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Title: The Aftermath (PG-13)
Description: the aftermatch of TFTF part 1


shanti07 - October 7, 2006 10:45 PM (GMT)
Title : The Aftermath
Disclaimer: I own no characters from fast and the furious. I just own myself
Summary: After the heist leon and letty hide out in mexico while Dom, Vince and Mia are in L.A. A new member is welcomed into the team. What happened to Brian? Where is Johnny Tran's cousin lance? Will the cops ever catch up to the team? There is only one way to find out .....READ!! B)
Rating - hmm dont know yet but right now PG 13 i guess
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Chapter 1



Letty sat in the passenger seat just wondering. Are things ever going to be the same? Is jessee okay? Will I ever see Dom and Mia again? She looked at Leon who was concentrating on the road before he looked at her bruised face and bloody lip. "Are you okay Let?" Asked leon with a slight of concern in his voice.

"I'm alright, just stop by the gas station so I can get some pain killers for my ribs." She said as she shifted around in her seat trying to get into a comfortable position. Leon noticed her face wincing from the pain. "Nah Let, you need to see a doctor. We should go to the nearest hospital." Letty stop her shifting and looked at Leon like he had three heads. "Dude, there is no way im going to go to a hospital, Especially here in mexico." Leon looked at her with a facial expression that was asking questions.

"Then where letty, where are we supposed to go huh? We cant go back to the house because cops are probably lookin for us. Where are we supposed to go huh? you tell me." Letty looked at leon as he kept driving to an unknown destination. She sat back in her seat with her arms folded across her chest and her right eyebrow lifted trying to think of something. She then reached in the backseat for her jacket. She searched in every pocket untill she found a piece of paper with an address on it. She looked at it for a long second before handing it to leon. "Go here" Leon grab the peice of paper and look at it. He recognized the adress. "Do you think she is still there? I mean its been 1 1/2 years since we last heard from her." Letty thought for a while. Will she be there? after a minute of thinking about it she finally respond "We wont know unless we try".

After 30 minutes Leon parked the black honda into a dirt driveway. When letty and leon got out of the car they looked at the house. It was not to small or not to big. the paint was chipping off and the grass was a mixed dry brown and green. Letty looked at Leon before walking up to the doorstep and knocking on the door. No movement. She then took a breath and knocked again. Nobody answered. She turned around and walked off the step. "She's not here" she said with a little hint of hurt and sadness in her voice. "Alright." leon said while walking to the car.

Just before the two were about to get in the black honda, they heard the door open. Letty turn around quickly to see a 5'10 dark figure standing on the doorstep. The person stood there with a look of amazement on their face. "Letty?....Leon? Is that really you?"

devilish_angel - October 7, 2006 11:33 PM (GMT)
hey great fic! can't wait to see what happens! :P

shanti07 - October 8, 2006 02:03 AM (GMT)
*Back in LA*

After Brian handed Dom the keys, he wasted no time going back to the house to pick up Mia. After Dom approach the house, he ran up to Mia who was still sitting next to Jesse's lifeless body. "C'mon mia, the cops are coming" He tried to grab her but Mia wouldnt budge."No, I'm not leavin jesse here Dom!" tears began to stream down her face. Dom wanted to comfort his little sister but there was no time. "look honey, jesse is dead. Now i hate to leave him here but we got to go."

He tried to grab her again but Mia just began swingin at him. "NO!! I'm not going anywhere I'm staying right here!" She kept on trying to fight Dom with all of her strength but Dom grab her and started to shake her a bit. "Look Mia!! Do you want me to go back to prison?!? .....Look I jesse was my bestfriend too but we got to go!"

Mia just looked at her brother and fell into his arms crying. He picked her up and helped her inside the car. Dom looked at jesse's body one last time before speeding off to go and get vince out of the hospital. The only problem was...how?

*Back to Mexico*

"Rashanti?" Letty said with a sort of disbelief. After a slight akward silence, Shanti jumped off the steps and ran to hug her friend she hasnt seen since she was 18.

"How ya livin girl?" Letty said with excitement. "I'm living pretty good but what the hell are yall doin here in Mexico?" Leon walked over to Shanti and gave her a huge warm hug. "Hey girl, long time no see" Letty was happy to see her friend but the person she would love to see or hear from right now was Dom. She missed him...ALOT. "Well we did another one and...it didnt turn out too good."

Rashanti knew what they were talkin about. It was just 2 years ago that she hijacked with them too. Rashanti was sent to live with the Torettos when she was 7 years. Her mom and her dad were 2 druggies who left her in the middle of nowhere. She went to mexico when she was 18 because she was wanted for cocaine possesion. She kept in contact with the team for a while but she decided to break it off fearing the cops would catch on.

" Dom and Mia are still in LA and we have no clue if they were caught or not. Jesse lost to tran in race wars yesterday and it was for slips. We havent seen him since. Vince is in the hospital. His arm got caught in the wire during the Hijacking and a shotgun shell grazed his hip." Leon noticed the hurt in Letty's eyes when she mentioned Dom. You can tell all she wanted to know if he was safe and sound.

"Well grab your stuff and bring it in the house. You guys are staying here. I got 4 open bedrooms and one for myself so there is plenty of room." Leon grabbed he and letty's things and they all went in the house. Shanti showed Letty and Leon their rooms and made sure they were aquianted. Letty walked into her room and layed her things down. She carefully layed down on the bed and just stared at the ceiling. All she could think about was Dom. She was also concerned about Mia,vince, and jesse but Dom...Dom was her love. Her one...and her only.

*Nickelbacl - Far Away*

This time, This place
Misused, Mistakes
Too long, Too late
Who was I to make you wait
Just one chance
Just one breath
Just in case there's just one left
'Cause you know,
you know, you know

[CHORUS]
That I love you
I have loved you all along
And I miss you
Been far away for far too long
I keep dreaming you'll be with me
and you'll never go
Stop breathing if
I don't see you anymore

On my knees, I'll ask
Last chance for one last dance
'Cause with you, I'd withstand
All of hell to hold your hand
I'd give it all
I'd give for us
Give anything but I won't give up
'Cause you know,
you know, you know

[CHORUS]

So far away
Been far away for far too long
So far away
Been far away for far too long
But you know, you know, you know

I wanted
I wanted you to stay
'Cause I needed
I need to hear you say
That I love you
I have loved you all along
And I forgive you
For being away for far too long
So keep breathing
'Cause I'm not leaving
Hold on to me and, never let me go

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Send me your feedback!!!

LettyRocks - October 8, 2006 04:15 AM (GMT)
Cool, great job, keep a postin!

myppe - October 8, 2006 08:02 AM (GMT)
it's really good...hope you update it soon

NIKKI2513 - October 8, 2006 08:51 PM (GMT)
i like this...cant wait for more..need more...lol

shanti07 - October 8, 2006 09:40 PM (GMT)
Well i have to finish up my homework so I figured that I Will post a lil somethin somethin lol....

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*back in LA*

After about 30 minutes of driving Dom and Mia pulled up to the LA Hospital. "Mia, i need you to go in there and get vince so we can leave town now." Dom said with a since of urgency. Giving her older brother the nod, Mia got out of the car and walked into the hospital.

When Mia leaves the car Dom reaches for his cell and dials leon's number. After a couple of rings somebody finally answered.

"Hello?"

"Hey leon, its dom"

"hey dawg are you iight?"

"Yea, me and mia are at the hospital to pick up vince and we will be on our way. Where are you guys?"

"Man you are not goin to believe it dawg. Remember that adress letty always kept just incase of emergencies?"

"Yeah, thats Rashanti's address"

"Well we decided to pop in and she was here."

"you feckin serious?? Gimme the address"

While Leon is giving Dom the address, Mia comes running up to the car with a hobbling vince. Dom has a confused look on his face as they both jump in. "GO GO GO!!" yelled mia. Dom rushed leon off the phone. He then started up the car and sped out of the hospital parking lot before security ran up to the car.

"What the hell was that?" Dom's forhead was wrinkled from his questioning facial expression. " I told them that I was Vinces sister but, they told me that he can't leave the hospital untill the police get there to ask him questions. So we just ran."
Dom looked at vince who was sitting in the back seat with his right form arm wapped up. His left side was also wrapped up from the shotgun shell that grazed his hip earlier. "Hey man, you alright? You need some pain pills or somethin?"

"Nah brother, I got plenty right here. Where's jesse?" Dom's nostrils flared up in anger for having to answer his question. He looked at mia, who was waiting for dom to answer vince. "Vince, Jesse......Jesse's dead." Vince quickly sat up in his seat shock. "MAN THATS BULLSHIT!! I'mma get johnny man I swear!"

"Johnny has already been dealt with, its his that lil cousin of his that i dont know about." After Dom said that Mia quickly looked at him as if he had three heads. "What? Lance is not dead. What if the trans whant to come after us for payback?"

"Look mia the trans aren't doin sh-t! Now sit back and relax." Mia sat back in her seat hoping that her brother was right. She was already having to deal with Jesse's death and she would be completely helpless if anybody else got hurt. When she was looking out the window she realized that just entered mexico. She looked back at dom curiously.

"Where are we going ?" Dom looked at her and handed her a folded piece of paper with the adress that leon gave him earlier.

"To Rashanti's house."

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What will be Letty's action when she seees dom? In Mia right about lance Tran? SOrry if its short but i want to make yall wait :P

Michelle2686 - October 8, 2006 10:56 PM (GMT)
this is good...update soon. lol

shanti07 - October 26, 2006 04:58 AM (GMT)
--Back in Mexico--

Rashanti was laying in her bed trying to get some sleep. After tossing and turning she finally got up and headed to the kitchen. She looked around in the fridge for a blue liquid in a huge bottle that had hypnotic written across it.

While she was pouring some of her favorite beverage in a glass she noticed letty was sitting on the couch watchin "girlfight" (lol). She then thought about how stressed her friend was and decided to pour her glass too. "Can't sleep?" "nah...just got alot on my mind thats all." Shanti hads her the glass " here this will make you feel better. Taste just like kool-aid." Letty chuckled a bit as she took a sip at the sweet alcoholic beverage. She then put the glass down and started to rest her head on her friends lap. "you know when i first move here, I was dispressed like a mug." "really...why."

Shanti took gulped down the rest of her hypnotic. "well for starters I had nobody. nobody to love me , no friends.....no one. So i started to look around the city for a group i could just hang out with. Bad Idea. I started to snort cocaine 24/7 . I overdosed once but luckily one of my crack headed friends were here to take me to the hospital. When I came back home all my stuff was gone. Mother fricker stole my stuff while I was in the hospital recovering." At this point she tears ran down her eyes but kept on talking like she wasnt crying " I almost committed suicide but then I kept thinkin about you guys. The team." Letty rubbed her friend on the shoulder comforting her.

~an hour later~~

Letty was laying on the couch watchin "friday" with Rashanti when she heard an engine pull up in the drive way. She peeked trough the blind and saw Mia getting out of the car. She ran outside barefooted and all. "Letty!!" "Mia!! I'm so glad to see you girl." Letty exchanged hugs with mia and vince. She then walked over to Dom who had Shanti in a huge bear hug. Dom put shanti down and walked over to letty. "come here" he said while grabbing her. Letty started to smile as she kissed dom and realized somebody was missing. " Where's jesse?" "Letty....Jesse didnt make it." "What do you mean he didnt make it dom?" Dom looked at her and let out a huge breath "The trans got to him before we did and....they killed him Let, Jesse's dead." Letty felt like her heart fell into her stomach. "thats bullshit!!! When I seen Johnny Imma feckin kill him."that was alread taken care of. Lets get in the house we all need some sleep. We can talk about this in the morning." With that everybody went inside the house, went to their rooms, and went to sleep."\

Dom woke up in the bed in his boxers with his body wrapped up in a blanket. The smell of food gave him the motivation to get up. He walked into the kitchen and found Leon and Vince watching T.V. Shanti, Letty, and Mia were all at the table talking and laughing.

"Hey letty , remember when mia and me got into a fight and I went into her room and I Sprayed bleach all over her Backstreet boys posters." Letty started to laugh. "Hey Hey, that wasnt funny. I was in love with Nick Carter okay" mia said while taking a bite of her pancake. Dom went over to letty and kissed her on the lips. "Hey babe you hungry?" "yeah hungry for you" he said while nibbling on her neck. Letty laughed at the ticklish feeling. "Hey, tryin to eat dammit" Rashanti said while eating her eggs.

"Take yall nasty asses in the room, i dont wanna see that sh-t." "shut up Shanti your just jealous cuz look what I got" letty said while pointing to dom "jealous of his block head ass..pshhhh yeah right. So Mr. Toretto what are we goin to do while the cops are looking for yall in LA." "Staying in Mexico, I know some of Hector's buddies who got the hook up. He owes some big time cash. Im going to call him up today cuz we all need to get some cars ASAP." Letty got up immediatley and went back to the room. Dom Since she was angry so he followed.

"Baby, whats wrong."
"I dont think you should be calling hector dom"
"Why not Letty? He can help us."
"Yea he can but how do you know that he's not goin to narc on us and tell the cops where we are at? People will do for money Dom. You know hector...that fool be money hungry all the time."
"Letty just trust me on this okay?"
Letty looked at him with her eyebrow up "Okay whatever." she said while walking back out to the kitchen. Dom ignored her and grabbed his cell phone and dialed hector's number.

"Hello?"
"Hey hector this is Dom."
"Hey Dawg where you at? You, letty, vince, and mia are over the news and sh-t."
"We are in Tijuana, Mexico. Remember that money you owe me?"
"yeah what about it?"
" Scratch it , I want 6 cars."
"no prob i call my cuz and tell him to hook you up."
"Iight man thanks."
"no prob dawg...peace"

After Dom hung up the phone. He went into the living room where everybody was watchin TV and talking. "Hey vince, how is your arm feelin." "Im okay brother." "Hey Rashanti how strong is the racing scene over here in Mexico.""sh-t just as strong as it is In LA. Why?"

"Well uhh Hectors cousin is gonna hook us all up with some rides. Whens the next race."
"Tomorrow night."
"Well we should stop by and introduce ourselves if you know what I mean."
Letty got up off the couch and walked over to dom and grabbed his hand. She was mad for calling hector but with all the drama that was going on she needed some time with her man. "Come on, we need to take a shower." Everybody watched as they walked out of the livingroom. "you know damn well they arent goin to take no shower. Hey Leon you wanna run to the store right quick?" "Yeah lets go."

When Dom and letty walked in the room, letty pushed dom on the bed and climbed on top of him nibling his ear. "I thought you said we needed to take a shower." "we havent had sex yet." She said smiling. Dom smiled and began to kiss her passionatley. They spent the next hour making sweet love to each other.

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I wanted to end this chapter with dom and letty. But next there is going to be some very interesting stuff going on so you better watch the next update :P

myppe - October 26, 2006 02:32 PM (GMT)
yay...I love this...

NIKKI2513 - October 26, 2006 06:15 PM (GMT)
i started reading this when you posted it and i didnt even realize you updated until just now and i missed two updates give me some warning next time please :D

great update keep going now dont just stop ;)

~Michelle_Rox~ - October 29, 2006 06:40 PM (GMT)
LOVE IT!!!
Love the Dotty! =) Cant wait for more!

See ya later...... :kick:

bel - October 29, 2006 11:39 PM (GMT)
I just found this story and i'm loving it!

Can't wait to know what happens next.

;) :)

shanti07 - October 30, 2006 12:21 AM (GMT)
I'm glad you all like my story....it just inspires me to write more!!

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After some hot love making, dom and letty lay alseep in the bed. Suddenly dom's ringer goes off on his phone. He was goin to let it ring but he decided to pick it up thinkin it could be hector.

"....hello."
"you guys think you are slick huh?"

Dom immediatley sat up in the bed. "who is this?" "You think you are gonna get away with killing my cousin dom?" Dom immediatley knew who it was. It was Lance Tran. He began to talk in a low tone so that letty or anybody else could here."what the f-ck do you want? and how did you get my number?" "what do i want? revenge!! Dont worry about who gave me your number alright dom? You just worry about little letty and keepin a close eye on her because something is going to happen, when you least expect it." "f-ck you!" Dom immediatley hung up the phone breathing heavily in anger.

"Babe...whats wrong?" he looked to his left and there was letty sitting awake with a look of absolute confusion on her face. "Nothin...just some dumb prick playing on the phone." "Oh...well im about to go in the shower alright?" "alright." Dom pecked her on the lips as she got up and grabbed some clothes. As soon as she went in the bathroom he called leon and told him what happened and not to tell letty, vince, or rashanti. He thought that things would be best if those three didnt know about the altercation. Things were going well and dom wanted it to stay that way. Besides Lance doesnt even know where they are. or so thats what dom thought.

Later that day the group headed over to "Oscars Car lot" They were all standing out on the lot waiting for service. Letty noticed somethin about Dom. He was extra cautious. When they would walk somewhere he was either walking behind her or beside her. Same with Leon. He would also look around alot too. Like somebody is gonna sneak up on them or somethin. Whatever it was, it had her wondering. "Are you Dom?" A short hispanic man said to Dom. "Yeah, you hectors cousin?" "yeah man im oscar." "I'm dom, this is letty, leon, vince, mia , and rashanti. Hector says you could hook us up with some rides." "follow me." They all walked into the garage where six beatiful cars were lined up. Dom smiled and rubbed his hands together while letty looked like she just died and went to heaven.


Letty's car
http://img253.echo.cx/img253/8503/hondas20...aaaaaaaaaaa.jpg


vince's car
http://img200.exs.cx/img200/5908/hondas2000modded8ch.jpg

Mia's car
http://tunerlove.turboblog.fr/tuningcar/im.../hondas2000.jpg


Leon's car
http://www.m.keeber.btinternet.co.uk/Photo...ondas2000_f.jpg


Rashanti's car
http://photos.innersource.com/media/7353/l/Mitsubishi.jpg

Doms car

http://img43.exs.cx/img43/3742/Mitsubishi-...er-GT1Kopie.jpg

"Hey man thanks alot." Dom said while shaking oscars hand. "Anytime man"
Everybody left back to the house with their brand new cars getting ready for tonights race.

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this is just a lil somethin i wanted to add to the last update.

bel - October 30, 2006 04:11 PM (GMT)
Wow shanti07!
This story is getting realy interesting!
Hope nothing bad happens to Letty.

And hey, you even included the pics of the cars (but i can't see Rashanti's car though) :(

Waiting for the next update!


;) :D

myppe - October 30, 2006 06:59 PM (GMT)
I can't see that car either :( :( ...and isn't mia's car the same car as suki has in 2f2f :whistle:...I just love this..I really hope we get the next chapter soon

~Michelle_Rox~ - October 30, 2006 11:55 PM (GMT)
*bows down to the cars* :bow: Absolutly beauliful!!!!!!!!!!! *tear runs down face* Love the story so far. Cant wait for more!!!

See ya later......... :kick:

shanti07 - October 31, 2006 01:21 AM (GMT)
thanks for the comments on my story!! I wasnt sure if anybody liked it, being my first story in all. I fixed the link for rashanti 's car so you can see it now.

bel - October 31, 2006 05:27 PM (GMT)
OMG!!!
I want that car! It's gorgeous. I love it.

Thanks a lot for the link.

;) :D

shanti07 - November 29, 2006 10:13 PM (GMT)
Today I was thinkin about this story and i decided to shut it down and start all over again. Sorry to all of my readers but i just felt like i rushed through this story and it wasnt my best at all........BUT I will be making a new story and it will have a different title and its going to be sooooooo much better. I'm going to start jotting the ideas so i can write the first chapter tomorrow.

Carlos garcia - October 28, 2007 02:31 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (shanti07 @ Oct 7 2006, 04:45 PM)
Title : The Aftermath
Disclaimer: I own no characters from fast and the furious. I just own myself
Summary: After the heist leon and letty hide out in mexico while Dom, Vince and Mia are in L.A. A new member is welcomed into the team. What happened to Brian? Where is Johnny Tran's cousin lance? Will the cops ever catch up to the team? There is only one way to find out .....READ!! B)
Rating - hmm dont know yet but right now PG 13 i guess
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Chapter 1



Letty sat in the passenger seat just wondering. Are things ever going to be the same? Is jessee okay? Will I ever see Dom and Mia again? She looked at Leon who was concentrating on the road before he looked at her bruised face and bloody lip. "Are you okay Let?" Asked leon with a slight of concern in his voice.

"I'm alright, just stop by the gas station so I can get some pain killers for my ribs." She said as she shifted around in her seat trying to get into a comfortable position. Leon noticed her face wincing from the pain. "Nah Let, you need to see a doctor. We should go to the nearest hospital." Letty stop her shifting and looked at Leon like he had three heads. "Dude, there is no way im going to go to a hospital, Especially here in mexico." Leon looked at her with a facial expression that was asking questions.

"Then where letty, where are we supposed to go huh? We cant go back to the house because cops are probably lookin for us. Where are we supposed to go huh? you tell me." Letty looked at leon as he kept driving to an unknown destination. She sat back in her seat with her arms folded across her chest and her right eyebrow lifted trying to think of something. She then reached in the backseat for her jacket. She searched in every pocket untill she found a piece of paper with an address on it. She looked at it for a long second before handing it to leon. "Go here" Leon grab the peice of paper and look at it. He recognized the adress. "Do you think she is still there? I mean its been 1 1/2 years since we last heard from her." Letty thought for a while. Will she be there? after a minute of thinking about it she finally respond "We wont know unless we try".

After 30 minutes Leon parked the black honda into a dirt driveway. When letty and leon got out of the car they looked at the house. It was not to small or not to big. the paint was chipping off and the grass was a mixed dry brown and green. Letty looked at Leon before walking up to the doorstep and knocking on the door. No movement. She then took a breath and knocked again. Nobody answered. She turned around and walked off the step. "She's not here" she said with a little hint of hurt and sadness in her voice. "Alright." leon said while walking to the car.

Just before the two were about to get in the black honda, they heard the door open. Letty turn around quickly to see a 5'10 dark figure standing on the doorstep. The person stood there with a look of amazement on their face. "Letty?....Leon? Is that really you?"

Thank you I like this one... B)




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