finish i have two other incomplete stories but those are side projects i work on when i've lost my dotty muse
believe me i always get it back but teen sana helps me lol
so one day hopefully soon i shall write swat lol
maybe i should write a one shot and see if i'm any good at swat??? :blink: :blink:
bel - February 5, 2007 06:02 PM (GMT)
Aha the long awaited sequal! :dance: It sure was worth the wait. I loved it! :wub: :D
Yeah Nikki you can write that SWAT one shot, but that will only serve to prove that you can write anything. :D
caramel199012 - February 5, 2007 08:24 PM (GMT)
ohh ohh ohh *jumps up and down*
You did it WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOO
but yeah you need to do camp thingy one :)
*runs to read this as i just saw sequal for dodging the bullet and got excited*
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I LOVE!! it. Im guessing by the end that this isnt the end right ?? ^_^
| QUOTE |
Ana took one last look for her mother and saw the woman starring directly at her.
They held eachothers gaze for several moments.
“bye” Ana mouthed “lo siento mama”
Ana’s mother nodded understanding and looked at the small bundle in Ana’s arms, she smiled at her daughter and watched as they disappeared from the building. |
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
:cry: :cry:
That is soooo sweet and also sooo sad :(
I love this story. More please :)
NIKKI2513 - February 5, 2007 08:30 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (bel @ Feb 5 2007, 02:02 PM) |
| Yeah Nikki you can write that SWAT one shot, but that will only serve to prove that you can write anything. :D |
i dont know about that....
i started writing sana and it was bad until i got into the swing of things
i think swat may be a little harder because Chris was a lil more mellow
like she was still mean when she needed to be but she was cooled down alot too ya know so i have to find my element and write Chris and make her not to mean but not to happy
am i making any sense????
lol i never can tell
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And yeah that mother scene was sad but i'm glad she understood and they got out of there.
and Devilish i dont care what you write as long as its something ;)
*Coughs loudly* Lost on Camp *Coughs again overdramatically*
caramel199012 - February 5, 2007 08:39 PM (GMT)
yes i agree. You are physically not allowed to write anything else until we have an update for lost camp *crosses over arms stubornly*
and we were meant to have a deal for some more to be up by last night and still i see NO UPDATE!!!
:o :angry: :cuss: :fume:
I think we should all :gang:
bel - February 5, 2007 08:47 PM (GMT)
:blink: :blink: I'm too scared by you to even think about scaring devilish :ph43r: Just calm down caramel...deep breaths...think about your happy place, image the update is coming soon...
And yeah Nikki, you're making sense, LOL, and that's why you have to try and if iit sucks then try again coz you're a great writer and you'll get it right eventually. ;)
caramel199012 - February 5, 2007 08:51 PM (GMT)
no but poking isnt working so we need to take our plan to the next level. Or in other words. PLAN B!!!!! *dun dun dun* oh sweet jesus!! where did that music come from :o
bel - February 5, 2007 09:54 PM (GMT)
:brow: Okayyyyy so tell us about plan B. What are we gonna do now?
And please, no more suspense music, I prefer something from the Bond movies, better yet, the one from the Pink panter. LOL
~Michelle_Rox~ - February 5, 2007 10:47 PM (GMT)
Oh that was so sad yet aborable and so happy and........AWS0ME!!!!! :lol: :P :D :)
devilish_angel - February 5, 2007 11:00 PM (GMT)
lmao Thanks everyone! glad you all liked it *runs from caramel* I did have an idea to keep this story going but I think I'd better carry on with my teen Sana before caramel gets to me lol
~Michelle_Rox~ - February 5, 2007 11:14 PM (GMT)
More of this!? Yay!!! PLEASE DO!!! Please please please please please!!! :pray:
Should I start poking?
devilish_angel - February 5, 2007 11:23 PM (GMT)
Daiva Ima poke you so hard you will bruise! no pokie!
NIKKI2513 - February 5, 2007 11:25 PM (GMT)
*mission impossible music*
*Tucks and Rolls under table*
*Peaks up and see devilish eating dinner*
*Crawls on elbows and stands up next to her*
*She jumps and gasps*
"Got that update for Camp yet?"
hahahahaha i need to stop
~Michelle_Rox~ - February 5, 2007 11:27 PM (GMT)
Na you wont Devilish!! Hehehe! I'll poke harder!! :D
devilish_angel - February 5, 2007 11:27 PM (GMT)
^^LMAO
*hits the random intruder and runs away*
~Michelle_Rox~ - February 5, 2007 11:29 PM (GMT)
Did you just hit ME? :o Oh your in for it now! *chaces Devilish*
devilish_angel - February 5, 2007 11:51 PM (GMT)
AHHHHHHHHHHHH not good! *runs for life*
bel - February 6, 2007 12:06 AM (GMT)
I have two optios here:
1. Stop the two of you and win the Nobel Peace Prize :angel:
2. Leave you to kill each other and enjoy the show
:conflict:
Mmmm option two it is :popcorn: . I'll come back after a couple bruises, don't worry. I want those updates after all and I sure ain't gonna get them with you two dead. :D
~Michelle_Rox~ - February 6, 2007 12:21 AM (GMT)
*takles Devilish* Gotcha!
NIKKI2513 - February 6, 2007 12:26 AM (GMT)
i agree
option 2 :popcorn:
*ding ding ding*
bel - February 6, 2007 12:39 AM (GMT)
I'm too sleepy to try to break you apart now. I'll come back tomorrow so please try not to kill each other till then.
Nikki keep an eye on them will you.
Cya tomorrow girls. G'night. :)
NIKKI2513 - February 6, 2007 12:52 AM (GMT)
yes sir bel sir! *Salutes*
dont let them take part in murderous things sir!
hehehehehe i don't know where i get this stuff hehe
devilish_angel - February 6, 2007 02:36 AM (GMT)
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! *tackles daiva back*
*hits daiva with shoe then throws it at nikki* haha woops my bad :angel:
Gudnyt bel! :D
doublell20 - February 6, 2007 02:55 AM (GMT)
i don't mean to get in the middle of all this pokin' business but devilish...how about a threequal where ana is cleared by cops or something and gets to see her mom! :rolleyes:
cute sequal by the way!
devilish_angel - February 6, 2007 03:43 AM (GMT)
pokes doublell20 :angel: :D
ummmm yup I have 2 other stories to do first but I definately have an idea to update this one, and that idea would fit in well, thanks :P
NIKKI2513 - February 6, 2007 03:51 AM (GMT)
damn Devilish a shoe???? i was just the referee
doublell20 - February 6, 2007 04:33 AM (GMT)
quote:
pokes doublell20
ummmm yup I have 2 other stories to do first but I definately have an idea to update this one, and that idea would fit in well, thanks
ahh, you're so devilishly sweet! looking forward to all of it!! :)
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caramel199012 - February 6, 2007 07:19 PM (GMT)
bel - *whispers* okay so yeah thats what we do. We do that okay? :)
Devilish - *Runs after* Yeah get on with lost camp but i still want a lovely jubly sequal to this :).
Nikki - ha ha ha ha that was mint ha ha ha ha soooo funny. Your fist post the mission impossible music and all *giggles*
yep option 2 :popcorn:
BRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING
devilish_angel - February 7, 2007 04:58 AM (GMT)
Haha oh it's on Davia! :D
sorry nikki, it slipped :ph43r: :P
NIKKI2513 - February 7, 2007 05:06 AM (GMT)
devilish_angel - February 7, 2007 05:18 AM (GMT)
*snickers* :ph43r: :angel: