Title: I need feedback
pitdroid3 - January 27, 2007 03:16 AM (GMT)
How can I get some people to post replies to my fanfic "Tigress". It's been up for two days and no one has responded, I'm dying to know what people think of it.
Even if they hate it, I want to know. And why they hate it, so I can make changes if necessary.
chris - April 12, 2007 09:47 AM (GMT)
:)
i have problems with english.
i need hours for some sentences, and that is :(
ok, do you need a storyboard? look in google for more help
cya later
pitdroid3 - April 12, 2007 02:34 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (chris @ Apr 12 2007, 05:47 AM) |
:) i have problems with english. i need hours for some sentences, and that is :( ok, do you need a storyboard? look in google for more help cya later |
If I could translate it for you I would, I'm sorry.
Oh, and I think your image needs fixing, I'm not seeing that picture of Michelle anymore.
chris - April 16, 2007 05:19 PM (GMT)
AHH I dont know to answer!
that is a problem, with this - i cant choose a good picture, they are ALL good!
(but no picture is so good how Michelle Rodriguez self)
and why she would see on every user herself!
i like teddy hahaha
its a MonsteR!*G*
google is full of other good pictures too
i search and read your Tigress Story now,
have fun Boys and Girls :D
chris - July 16, 2007 10:35 AM (GMT)
hi pit, i have read chapter I, Woooooooooohw that is sooo long , and there are so many vocabularies i had know earlier. but i have soo much forgotten, thank you again for your nice story, that will be help me to learn english better, because I like to read stories on pages from persons with my interests;)
you have very much intergrated comic/Tv wisdom , you surly a clever boy :P
write some persons who are online and ask if they want to read it to, but donīt say HEre is My Link! ReadIt!! Reaadd Iiit!:))
for your story I had need a much time, not everybody can so good english, or only other languages , but they still here to see some pictures and movies. that i have do first, too.
but i had think english is so difficult, and i NEVER need it in real life, too!
And ComputerGames etc. are multilingual, so it is no problem to have fun without language.
but i look films sometimes in english, now too.
I hope i learn it fast, than i can write better, or talk with a english person in skype and understand him!:=)
Thank you again, your Chapter I is great:)
And where is My Killer-TeddyBear?:D
What do you think about Logi-Tech? No copyright problems? perhaps it is LogiC-Tek or so better:)
and you can say me how/why (i dont understand : You know SCH?) for what words you have in english "sch"? i have never saw it in my english lessons!
Thank YOu Byee
greetings
pitdroid3 - July 16, 2007 03:22 PM (GMT)
Glad you liked it! The killer teddy-bears don't appear until a few chapters in though.
Carlos garcia - October 28, 2007 06:03 AM (GMT)
I meant to tell you's that I don't know that much english neither Maritza be translating it for me then I know what is going on okay...and thanks for her that I am kinda learnig... :lol: :P ;)