Title: You have the Key to My Heart.
Description: poem.
Evilkitt3n - October 19, 2006 09:21 PM (GMT)
Dom tells Letty what he thinks and thought about her when they first met and now that their still together.
Over the years I've mistaken you for so many things
but the one thing that I don't regret mistaken you for
is being the girl of my dreams becuase every since the
day we met my life has fallen in place!
That day I experienced true happiness like I've never
experienced it.
You and I are so different but still so much the same
And when the day our lips first touched it felt like no
other kiss I ever felt.
what struck me was your chocolate brown hair and eyes
that hold so much passion. Your smile seemed to put me in a trance
everytime you walked by
and when you asked me if my feelings for you are real
I said to you and only you hold the key to my heart.
Hope you liked this poem tell me if I should write more or not.
devilish_angel - October 19, 2006 09:51 PM (GMT)
AW! cute lol I'm not much of a poetry person but this is cool. yes definately write more :P
michellefreak223 - October 19, 2006 11:10 PM (GMT)
of course write more.....i am not really a poem person either.....but it was really good.....
NIKKI2513 - October 20, 2006 12:12 AM (GMT)
ditto i dont read much poetry but this was cute...
bel - October 22, 2006 11:22 PM (GMT)
Yep, it's final!
Cute, cute, cute. This story has cute written all over it.
:P :D
Carlos garcia - October 28, 2007 02:29 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Evilkitt3n @ Oct 19 2006, 03:21 PM) |
Dom tells Letty what he thinks and thought about her when they first met and now that their still together.
Over the years I've mistaken you for so many things but the one thing that I don't regret mistaken you for is being the girl of my dreams becuase every since the day we met my life has fallen in place! That day I experienced true happiness like I've never experienced it. You and I are so different but still so much the same And when the day our lips first touched it felt like no other kiss I ever felt. what struck me was your chocolate brown hair and eyes that hold so much passion. Your smile seemed to put me in a trance everytime you walked by and when you asked me if my feelings for you are real I said to you and only you hold the key to my heart.
Hope you liked this poem tell me if I should write more or not. |
your good at poems... B)