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Title: Darkness Turns To Light (PG-13)
Description: Teen Sana Halloween One-Shot


MRIsMyIdol4Eva - November 1, 2006 01:53 AM (GMT)
Okay, so this is just a little Halloween oneshot I made! It was out of Happiness! Halloween is great! I don't own anything but the plot! So don't take it :D I actually kinda like this one of mine. Minor Kate bashing from Ana and Mild Jack bashing from Sawyer. Mild language from both. Kinda skate-ish at the beginning, but I would never leave it that way! hahaha! Sana all the way man. A little bit of Jate in there, but nothing more than Sana. Enjoy, this is just to celebrate the Halloween season!

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Another year, another one of Jack’s famous Halloween party. He’d had the pleasure of missing every single one that had been, since the third grade. It wasn’t cause he wasn’t invited, it wasn’t that his parents wouldn’t let him go, it was that he would rather poke his eyes out with a pitchfork and roast them over an open fire . . . and eat them.

This year was different, this year he was going to get to dance with Kate. Of course it was a costume party and he’d have to find a costume and it meant that he would actually have to dance, but it would be worth it when Kate would be dancing with him. He would finally beat jackass. He would win. He would dance with Kate.

Or at least that’s what he thought before he got there. He arrived 15 freakin’ minutes late. Of course, he had to stop to get a costume, that he could have gone without. Anyway, he got there 15 minutes late, only to walk in on a fast dance, he didn’t mind. Jack was dancing Kate, he was annoyed, but he’d still have his chance. He worked his way through the crowd. It became an easier task as the dance changed from fast pace to slow. Kate was wearing a long silk dress with a sash that said miss L.A.. Jack was wearing a tux and something else. Sawyer didn’t care about him. Just as he approached to tap Kate on the shoulder, Jack moved in for a kiss. Sawyer would’ve slapped him, but it was Kate who really stopped him, Sawyer that is. She didn’t object when Jack moved closer until they finally met lips. It was the whole not objecting part that pissed Sawyer off the most.

He turned away and walked towards the exit. He was leaving and that was that. There was no one, no one at all that could stop him now . . . just another thing he was wrong about. He flew out the doors. He never thought he could be more pissed off than he was now. The stupid Jack had to rip into his life and steal who Jack knew Sawyer had his eye on.

“You can practically see the steam,” A voice called out into the night air.

Sawyer turned his head both ways. He didn’t see anyone through the thick dark air. He could though, make out the figure of a woman whose back was leaning up against the outside of the house, just a little bit away from the edge of the glow that the porch light made.

“Coming from your ears that is,” The voice continued. She stepped out from the dark and into the light.

Sawyer had never seen her like this. She was wearing a long black dress that dragged the floor when she walked. She was holding a cape that Sawyer guessed was previously taken off. She was wearing makeup, which was a miracle all in it’s own. But the makeup was dark around the eyes and then got lighter as it went up until it disappeared altogether.

“What the hell are you talking about?” He asked. Dispite his sudden attraction to her, he was still pretty pissed off about the events that took place in the house no more than a minute ago.

“I’m talking about Jack and Kate’s little lip lock, idiot. I know the reason you came here, everyone who’s not blind can tell you that one,” She smirked.

“Really then? Why did I come here?” He questioned.

“To hook up with Kate,” She rolled here eyes as if it disgusted her to even say her name.

“What’s so wrong with that?”

“It’s that every single guy likes her! It’s stupid! Every girl wants to be like her. She acts as if she doesn’t know it, but truth be told, she’s just as in to herself as all the guys are! Class act.” She laughed bitterly before continuing. “I’m so sick and tired of hearing her dumb name and about everyone’s obsessions with her! Cause you know, there are other girls out there who would kill just to have a glance from a guy! But no, everyone’s too busy bowing to Kate, goddess of beauty!” She exclaimed, not exactly caring if anyone else was around to hear.

Sawyer put it in his head. He tossed it back and forth, debating on whether or not she was telling the truth. He had to question further before his final decision. “Why do you think she knows?”

“Because, you remember yesterday in math class?”

“Yeah, Kate dropped her pencil.”

“Yeah and she picked it up, ass sticking in the air. Every guy turned to look. I think I was the only one to notice that she smiled while she picked it up.”

“Your point?”

“Damn, you seriously need to get those eyes checked, cause I think you’re blind. She was doing it to get the attention, especially from you.”

“Was not,” He denied.

“Yeah, then explain to me this, why did she do right in front of your desk? And I mean RIGHT in front of your desk!” She arched an eyebrow.

Sawyer realized that Ana was right. He didn’t want to, but he knew that she was. He could name many other time that a situation similar to that one. He could now see Ana’s view on it. He could see why she was so angry at everything.

“She a bitch,” She mumbled.

“Yeah, now I can see why,” He paused before continuing. “But what I don’t know, is why you care so much about what I think of her.”

She looked over at him as if to ask ‘if he was serious’. She pushed herself from the wall she was leaning against, arms crossed. She walked up to him slowly and said, “Really? I though it was obvious?” then her voice turned to a whisper close to his ear. “You really are blind.” And she leaned in and kissed him softly. So soft that it almost seemed non-existent. But it was there and Sawyer struggled at first, not knowing what to do, but gave in. The kiss lasted about 5 seconds and then Ana pulled away.

Ana took a few step toward the entrance of the house before turning around again. “Tell anyone about this, and I’ll kill you,” She smirked and continued her way to the house, not looking back again.

Sawyer was shocked. He didn’t know what to do next, so he stood in the chilly night air. He really had no idea that she liked him, enough to do anything about it that is. After a few moments he followed her tracks back into the house. Maybe it was best to stay, just incase Jack made his way to Ana too. He highly doubted Ana would allow him to make any kind of move at all. It was kind of funny, actually. He went to party for one girl and ended up with her actual opposite.

Sawyer opened the door to the house right in time to see Ana tap Kate on the shoulder. Kate turned around, not knowing who was behind her. By the time Kate saw what was coming, it was too late for her to move. Ana’s fist impacted right on Kate’s jaw and she hit the floor. Ana looked to the door and smiled at him.

Man he loved that girl.


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XOXO! Please review and tell me watcha though :D :angel:

TigerLily - November 1, 2006 02:10 AM (GMT)
Kenz, I always love your fanfics, and this one is no different. Especially the fist - to - chin contact at the end :D

~Michelle_Rox~ - November 1, 2006 02:34 AM (GMT)
*rolling on the floor laughing* About time Kate gets what she deserves!! :lol:

See ya later........... :kick:

devilish_angel - November 1, 2006 03:57 AM (GMT)
LMAO Kenz u rock! I love ur fics, the Sana-ness kicks ass :P

doublell20 - November 1, 2006 04:15 AM (GMT)
loved this one!!!

bravo ana!

Hoelli - November 2, 2006 03:23 PM (GMT)
Commented on ff.net :D

:wub:

bel - November 3, 2006 10:34 PM (GMT)
I love it!
It's my second 'Kate gets punched' fic today and it can't get any better.
Did i mention i love it?

:P :D

devilish_angel - November 3, 2006 10:39 PM (GMT)
Lmao bel u love it wen Kate gets punched don't you? :P

InMemoriam - November 4, 2006 01:43 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (devilish_angel @ Nov 3 2006, 06:39 PM)
Lmao bel u love it wen Kate gets punched don't you? :P

Who doesn't?

MRIsMyIdol4Eva - November 4, 2006 04:46 AM (GMT)
heh :P

bel - November 4, 2006 11:20 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (devilish_angel @ Nov 3 2006, 10:39 PM)
Lmao bel u love it wen Kate gets punched don't you?  :P

Yes i do!
(think you can do it again in your story? :P )

I don't even know why, but since i started seeing 'Lost' i get this bad vibe from her, not to mention she's manipulative, so no i don't like her.

You can punch Kate all you want, it's absolutely fine by me, in fact let me know when you do. I do apologise to all Kate fans in here, but everyone is entitled to their opinion.

:P :P :)

devilish_angel - November 6, 2006 02:36 AM (GMT)
lmao, yea I used to hate her 2 but since Ana's gone *sob* iv taught myself to like her. but i still choose Ana over her anytime of course lol. :P

but anyways kenz u shud seriously consider a part 2 :D

NIKKI2513 - November 7, 2006 02:25 AM (GMT)
omg that was so funny i loved it too bad it was so short :( but i loved it i think my favorite part was the punch gotta love it....

bel - November 7, 2006 03:17 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (devilish_angel @ Nov 6 2006, 02:36 AM)
but anyways kenz u shud seriously consider a part 2 :D

I agree. This story deserves to be continued. I liked it too much.

:P :D

MRIsMyIdol4Eva - November 8, 2006 12:41 AM (GMT)
aww! *sobs* you guys are so great! I've never had such great reviewers, I have to go and cry myself to sleep now . . . :P

Thanks guys, really. My reviews mean everything to me. So as long as you promise to review, I'll make a sequel :D

not a brive :angel:

bel - November 8, 2006 12:46 PM (GMT)
You deserve all those great reviews ;) ....but they should make you jump around and grin like an idiot... :grin: ...like that.

...anyway, promise to review...now write! :P :P :D

...and it wasn't taken as a bribe...more of an incentive. It is only fair after all.

;) :grin:

analulu815 - December 4, 2006 11:04 PM (GMT)
kenzzz!
that was soo good! see, i told you you were talented! lol.
-noel

MRIsMyIdol4Eva - December 4, 2006 11:06 PM (GMT)
ah, you found it on your own. :P

Thanks.

analulu815 - December 18, 2006 04:03 PM (GMT)
ur welcome babe. lol. WRITE MORE! PLEEZZZEEE! lol.

devilish_angel - December 18, 2006 06:18 PM (GMT)
^^ yea c'mon Kenz. I demand a sequal :D

MRIsMyIdol4Eva - May 6, 2007 02:45 AM (GMT)
Don't hurt me. But I actually have written a sequel to this and I just hope to get around to typing it.

:D

devilish_angel - May 6, 2007 06:24 AM (GMT)
*jumps up and down*

omfg u serious????? post it! pwease? :D

MRIsMyIdol4Eva - May 6, 2007 04:13 PM (GMT)
I will, i just have to typew it first and I REALLY don't feel like it. But I promise I'll get around to it ;)

MCRx - May 6, 2007 05:34 PM (GMT)
Type when you feel like it, cause this is GREAT! :D Can't wait for the sequel. :)

MRIsMyIdol4Eva - May 6, 2007 06:19 PM (GMT)
I'm working on it now.

Aww thanks MCRx. You're so nice :D

MCRx - May 6, 2007 06:20 PM (GMT)
Yeah, I know. :blink:
Err, that wasn't me. ^^

Yay update. :D

MRIsMyIdol4Eva - May 6, 2007 06:24 PM (GMT)
LOL. It might not be up 'till next weekend though, but it'll be up everntually. Maybe next weekend I'll go through and update eveyrthing, cause I'm pretty sure I won't have any plans what-so-ever. But I got a project due soon, so I gotta work on that.

MCRx - May 6, 2007 06:36 PM (GMT)
Yeah, good luck on that. :)

Y'know... I wrote a Sana fanfic myself once. Thirteen chapters long, each around 1500 words... But it's in Dutch. You think my English's good enough to translate it?

MRIsMyIdol4Eva - May 6, 2007 06:38 PM (GMT)
Yeah. Definantly. Is english not your first language? I couldn't tell. You speak better English than some people on this site and English is their first languae :lol:

MCRx - May 6, 2007 07:12 PM (GMT)
I just learnt English two years ago, but it's an overruling language, y'know? :) You hear it in movies, music and everywhere all the time. Oh, and here too. :)

Okay, now we're talking 'bout something completely off-topic... Ehmm... Did I already tell you I love this fic? :D

analulu815 - May 6, 2007 07:24 PM (GMT)
HEY GUYS.

kenz! you better post everything!

i'm telling you guys it's great. i've actually changed the name of it to "noel's story"
because i own it now. lol. kenz just writes stuff for me. lol.

just ask her.

but it's realli good and i jump around everytime i hear it...

by the way, kenz, you need to finish reading today!!!

CollisionTDGchick9 - October 3, 2008 04:11 PM (GMT)
wow kenzie. youre lame.

its been over a year. you've let aaaallll these people down. especially me. :(

we're disappointed.


jkjk i love you... kinda. :ph43r:




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